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Tarale
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Posted on 04-29-05 04:59 AM Link | Quote
Okay, so it might contain more than traces of catgirl. So it's um, blatant catgirl.

Still, the warning's there so those who are easily offended by catgirls can avoid it or whatever. (Seeing as how there are some people here who don't like them and all).

Now for the pic


Click on it to see it bigger...

And of course the comparison picture between old and new.

The old one was more or less thrown together, not really a "complete" picture as much as it was a colored sketch. I tried to actually make a more polished picture out of it. As with my other redraw, I did soften a lot of lines and make her more feminine and curvy.

I tried a few experimental things here that I'm not sure if I got right, but I like the general effect anyways. I did the coloring as normal, then tried to also do the secondary light source of the light coming off the moon (the yellowish highlights on the character) as well. I like the effect I got, even though I'm not sure if I have it all right, I still think I got it right enough to convey the general idea.

I also did nighttime cloudy things, which I like

The first picture's cuter, but I think I definitely like the second better at the moment
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Heh, I remember the original thread when you posted that art; I just couldn't resist to post a link. And my stupid non-constructive comment is there... oh well, I progressed in that area. Nowdays I know better than just writing "It's CUTE ^___^".

Uhm, why would anyone really be offended by anthropomorphic art? I just can't simple understand why anyone would be? As long it's clean... After all, our culture is flooded with it. Then, we do have the "anti-furries" who just do misery against other people over anything remotely anthropomorphic... (And sorry for that little rant >>; )

Holy shit, even the original was great. This shows what two years drawing will do. I love the colouring and the shading, it's just much better than the original. And that's probably something I will have problems to grasp for years to come... (I can draw decently, but can't colour for shit. I wish I had a scanner so I could play around with my few (crappy) sketches, and I


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Posted on 04-29-05 05:58 AM Link | Quote
I CALL LAYOUT.

Tough luck Kitten Yiffer, I just called it. >.>

This is awesome... ^-^ Look at the progress, you're gettin' better and better!! She definitely looks more grown up and stuff, which is *not* an easy thing to illustrate. Far easier to draw cutesy, not that your original is anything to be scoffed at either. ^-^ Your general skills have improved very much over a short space of time, and they were already good to begin with.

She's very sessy. Needs to be uploaded to your DA account.

And you *can* colour, clearly. Look at those clouds too!! They're wonderful. Very very impressive and pretty.

Don't every apologise for posting a catgirl pic though. If anyone's 'offended' by it they need to get over themselves and get their priorities straight.

I'm so glad you're workin' on your art all the time, it's great, and you're just going to get better.

EDIT: And, just after I type this, it's on your DA account. Whee.


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Posted on 04-29-05 06:00 AM Link | Quote
Looks nice, some of her body parts look abit angular. And no star-tatoo on the ass was a depression
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Posted on 04-29-05 06:19 AM Link | Quote
LOL, I knew I forgot something!

Yeah, I just put it up on DA. I just noticed Chalo's note on my page too, and then I went and took Kate off to put the Catgirl up in the featured spot! Poor Chalo... I'll make it up to him (might draw an adult Kate sometime)

And is anybody else finding deviantART to be a real... fucken... POG ( x between a pig and a dog) right now?

As for your point on people getting uppity about catgirl stuff, I agree Fyxe, but I do still like to put the warning just in case. Plus "May contain traces of catgirl" makes me giggle

It's a pity I don't get the chance to draw more, this pic was done over three nights, in between cooking, cleaning, excercising, commuting, calling my brother a prat, etc.
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Posted on 04-29-05 06:26 AM Link | Quote
*Licks fingertip* Mm, traces of catgirl.

I'm certainly finding the management of DA to be complete asses recently, mainly in relation to BANNING Andrew Dickman temporarily for EVIL FLASH MUSIC VIDEOS OF DOOM and messing with Chalo's pics and making them fanart cos they're Pokemon *influenced*.

Taryn, doing a piece like that in three nights is bloody good, seriously. It would take me a month to do anything like that. O.o''

An adult Kate would be coooolio. Love Kate!! Love your art. Love chibi Kate, love adult Kate more, would adore Taryn art of adult Kate. It's simple maths. ^-^

EDIT: And it's cool that you get comments from the Chalo. Ah, Chalo, he's so insanely nice as well as a great artist.


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Originally posted by Bunny Lord of the Sith
And is anybody else finding deviantART to be a real... fucken... POG ( x between a pig and a dog) right now?
It's always been like that. And I also think that they give more bandwidth to people who pay for an subscribiton. :/

...that's the reason why I don't go there too often and goto other art sites, shame as there is alot of good work there, especially when it's the biggest artsite I know.

I need to look through my unread messages.
Originally posted by Bunny Lord of the Sith
It's a pity I don't get the chance to draw more, this pic was done over three nights, in between cooking, cleaning, excercising, commuting, calling my brother a prat, etc.
...ok, I stop complaing about having lack of time to do any drawing. Now I complain about lack of drawing space instead. ;P (every desktop at home is taken up by computers, and I hate to draw in the kitchen. )

(and as you noticed earlier, I never could make my mind up in that post XD)
Originally posted by Fyxe
I'm certainly finding the management of DA to be complete asses recently, mainly in relation to BANNING Andrew Dickman temporarily for EVIL FLASH MUSIC VIDEOS OF DOOM and messing with Chalo's pics and making them fanart cos they're Pokemon *influenced*.

I heard alot of bad stuff about the managment, such as people getting banned over the most silly things. Such as someone who got a PG rated picture removed, asked about it and got banned permamently... forgot which artist thought. :/

...althought, what category was thoose pictures orginally before they moved to "fanart"? I better check them up, I can understand if there is blurry lines on what is what, but still...


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Tarale
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Well, I put the pictures into "Digital Art > Digital Paintings and Airbrushing > Anthro" and "Anime" respectively.

Hope that's okay?
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Well if it isn't for some reason, it's time to break Godwin's law. *sighs*


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Posted on 04-29-05 12:37 PM Link | Quote
Wee, I just printed this one out at work on the color laser printer and it looks coooooool. Except for the dodgy line in it where the printer needs to be serviced, anyways.

It reminded me though, I sometimes post a working size picture of my work, so here it is, just in case you want to see it at the size I worked on it at. Also the best size if you want to print it, probably
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*Kawahless the Forgettable drools... swallows... and starts chanting "more, more, more".
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Posted on 04-29-05 05:08 PM Link | Quote
Originally posted by Fyxe
I CALL LAYOUT.

Tough luck Kitten Yiffer, I just called it. >.>


*Kicks Fyxe*

Give us a chance.

This pic is frickin' amazing. The shading are great, the background is beautiful, etc.

And I remember the old pic too. "An adult Kate would be coooolio. Love Kate!! Love your art. Love chibi Kate, love adult Kate more, would adore Taryn art of adult Kate. It's simple maths."

You don
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Alrighty ... first of all, great picture. In comparing the original pic with the revamped one, it shows great improvement and a small change in style. The anatomy, composition, coloring, and just the overall look has improved.

However ...

It's time for a small bit of constructive criticism. *dun dun dun*

Well, from what I can tell, your catgirl *shudders* is supposed to be sitting on the moon ... correct?

Well, if it is, it doesn't really look like it. Instead, it looks like she's just in front of the moon. *shot*

Well, to fix it, you ought to put part of the visible, umm, cheek on the moon. If you do that, you'd also have to change a few things. Mainlyl, there would be pressure on her rear, obviously, and you'd have to form her clothes to her body and work with bends and folds. Of course, that's tedious work.

There, that's it. Other than that, it's sweet.

...

*gets chased around by a mob*


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Posted on 04-30-05 10:55 PM Link | Quote
Originally posted by Tedd-Ewok
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WITH PITCHFORKS AND TORCHES OH MY


But yeah, what he said -- some of the parts (namely the area by the kneecap) could use a slight roundation to them, but other than that, very nice.
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Posted on 05-04-05 04:25 AM Link | Quote
Took a long time for you to finish... but DAMN that's amazing

Edit Damnit. I thought that horrid smiley was replaced with . :\


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Posted on 05-04-05 04:34 AM Link | Quote
Y'know, I think I remember the original.

*reads old thread*

Yup. Yet another thread I killed by posting in it. =/ It was good before, and you managed to improve it now. Excellent work, as always. However, it looks like she's not on the moon at all, she's just... floating htere. Was that intentional?


... now let's hope this thread doesn't die like the old one did after my post.
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Posted on 05-04-05 06:35 AM Link | Quote
I so love the night sky background. It is very pretty and the catgirl is pretty too.
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Originally posted by Tedd-Ewok
Alrighty ... first of all, great picture. In comparing the original pic with the revamped one, it shows great improvement and a small change in style. The anatomy, composition, coloring, and just the overall look has improved.

However ...

It's time for a small bit of constructive criticism. *dun dun dun*

Well, from what I can tell, your catgirl *shudders* is supposed to be sitting on the moon ... correct?

Well, if it is, it doesn't really look like it. Instead, it looks like she's just in front of the moon. *shot*

Well, to fix it, you ought to put part of the visible, umm, cheek on the moon. If you do that, you'd also have to change a few things. Mainlyl, there would be pressure on her rear, obviously, and you'd have to form her clothes to her body and work with bends and folds. Of course, that's tedious work.

There, that's it. Other than that, it's sweet.

...

*gets chased around by a mob*


Well, I'm going to comment on the moon thing.

It's not so much that she's sitting on the moon but more that she's um.. superimposed on the moon.

I made absolutely zero effort to have her actually sit on the moon in the original, and I stuck with that artistic laziness in the second one.

Sure, I COULD'VE put her arse on the moon and folder her skirt under her arse between arse and moon and put arsedents in her arse, but I didn't wanna, so I didn't.
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Posted on 05-04-05 07:08 PM Link | Quote
Wtf? The picture is broken now. You took it down?

Because I can
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Posted on 05-05-05 05:32 AM Link | Quote
arsedent = dent in arse caused by sitting on the edge of a harder object.

As for chibitaryn.net, it's up and down an awful lot at the moment, I'll be pulling the whole site from my hosting soon I think.
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