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Posted on 03-26-04 06:28 AM Link | Quote
I dont care who joins you can make characters up on the spot don't care but no like going crazy oh and set plot.

This story will include my character's history.

Dark Pheonix started at the begining of time, but he didn't know what he was. He had no form and no abilitie to think. After countless years the dark flames ended up on earth, but the dark flames were uncontrollable and claimed many lives. Soon a Wizard sacrificed himself to bring form and thought to the flames.

After a while of wandereing and seeing how humans saw because he was a human now. Soon though the flames consumed him and he bcame a pheonix. He could die but he would always come back no matter what. Dark Pheonix tried to look for an opponet strong enough to completely kill him but no one could do it.

Now years later he has began to wander again in search of someone that can give him death.

"I has been a while since i have seen an opponet that even matched my skills.' Dark Pheonix said as he sat cooking his food over a fire he had just started.

OOC If anyone wants to join go ahead start off with meeting Dark Pheonix o a quick history up to that point you can join him or fight him.


ERRR someone please delete since I suck at making stories apperantly.


(edited by Ninjitetsu on 03-27-04 04:26 PM)
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OOC Hey man, you don't suck one bit at stories. I thougt it was a great beginning.

"Dark Pheonix," someone called to him psychically. "Dark Pheonix, you are in agony. You are an immortal that doesn't wish to be. I can tell you what to do.

"Immortality is a power that all evil minds want, as they only wish to manipulate the world to their wants. But pure hearts never die no matter if they're immortal or not. Pure hearts are content with mortality, so if one becomes immortal he is not content.

"My name is Schwa. I am a psi warrior who believes in virtue, respect and honor. Since you are an immortal, believing in these assets will give you sense and direction to your life. Maybe one day, your wish will be granted. But you can't accomplish it by asking another to commit murder, even if it doesn't work. You must trust your heart and your future to help set the path, and trust yourself to follow that path... no matter what lies in that path."
The voice fades out, leaving a dazzled Dark Pheonix to wonder what he meant.
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OOC thank you just no one posted in a3 or 4 days so i gave up on it, but now that someone is going to join.

Dark Pheonix looks around for whoever said that.

He then says aloud, "Your right immortality isn't very fun. I am assuming that you know how to get rid of immortality. I have tried everything that could be done, but death can never come."

Dark Pheonix's food finishs cooking and he sits down and eats a little less than half of what he cooked.

"You can join me and eat if you want."
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"No thanks, that won't be necessary," the voice responds. "I just wished to help you back on the path of confidence. See ya later..." The presence in Dark Pheonix's mind fades away.
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"Wait if you can speak to my mind, then you must be somewhat powerful. Maybe I should find you."

Dark Pheonix's wings flare and make it look like a second sun. Dark Pheonix flys off to another challenge this time for fun not to escape death.
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Dark Pheonix sees something in the distance... moving very fast. It looks like a human riding a crystal disc, in a suit of futuristic armor. The voice speaks to the pheonix once more.

"This way, Dark Pheonix."
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Dark Pheonix hears the voice and flys as fast as he can to catch. Before long he looks like a comet with plenty of light flying from it.

"I'm comming so don't worry."

Dark Pheonix held his spear out and became a streak in the sky.
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The figure takes off into the sky, gaining altitude. Suddenly he becomes cloaked in blue spirit-flames. "I'm headed to the Crystal Psipalace in the secret airgrove. There you can meet my sensae. He can give you knowledge greater than my own." Schwa then starts moving VERY fast, and in zigzags. "But you have to be worthy enough to keep up with me on the way!"
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"No problem."

Dark Pheonix starts to increase his speed, then at the high speed he throws his spear towards the figure. The spear looks like it blinks out of the sky with the high speed, but it seemsto be getting really close to the figure. Dark Pheonix was still flying at a little slower rate chanting.
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Suddenly, Schwa disappears behind the clouds! What lies behind the clouds is extremely bright, and rays of white light are streaming from out of the clouds. Then the clouds part, once Dark Pheonix gets close enough, revealing a beautiful sanctuary of blue crystal. Floating right above the structure is an orb of blue light almost as bright as the sun itself. That makes the crystal fortress glimmer like an enchanted sword. The figure flies into a launch bay on the left side.

There are more figures flying nearby on crystal discs. Some of them are very interested in Dark Pheonix. One figure, protected by a futuristic armor suit, flies over and lines up next to him and flies along-side. "Howdy," the figure says psychically to Pheonix. It's a girl. "Schwa told us you were coming. I'm Allaura. What do you reckon about this place? Interesting at all?"
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The spear flew back to Dark Pheonix's hand, he had really wan't to teleport to make things faster, but since he was closer then he thought it didn't matter.

"Please talk out loud it is easier. I do have something to ask though, even though I have been around for a long time I have never heard of or seen this place?"

Dark Pheonix looked around as he saw what he could only describe as amazing. His wings lost a lot of their light as he calmed down. He finally turned to look at the girl and this time spoke directly to her.

"Where is Schwa? I followed him here, but then he disappeared."
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The girl points to the airstrip to the left of the fortress-like palace. "There's the place where Schwa fled. Like it? This is Crystal Psipalace. It was designed to prevent anyone from finding the place on accident. Ain't it a beauty?" The girl pauses to zigzag her flight pattern a bit. She then zips toward the airstrip, and calls back, "Come on, y'all! You can learn a lot from the magi inside."
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"Magic is a power I used to know a lot about, to bad I never needed it or I wouldn't have forgot it."

Dark Pheonix followed the girl to the air strip while looking at the castle, the beauty wasted on him. It is true he had never seen a place like it, but he had seen castles bigger, all evil, but still bigger. Dark Pheonix landed on the air strip and looked around.

"So where is Schwa?"
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Dark Pheonix sees a hallway leading out from the airstrip. The walls are blue and rough, and look like polished marble. Schwa is nowhere in sight, but the girl is. She landed and took off her armor. She has long, red hair in a ponytail, freckles, a purple shirt and smooth, black pants. She speaks again, but not telepathically. "I reckon Schwa has gone down that hall to speak to his sensae. Go ahead and explore; after all, anyone who makes it to the palace are welcome." She winks, and walks down the hall.
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Dark Pheonix follows the girl, who he now thinks is Irish. He barely looks at the sides of the room everything of beauty wasted on him.

"Please hurry, I never developed much patience."

Dark Pheonix holds his spear as if he could be attacked at any moment. He just walks not even as if he has no idea where anything is whatching for Schwa.
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Suddenly Dark Pheonix hears a voice in his head; the girl. "I'm southern, not Irish!" She keeps walking, then turns around and smiles at the surprised Pheonix. "Surprised? Psi warriors can tap into the minds of most folks. That means I knew what you were thinking." She continues down the hall. "Schwa is probably at the central hall, where Rui'Kan, his sensae, trains him. He probably told him you were coming. Just follow your mind's eye to find him." With that, she wavers and disappears, leaving only a few sparks behind.
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"I really wish I knew about these people before, so I could have learned a way to keep them out of my mind."

Dark Pheonix just wanders down the hall making hs own light as he thinks he knows where he is going. Finally he finds the central hall.

"So where are you Schwa?"

Dark Pheonix makes himself noticeable by making his wings go very bright.
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There are a lot of old people in the central hall. Each one smiles at Dark Pheonix as he walks in. One man, the oldest one, walks slowly toward the Pheonix. He has grey hair, a grey beard, and a wise face. "Dark Pheonix," he says joyously. "I've expected you. I can tell you are looking for the one called Schwa. I welcome you with all my heart for coming to visit us in the palace. But I must tell you, Schwa is not what you are truly looking for." The old man smiles. By now he has walked all the way to Dark Pheonix.
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Posted on 06-05-04 12:51 AM Link | Quote
"If you think that then so be it, but your face doesn't full me. You see I am probably older than you all. Now just tell me where Schwa is."

Dark Pheonix lets his wings stop flaring, and looks around the room and then back at the old man. He then thinks about the plus of never dieing. As the abillity that you never grow old.
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"Where do you believe Schwa is? Come now, the answer is right in front of you." The old man smiles again. Pheonix wonders why he doesn't just give straight answers.
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