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Nebetsu Shmee Level: 55 Posts: 710/1574 EXP: 1291130 For next: 23059 Since: 09-01-04 From: Nebland Since last post: 3 hours Last activity: 1 hour |
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| I say we should have a poetry corner. I'll start: You're on the hunt to face your fate You're on the hunt to eat the plate And as the porcelain shards cut their way down, you think, "Man that's good!" And as your insides BLEED and the darkness FEEDS, you wonder what things could be... WHAT THINGS COULD BE! POST YOUR POETRY! |
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Shadic Cukeman Level: 27  Posts: 178/304 EXP: 111073 For next: 5086 Since: 08-20-04 From: Somewhere, Over the Rainbow! Since last post: 9 days Last activity: 2 hours |
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| *Laughs* *Still thinks it's odd, after reading it first from you sending me it on AIM* |
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Nebetsu Shmee Level: 55 Posts: 715/1574 EXP: 1291130 For next: 23059 Since: 09-01-04 From: Nebland Since last post: 3 hours Last activity: 1 hour |
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Originally posted by Shadic You got any poetry you can post? |
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Dracoon Zelda The temp ban/forum ban bypasser! Level: 84  Posts: 2115/3727 EXP: 5514391 For next: 147561 Since: 03-25-04 From: At home Since last post: 5 hours Last activity: 5 hours |
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| I can't really do poetry, but I can comment on it... That is a wierd poem, it just seems a little... cleche'd... |
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Nebetsu Shmee Level: 55 Posts: 716/1574 EXP: 1291130 For next: 23059 Since: 09-01-04 From: Nebland Since last post: 3 hours Last activity: 1 hour |
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Originally posted by Dracoon I really like the line: And as the porcelain shards cut their way down, you think, "Man that's good!" I might even just take that and try to add more to that. |
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Kario In Possession of a Stolen Shovel Level: 65 Posts: 1060/2082 EXP: 2321379 For next: 14249 Since: 03-15-04 From: Texas... Yeehaw! Since last post: 2 days Last activity: 17 hours |
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| Here is one that will fit amongst the randomness.... Air, you are so wonderful You give life to me Were it not for sweet sweet air I'd die instantaneously In my mouth and nose you go Down into my lungs Distributed to arms and legs So I can wave and run Air you are so magical You're everywhere I go I may never see you Except for when it's cold You give life to plants and things You'll always be around Until our Ozone layer's gone And life comes tumbling down |
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Nebetsu Shmee Level: 55 Posts: 718/1574 EXP: 1291130 For next: 23059 Since: 09-01-04 From: Nebland Since last post: 3 hours Last activity: 1 hour |
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| lol Kario. That was cute. I kinda forgot that poems can be about simple things too. | |||
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Shadic Cukeman Level: 27 Posts: 181/304 EXP: 111073 For next: 5086 Since: 08-20-04 From: Somewhere, Over the Rainbow! Since last post: 9 days Last activity: 2 hours |
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| Let me try... "My Pillow," by Shadic. Oh, my pillow. It is so cool. It make me go wow And yet it is covered in drool. It's embroidered like a cow. It lets me go to sleep everynight and it supports my head It is also very light And yet it completes my bed. Heh, okay, that was made up on the spot. ^.^ And no, my pillow doesn't have cow prints on it, it just rhymed. |
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Cymoro PATRICK DUFFY WILL LASER YOUR SOUL   Level: 67  Posts: 1539/2216 EXP: 2549743 For next: 43129 Since: 03-15-04 From: Cymoro Gaming Since last post: 6 hours Last activity: 4 hours |
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OOH OOH I GOTS ON  sad angts i cut my self the pain, the pain ow it hurts i cut myself again ow ow ow ow ow that was stupid why the hell did I do that this is going in my livejournal Thank you, everyone =D (edited by Cymoro on 12-30-04 11:16 AM) (edited by Cymoro on 12-30-04 11:16 AM) |
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Jesper Busy, busy, busy. Level: 69  Posts: 1463/2390 EXP: 2856000 For next: 13743 Since: 03-15-04 From: Sweden. Since last post: 176 days Last activity: 79 days |
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| Great, Cymoro. Now do this: http://maddox.xmission.com/cam_whore.html Condensed to four limericks, before end of 2004. STAT! |
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Nebetsu Shmee Level: 55 Posts: 719/1574 EXP: 1291130 For next: 23059 Since: 09-01-04 From: Nebland Since last post: 3 hours Last activity: 1 hour |
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Originally posted by Cymoro How about that stupid deadjournal or whatever it's called? |
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jasukan Panser Level: 30 Posts: 250/344 EXP: 155950 For next: 9919 Since: 03-15-04 Since last post: 135 days Last activity: 62 days |
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Refrigerator, O Refrigerator what would i do without you? you keep my sodas nice and cold my pizza nice and fresh I smile at you with glee as I prance across the kitchen floor I love you for who you are on the inside Refrigerator, O Refrigerator what would i do without you? (edited by jasukan on 01-01-05 09:34 PM) (edited by jasukan on 01-01-05 09:34 PM) |
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KATW King Yoshi "If you stare at something long enough, it can be funny." Level: 86  Posts: 2318/3959 EXP: 6087979 For next: 54128 Since: 03-15-04 Since last post: 7 hours Last activity: 5 hours |
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| Being the fact that I just rented (and beat) Metroid Prime... Here is a poem about metroids . Metroids, Metroids, What am I going to do. Shall I use ice and missiles, Wait! A power bomb for you! These annoying little creatures, Like to latch on to your head. They appear to be so harmless, And yet they will make you dead. They always go after anything, That moves in their line of sight. They emit their high-pitched squeal, And rush after you in delight. So now that they're after me, I think its time to run. Before they latch on my head, And my game is done  .I cant believe I wrote that... in under 5 verses. (I have a habit of rambling a bit  )(edited by Kirby ATW on 01-02-05 03:52 PM) |
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Nebetsu Shmee Level: 55 Posts: 741/1574 EXP: 1291130 For next: 23059 Since: 09-01-04 From: Nebland Since last post: 3 hours Last activity: 1 hour |
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| lol those are some very interesting poems ^^ | |||
Xtreme984 Koopa Level: 18  Posts: 95/111 EXP: 25164 For next: 4733 Since: 07-27-04 Since last post: 116 days Last activity: 58 days |
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| v is this poetry too? Why live in your nightmares? When you can die peacefully in your dreams. |
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Rain Man Buzzy Beetle Level: 31 Posts: 275/378 EXP: 175079 For next: 10284 Since: 04-14-04 Since last post: 5 days Last activity: 16 hours |
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I dont like poetry. It really bothers me. Naw, im not much of a poet myself. |
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Kefka Indefinitely Unbanned Level: 81 Posts: 2417/3392 EXP: 4826208 For next: 166641 Since: 03-15-04 From: Pomona, CALIFORNIA BABY! Since last post: 4 hours Last activity: 4 hours |
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Originally posted by Xtreme984 Yes. Duh. I've seen published ones even shorter than that. I'll have to dig some of mine up. I have a bunch around my messy room somewhere... probably half a year dated... |
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