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Posted on 03-06-05 06:43 AM Link | Quote
Melvin was following behind Kirbynite, mulling over some random thoughts.

Melvin: Metal things with one eye and yo-yos...
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Posted on 03-06-05 08:15 AM Link | Quote
Jack: Oh, right, I forgot you weren't here when we were attacked by gims earlier. Well, modified gims calling themselves X-Naughts, but still gims.
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CHAPTER 2
Boggly Tree Monogatari

The scene slowly opens up to reveal a vast, beautifully monochromatic forest. Kirby shields his eyes as his vision adjusts to the black and white world.

Kirby: Holy cucco.

The trees, the rocks, the flowers, even the sky, were in shades of black, white, and grey.

Kirby: Did someone forget to spread the technicolor when they were creating this land?
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Posted on 03-06-05 08:56 AM Link | Quote
Melvin blinked.

Melvin: That's... different. Wow.
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Posted on 03-06-05 09:02 AM Link | Quote
Meanwhile, following not too far behind Kirb and his crew, the red and yellow creature sniveling and examining what is happening before his eyes.

Waddle Dee: Damnit, it seems that Kirb doesn't get in a lot of fights for being a heroic type and such... Oh well, I'll keep watching. He's bound to get in a fight soon, and when he does, I'll be there to see how to overcome you and your poss
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Posted on 03-07-05 08:48 AM Link | Quote
((Nice effort there, Melvin ))

Kirby strolls down a path, most notably worn from creatures using it often. The spikey headed lad looks down as he begins to remember about Schala. He turns around, ready to badger Punio, when he feels a vibrating inside his jacket pocket. He reaches inside and pulls out a strange device, with "PET" labeled on the side.

Kirby: What's up?

MegaMan.EXE: Uh.. You've got mail.

Kirby: .. Since when do I get email in the middle of a story?

MegaMan.EXE: Since now.

"I regret to inform you that I have been captured.. But please do not worry! They have not harmed me. I think they're looking for the treasure as well. Go and get the treasure before them. Er.. uh.. Please be extra careful, and do not worry about me! Love, Schala"

Kirby: *reads* ... WHAT?! BASTARDS! *growls* I bet those stupid robots are behind this. *clenches fist* Come on, people, MOVE IT!

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Just down the path, a trio of women were conversing with each other. One was wearing a kimono, another garbed in a ninja outfit, and the third was wearing a black top with loose pants.

The elder woman wearing the kimono cackled


"Eeee heheheheee.... It's time to get to work. Vivian, do you understand what you are supposed to do?"

The long haired girl in the black top looked up at Beldam, with a slight bit of confusion in her voice.

"I'm supposed to find... Kirby.. And... uh.. the others.. then steal the map that finds the Star thingies, right? But, how will we find them?"
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Melvin scratched his chin as he looked over Kirby's shoulder.

Melvin: You realize, of course, that e-mail could have been sent by anyone.

He furrowed his brow behind his glasses.

Melvin: We need to be extra cautious... Those X-Nauts may very well be setting us up for a fall.
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Posted on 03-09-05 10:55 AM Link | Quote
Kirby: No way! How else would she have known my email? C'mon on, let's get moving.

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"If the information is correct, they should come walking right down this path. So wait here...... Vivian, what is that you are holding?"

"Uh..."

Vivian's long hair swayed as she quickly hid her right hand. Beldam continued to glare at Vivian until the girl reluctantly held up a shining object.

"It's.. it's a pendant... I've never seen such.. It was so nice I had to.."

"Ugh.. Such a simple minded fool. Whatever. Get out the portrait of the one holding the map."

"... Huh?"

"Did I stutter?"

"I don't have it.... It was supposed to be important so you held onto it..."

"Idiot. I clearly told you to hold onto it."

The elderly kunoichi vanished and reappeared behind Vivian. The long haired girl soon realized that she wasn't holding onto her pendant anymore.

"Hey!"

"It was your job to bring the picture, you stupid child."

The rather... large ninja noticed a group walking towards them. Marilyn makes a grunting noise and points.

"What is it, Marilyn?"

"Buh!"

"Huh? What about that pineapple headed man? Ugh, they do not concern us. Now, Vivian... the picture..."

"I told you, I don't have it!"

"I can't believe you. I'll just have to take your new prized possession. Maybe you'll think in the future."

"Bigeu...You're so mean."
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Melvin gave Kirby a slap on the back of his head.

Melvin: Idiot! More people have your e-mail address than you could possibly count! Don't forget that the Underground Fans network is still keeping tabs on you, and the information could thus easily be garnered from a fanzine or an unsavory member who happened to be down on his luck and in need of cash...

He shrugged helplessly.

Melvin: That and "Kirbynite@Yahoo.com" isn't exactly the most innovative e-mail address, to say the least.
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Vivian quickly shot a look over at the group.

Beldam: Are you listening to me, Vivian?

Vivian: I.. uh..

Kirby: *rubs head* ... Yeah... well.. meh, I say.

Kirby stepped past the trio of kunoichi, quickly eyeing the only pretty one. He thought to himself how weird it was for three ninja to be standing in the middle of a black and white forest. His thoughts dissipitated as he passed by Vivian and was no longer able to look casually.

Beldam: ... What's this? What do you know? I had the picture inside my sleeve...

Vivian and Marilyn immediately face faults.
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Meanwhile, back at the warp pipe in the greyscaled forest, a grappling hook is seen on the edge of the pipe. Slowly, that dang Waddle Dee coming crawling out of the pipe, exhausted from all the work.

Waddle Dee: Man, how do they do that "Doodoodoo" thing? I hope these fools don't plan out going into anymore pipes that go do all that...

He jumps over the rim of the pipe, landing on the... black and white ground of the forest. His left foot seems to have some bandages around it, but it doesn't seem to be in bad shape. Without even noticing the surroundings, he removes his hat and snatches the grappling hook, shoving it in his little cap of tools and tricks. He plops the cap back on his head, and that's when he notices that the place is... missing... color.

Waddle Dee: Errr, what the... heck? This is the freakiest forest I've ever seen. Wait, that warp pipe could have warped me in another dimension... That means... I could be lost in this dimension forever! NO! That means I CAN'T GET MY REVENGE ON THAT SAP, KIRBY! Or even worse, I won't be able to see MY DAD AGAIN!!

In all his panic he was about to jump back into the warp pipe and go through all that mess again, but he hears some face faulting noise followed by a rather small tremor (Marilyn IS kinda big, you know...), stopping his act of desperation. He slowly turns to where the sound cam from and sees a cluster of people, further down the path. He squints a little bit, and sees those spikes that Kirby has for a hairdo.

Waddle Dee: Wait, I'm overreacting here. That's Kirb and his friends! And some random people I don't know... Well, at least I know I'm not lost in some otherworldy dimension forest were color doesn't exist... How silly of me, but it seems that those random people look a little adversarial to Kirb. I mean, what the heck would ninjas be doing in a weird ass place like this!?

Slowly, he sneaks up, planning to get closer to his prey and hopefully witnessing a big ol' fight...
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Beldam: This is your fault, Vivian.

Vivian: What?! But but...

Beldam: Now, my lovelies, let's take a look...

The elder kunoichi holds up the picture of the map bearer.

Beldam: Ooh.. He's quite handsome...

Vivian: ....

Beldam, Marilyn, Vivian: !

Beldam: It's him!

All of a sudden, a kunai flies by Kirby, slicing a bit of his cheek as well as some stubble.

Kirby: Gack! What the hell?

Beldam: You there! Hand over the map and the Star Stone you have.

Kirby: Wh-wha?

Beldam: *eyes Kirby suspiciously* We bear no ill towards you. We just want--

Kirby: Hey! You're the jerks who kidnapped Schala!

Vivian's eyes opened wide, while Marilyn let out a "duh..". Beldam folded her arms and glared at Kirby.

Beldam: He's no more of an idiot than you are, Vivian.

Kirby: Who the hell are you people? And where is Schala?

Beldam: We never kidnapped someone by that name. And our individual names aren't important, because together, we are the Three...

Marilyn: *claps hands several times* Shinobi!

Vivian: *holds out hand in air* Lovelies!

Kirby: ... Three Shinobi Lovelies? *dull look* I only see one that'd fit the last two words..

Beldam: *smacks Vivian* Vivian, you idiot. It's the Three Shinobi Sirens. Where did you get that idea from?

Vivian: *rubs head* Well.. you keep calling us your lovelies..

Beldam: Idiot! *stomps foot* It's just a saying, okay?


(edited by Kirbynite on 03-10-05 11:52 PM)
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Fem: You aren't exactly "sirens" either.
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About ten feet away, hiding behind a anti-colored tree, he peers closer into the now rather tense battle. After a few minutes of yelling, that red and yellow creature notices that Kirby was screaming about this... Schala. He slowly takes out a notepad and jots down Schala and Kirby's suspectibility to sharp objects being aimed at the face

Waddle Dee: Hmmm, why is that name... familar at all? But all this hubbub from Kirby is... giving me a new idea to REALLY get his attention when we cross paths again, hehe...he...

Suddenly, the Waddle Dee actually notices the most attractive of the three Sirens and seems to get a little... starry-eyed.

Waddle Dee: Wow, man... if the... bad guys are going to get this pretty, I think that I should try to be a little evil more often.

After gawking at the beautiful Shinobi maiden for a couple of minutes, he shakes himself off of his hypnotic state and starts to watch... and learn

Waddle Dee: Hehe, let this battle begin! Whoops, was I too loud there?
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Kirby: *scratches chin* Well, the one being hassled by that *shudders* hag might fit that title, but the other two..

Beldam's crooked smile flipped into a teeth-grinding grimace. She could stand no more insult from the insolent people.

Beldam: So be it!

Quickly performing a few concealed hand movements, the elder kunoichi waved both of her hands away from her and towards the heros. A rush of snow and ice spewed from her kimono's sleeves, crystalizing all the nearby patches of gray grass.

Kirby immediately lunged to his right, and recovered to his feet by performing a roll.


Kirby: Oh great, another fight.

Marilyn: Guh!

The pudgey ninja sends off random sparks of lightning as she unintelligently clapped her hands.


(edited by Kirbynite on 03-13-05 12:11 AM)
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While Kirbynite is busy fighting the two kunoichi, Melvin is standing over by Vivian, leaning up gainst the tree next to her with one hand, while flexing with the other.

Melvin: You know, I'm a ninja, too. Wanna go out for coffee or something later?
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Vivian blushed furiously, but her redness was hidden by the veil covering the lower havlf off her face. However, she remembered she was supposd to be helping out her fellow ninja. The brunette hopped backwards, and quickly performed a few hand movements. She slightly pulled down the veil, and breathed out an enourmouse spout of flame towards Melvin.

Meanwhile, Marilyn kept on making her goofy noises. The lightning shooting out of her hands didn't really do much but spark out a few feet from her.


Kirby: Kinda.. useless for a ninja.. aren't you?

Beldam: Show the fool what you are capable of, Marilyn.

Marilyn: Buh!

Rearing her hands behind her, the pudgey ninja brought her palms and let out a ear splitting thunder clap. Several bolts of lightning struck the forest ground, tearing up the grayed ground. Kirby tried to jump away from the bolts, but he was still tripped up by the torn ground.

Kirby: Oof!

The spikey headed lad gave the ground a loud smack.

Kirby: Owie


(edited by Kirbynite on 03-13-05 12:11 AM)
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Piki: Ugh! We don't have time for this!

Jack: You two go ahead, we'll catch up!

Punio: You sure?

Jack: We'll be fine, just go.

And so, the punies left...

Fem: Wonder time powers- activate! *waves hand above her, sending the bolts of lightning that had not yet hit the ground back towards the sky, moving in the exact same archs they did on their way down... as if someone had hit the rewind button on them* Sweeeet.
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Vivian did a complete double-take, when she discovered that Melvin was completely gone. She looked to the left, and to the right, then leapt forward and swiveled around, but did not find him anywhere.

A dark shape dropped behind her, and she leapt around yet again, breathing another spout of fire - and torching a poor, innocent leaf that had fallen from the forest canopy. At that instant, a bright green blade sprang up in front of her neck, crackling and fizzling. An unknown arm wrapped around her veil and her mouth, and she could feel just a touch of the heat from the blade on her neck. A pair of circular glasses glinted in the darkness behind her, and she could feel someone's quiet, soft breaths on the back of her neck.


Melvin: I told you I was a ninja.
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Melvin soon realized that he was holding onto a gray log.

Vivian: Keep away, you pervert!

Vivian chucked a tiny bomb at Melvin from a three branch above.

Wooden sandles clicked towards Fem at an alarming speed. Beldam lunged at the dark winged girl, holding out her right hand, firmly grasping a kunai. Before the hag had a change to swipe at Fem, she was punted into some nearby bushes. Kirby stood behind Fem with his left leg up in the air. He was panting pretty hard.


Kirby: Oh.... Man... I still... have the speed my old..... *wheeze* Guild taught me...


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