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| Acmlm's Board - I2 Archive - Modern Art - Magic: The Gathering - Jarukoth Edition |
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Jarukoth  IRRATIONAL EXUBERENCE!!1! Level: 79  Posts: 1388/3194 EXP: 4402011 For next: 177456 Since: 03-17-04 From: New Jersey, U.S.A. Shoes: Yes. Since last post: 8 days Last activity: 1 day |
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| Yup. I am currently working on my own expansion set for Magic. I know it's not much of a new game, but I figured this would be as good a place as any to give you guys a sneak peek at what I'm working on... Bananaphone Water Zombie Ugoff T-Virus Recon Work The Pit Konoha Ninja and finally...Gaara. That should give you the general idea of what direction I am going in. Keep in mind, that the set is still in "Beta", and is unfinished. I''m to about 72 as of this post, and I'll post the entire cardlist here once it is finished (and I find a way to pull it off...). |
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Sokarhacd Ball and Chain Trooper Resistance is Futile You Will Be Assimilated Hab SoSlI' Quch Level: 61  Posts: 307/1757 EXP: 1799888 For next: 76708 Since: 03-15-04 Since last post: 6 days Last activity: 4 hours |
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| I dont play the game, but i like those cards, they are pretty cool. I like the T-Virus, Bananaphone, and the Recon work cards the most. | |||
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Cymoro PATRICK DUFFY WILL LASER YOUR SOUL   Level: 67  Posts: 910/2216 EXP: 2549743 For next: 43129 Since: 03-15-04 From: Cymoro Gaming Since last post: 6 hours Last activity: 4 hours |
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| 2 problems. 1) You're using that damned 8th edition layout. Stop that. 2) Enchantments don't tap. Try adding "This can only be done once until your next untap phase". Other than that, Ugoff like it. Now make the pouch. Pouch. By Ugoff. (edited by Cymoro on 07-16-04 09:45 PM) |
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Tempest Paratroopa Level: 21  Posts: 74/154 EXP: 42711 For next: 7232 Since: 06-21-04 From: Stuck somewhere between Canada and Scotland. Since last post: 410 days Last activity: 339 days |
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I don't play the game anymore...but those cards look quite proffessional...well done |
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Silvey Rope Level: 18  Posts: 79/106 EXP: 24970 For next: 4927 Since: 05-28-04 From: Nottinghamshire Since last post: 314 days Last activity: 7 days |
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They look nice  Good ideas and stuff, for what the cards do, putting aside the enchantment problem Cymoro mentioned.I like the Rikku one, because she rocks  (edited by Silvey on 07-17-04 07:21 PM) |
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Jarukoth IRRATIONAL EXUBERENCE!!1! Level: 79 Posts: 1392/3194 EXP: 4402011 For next: 177456 Since: 03-17-04 From: New Jersey, U.S.A. Shoes: Yes. Since last post: 8 days Last activity: 1 day |
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| Round 2! Unorthodox Teamwork Sharingan The Redeemer Focused Rage Monster Garage Also, I would appreciate some more constructive criticism from people who play the game, since I am pretty sure that some of these are broken in some way... Oh, and Cy, I would switch to the classic style, but I can't get the top text to look just right, and I have made ALL of the 70-something cards in this format so far.  EDIT: Added for Silvey (edited by Jarukoth on 07-17-04 04:19 PM) |
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Silvey Rope Level: 18 Posts: 80/106 EXP: 24970 For next: 4927 Since: 05-28-04 From: Nottinghamshire Since last post: 314 days Last activity: 7 days |
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Ooh yay  Rikku is the best FF girl, she'd kick Yuffie's ass anyday.. *ahem*Anyway.. Those look good too. I'd give more constructive criticism, but I haven't played Magic for quite a while, so I've forgotten everything, heh :/ (edited by Silvey on 07-17-04 07:21 PM) |
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Valcion YOU WA SHOCK Level: 50  Posts: 357/1139 EXP: 939607 For next: 7710 Since: 03-15-04 From: internets. Since last post: 3 hours Last activity: 2 hours |
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| Only problem i see is that redeemer should be an artifcat. it should say "equipped creature has: when this creature deals damage to a player, destroy all creatures except for the equipped creature" and it should have an equip cost of at least half the casting cost, if not more. |
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Dylan Devil Trumpets and Angel Trombones ~ Level: 54  Posts: 295/1407 EXP: 1181697 For next: 52173 Since: 06-19-04 From: Ottawa, Canada. Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 6 hours |
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| Those are very well done, I like Bananaphone . There is one problem, however. Focused Rage is all wrong. It needs to be Uma . |
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NSNick Laidback Admin Level: 85  Posts: 692/3875 EXP: 5895841 For next: 2699 Since: 03-15-04 From: North Side School: OSU Since last post: 9 hours Last activity: 1 hour |
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| Some problems, from a rule point of view: T-Virus: Regeneration only works while a creature is in play. It should read "put it into play under your control" instead of "regenerate it" The Redeemer: This is so not blue-flavored. It should either be black, red, or an equipment like Phil said. Also, it should target the creature of yours. Monster Garage: As it reads, the second effect on this card would let you take any artifact creature in play. I think you meant for it to read "Return target artifact creature from any graveyard to play under your control". |
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Ran-chan Moldorm eek, when are they going to stop growing... Level: 143  Posts: 2029/12781 EXP: 35293588 For next: 538220 Since: 03-15-04 From: Nerima District, Tokyo - Japan Since last post: 12 hours Last activity: 12 hours |
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I see you...  I like that one the most because it looks funny... You |
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DarkSlaya POOOOOOOOOOOORN! Level: 88 Posts: 467/4249 EXP: 6409254 For next: 241410 Since: 05-16-04 From: Montreal, Quebec, Canada Since last post: 8 hours Last activity: 5 hours |
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| I, too, have my own set, dunno where it is thought. And I like the cards you made because these don't have crazy abilities. | |||
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Jarukoth IRRATIONAL EXUBERENCE!!1! Level: 79 Posts: 1411/3194 EXP: 4402011 For next: 177456 Since: 03-17-04 From: New Jersey, U.S.A. Shoes: Yes. Since last post: 8 days Last activity: 1 day |
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| Input noted, applied, and very much appreciated. Broken Cards, Round 3: Yuna Neji Superior Training Will To Live Suprise Attack Ermac Jill Ed Naruto Freddy And finally...from the "I can't believe I didn't make this one sooner" file... EDIT: Ermac and Ed cards updated. (edited by Jarukoth on 07-24-04 07:18 AM) |
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DarkSlaya POOOOOOOOOOOORN! Level: 88 Posts: 546/4249 EXP: 6409254 For next: 241410 Since: 05-16-04 From: Montreal, Quebec, Canada Since last post: 8 hours Last activity: 5 hours |
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| A few things: - Make the ability "Ed, Master Hacker" a little less powerful, please? Make the ability cost a little more mana. - If I remember correctly, you can't tap a creature to make it regenerate itself (not sure thought) - Sephiroth is incredibly strong but it's alright since he has a high mana cost. Round 3 Overall: Good. |
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NSNick Laidback Admin Level: 85 Posts: 719/3875 EXP: 5895841 For next: 2699 Since: 03-15-04 From: North Side School: OSU Since last post: 9 hours Last activity: 1 hour |
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| Superior Training: Should read "Sacrifice Superior Training" instead of "Remove Superior Training". Nice picture! Ermac: His affinity for red creatures does absolutely nothing because he has no colorless mana in his casting cost. Plus, a 4 red casting cost is ridiculous. I would make it 5RR or 4RR. Ed, Master Hacker: Yeah, this guy should cost more and so should his ability. He should have to sacrifice in order to use that ability. Also, destroying creatures is not in blue's flavor at all. That would be black. Freddy Krueger: Might want to lower his regeneration cost, because it's too expensive right now. I'd say BB instead of BBBT. Sephiroth: Nice. The low casting cost is balanced out by the quad black, which in a mono deck is of no concern, making it an awesome card. (edited by NSNick on 07-23-04 04:40 PM) |
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DarkSlaya POOOOOOOOOOOORN! Level: 88 Posts: 554/4249 EXP: 6409254 For next: 241410 Since: 05-16-04 From: Montreal, Quebec, Canada Since last post: 8 hours Last activity: 5 hours |
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Originally posted by NSNick Then again, It requires sacrificing artifacts so a Blue & Black card would balance it's ability. |
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Apple Kodondo Level: 38 Posts: 264/594 EXP: 350163 For next: 20284 Since: 03-27-04 From: Washington. Since last post: 264 days Last activity: 152 days |
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| I don't like the 8th edition lay out but they look good The Sephiroth card wording doesn't seem right. Why don't you just say "If Sephiroth is put in to the graveyard from play, return to owners hand". Or something similar? I haven't played magic since Urza Saga was released so I'm probably missing ALOT of new rules and stuff. In which case, sorry I said anything. I like them though, I wouldn't mind seeing some gold cards though (I didn't look through them all so if you already have some...) |
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NSNick Laidback Admin Level: 85 Posts: 724/3875 EXP: 5895841 For next: 2699 Since: 03-15-04 From: North Side School: OSU Since last post: 9 hours Last activity: 1 hour |
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| Yeah, Apple, Indestructible is an ability in the new block. | |||
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Jarukoth IRRATIONAL EXUBERENCE!!1! Level: 79 Posts: 1417/3194 EXP: 4402011 For next: 177456 Since: 03-17-04 From: New Jersey, U.S.A. Shoes: Yes. Since last post: 8 days Last activity: 1 day |
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| Okay, I edited my last post, and put updated the pics of Ed and Ermac. Ed was pretty much totally redone after some more thought. To be honest, I didn't give too much thought to Ed when I first made it... |
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DarkSlaya POOOOOOOOOOOORN! Level: 88 Posts: 574/4249 EXP: 6409254 For next: 241410 Since: 05-16-04 From: Montreal, Quebec, Canada Since last post: 8 hours Last activity: 5 hours |
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| Now, that's much better.... You should make a card as cool as Spirit Monger, with almost the same abilities. Now that would nice. |
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