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Suri Bear

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Posted on 07-05-04 03:04 AM Link
Ayo..

The way you guys Role Play now is sort of... boring o.O I mean, we should be able to put more use of detail. A movie script doesn't really have enough detail for some people. I have a good suggestion for the "Story Forum."

One way is for us to RP or Role-Play.
RP (my definition): You should be able to write with one or more people and with detail, without the movie script types.

RPing now---
Tim: Hi there! Let's go get a beer... do you have any money? I lost mine in a bar fight...
Joe: Oh yeah, I want a beer! How about down the street? Money? Gawd! You always lose yours!! Keep it somewhere where they can't find it!!

New RPing---
Tim appears by the doorway of Joe's house. He flicks off his hat with one finger and puts it on the table standing next to him. He coughs to get Joe's attention.

"Hey there! Let's go get a beer... do you have any money? I lost mine yesterday in a bar fight..." said Joe, with a smug look on his face.

Joe turns around, his long trench coat wipping around with him. He pulled a cigar out of the corner of his mouth and held it between his fingers.

"Oh yeah, I want a beer! How about down the street? Money? Gawd! You always lose your's! Keep it somewhere where they can't find it!" said Joe as he blew a circle of smoke into the air next to him.

Do you see the difference? I hope that explained a lot... I was starting to think that I was just plain confusing.. XDD Well, if you need anything else to be explained (I have a gut feeling that I left something unexplained), juss tell me.... I feel weird...

::opens another can of soda and gugs it down::

BTW:: My way of RPing SHOULD lower spam rates... just so people won't just put dialogue o.o

_SuriBear_


(edited by Suri Bear on 07-04-04 06:07 PM)
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Posted on 07-05-04 04:10 AM Link
Uh huh. So, what you're saying is you want people do be more detailed, right? That's not really a "new way". That's... More detailed.

And to an extent, it's better, and to an extent, it's worse. Sure, it's more meaningful, but it makes reading it a lot more boring. So much of that could be cut out and it'd mean the same thing.
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Posted on 07-05-04 06:56 AM Link
Edit: Kyouji, I haven't really seen you do role playing. You're not posting here just to tack on another post onto your belt, are you?

We used to have tons of stories like that. Unfortunately, we lost all that good stuff in the board wipe long ago.

It's quite true that "your" way of RPing would reduce spam. Unfortunately, you posted this in the wrong forum ('ey, mods.. Can you move it over to the Story Forum? ), and there's always going to be people not getting it.

My style of RPing is a mixture of those two. There hasn't been a story that's been made that makes me me feel like converting to complete story style. However, in the Sim-Battle, I tend to do complete story.

Suri Bear.. you should try joining a story ;;


(edited by Kirbynite on 07-04-04 09:57 PM)
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Posted on 07-05-04 08:37 AM Link
Originally posted by Kirbynite
Edit: Kyouji, I haven't really seen you do role playing. You're not posting here just to tack on another post onto your belt, are you?
v_v What do you take me for? While it's true I don't roleplay much *on this board*, I have done quite a bit of roleplaying in several places, and I visit the Sim-Battle Arena fairly regularly, just to do some reading. Hell, "Kyouji Craw" was the name of my roleplaying character long before I ever used it in a screen name.


(edited by Kyouji Craw on 07-04-04 11:38 PM)
Suri Bear

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Posted on 07-07-04 04:32 AM Link
This is in the wrong forum? o.O Really? Oops XDD Oh well =P

Yeah I guess it would be quite boring for the slow reader-type-person. But hey, I'm one of those people who like to read a lot of detailed posts. Maybe when I RP, I'll just combine them... good idea

Maybe I'll just find a good story thingie to join... I'ma go read them and find out which ones have the best players XDD

_SuriBear_
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Posted on 07-07-04 12:15 PM Link
I hate super descriptive stories. They seem just a little to boring to read and since this is meant to be fun I don't understand why it really matters. I don't see very much dialouge in a single post unless it is needed and tht is all.
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Posted on 07-07-04 12:19 PM Link
I used to SF like this:

Anya: *looks over* Yea, and you would eat that, wouldn't you?

Or some shit like that , but you get my point.

Then one day I stopped and started to SF how I normally would write a story.

For the most part, everyone has their own style, to some degree and some people are used to that and that's why they'll only SF with those said people.
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Posted on 07-07-04 12:25 PM Link
Wow, a thread in the SF that isn't an SF that isn't stickied...unreal.

Anyways...it usually doesn't matter as long as you get the general point across. It doesn't matter what format you use as long as it can be followed.

Usually I do something like this:

>>>

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Posted on 07-07-04 08:35 PM Link
My usual format, using your example...

Tim appears by the doorway of Joe's house. He flicks off his hat with one finger and puts it on the table next to him. He coughs to get Joe's attention, then says with a smug look on his face...

Tim: Hey there! Let's go get a beer.

Joe turns around, his long trench coat whipping around with him. He pulled a cigar out of the corner of his mouth and held it between his fingers.

Joe: Oh yeah, I want a beer! How about down the street?

Tim: *suddenly remembers something* Er... Do you have any money? I lost mine yesterday in a bar fight...

Joe: Money? Gawd! You always lose yours! Keep it somewhere that they can't find it! *blows a circle of smoke into the air next to him*


It's a sort of mixture, to be sure. Detailed stuff gets italics, dialog gets script format. Simple actions that don't require much description are placed within asterisks inside the dialog, as do sound effects.

There are other specific things, though, for example Out-of-Character discussion is placed in ((double parenthesis)) and gets separated from the rest of the text by a line of ten dashes, ----------. The line of ten dashes is also used to represent other things, such as when two separate events are taking place in two separate locations, one is described first followed by ---------- and then usually a Meanwhile... Talking that is done in a language the rest of the main characters should, for the most part, not understand (AKA which would be translated with subtitles if this were a TV show or movie) gets placed within a < and a >. Telepathic speaking is done with ~tildes~. Thinking is put in italics and usually has *thinking* right before it for further clarity. Now to make an example to display said things!

As the firefight raged on, JDavis took shelter behind a crate.

JDavis: There's too many of them... *thinking* If only Kirbynite was here...

----------

Meanwhile, on Neo Grape Gardens...

Kirbynite: *Achoo!*

The Dreamlander scratched his nose, then shrugged and went back to plowing the fields.

----------

Back to the battle...

JDavis leapt out from behind the crate and shot several of the Maverick gims before ducking behind a conveniently placed jeep.


JDavis: At this rate, this could take all year...

Suddenly, all the gims stopped shooting.

JDavis: ...Eh?

On the far end of the corridor a door opened. Out of it stepped a small round figure with flowing red-orange hair, yellowed horns, an odd tail and some bunny ears.

JDavis: *gritting his teeth* Popodey!

Popodey: ~I know you're in here, Davis...~

JDavis: If you're going to taunt me, use your mouth, freak!

Popodey: ~I would, but I've got this sore throat this week and...~ ~WHY am I bothering telling you this? Anyway, I've got a new ally that is sure to be able to take you down...~

Another small figure stepped out of the door, this one was yellow with a lightning-shaped tail, black-tipped ears, and bright red cheeks.

JDavis: *peeks around the corner of the jeep* Oh no! A yellow rat! I'm so scared!

Pikachu: Pika pi!? Pi pi pikaCHU! < Yellow rat!? I'll show you! >

The Pikachu let loose a large bolt of electricity. It flew across the corridor, hitting the jeep. The electricity, combined with the combustibility of the gas within the vehicle caused a large explosion, which sent JDavis flying backwards...


I'm going to go ahead and stop there before I make a whole story out of this thing You get the point, anyway.
Suri Bear

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Posted on 07-08-04 05:37 AM Link
It's okay ya'll. I know what you guys mean... I know how to RP ::rollls eyes:: =P j/k XDD

Eh, so we can use any type of format that we want? I'm just trying to get that point across. Because if we can use any type that we wish.. I don't see why I made this topic o.O

BTW:: I'll give 50 bucks to anyone who finds me a topic to join who has good players in it and has people who can actually write... and then I'll show off my mighty skillzz XDD

I think any moderator of this "Story Forum" can close this thread if they wish.. I don't believe it has any more meaning, whatsoever XDD

Wow.. I can sound proper too!! XDD

_SuriBear_
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Posted on 07-08-04 05:44 AM Link
Yea, main thing to remember is that as long as people can follow what you're writing then you can use whatever format.

Anyways, will do.

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