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Posted on 05-19-04 05:05 AM Link | Quote
I'm doing poetry in english class now, and we had this one assignment, where we had to imitate the rhyme scheme of Poe's The Raven, and this is what I came out with.
Also, something to know, in my school, the clock's second's hand gets stuck at 12 every so often.


Here I sit a-yearning, for the clock to get turning,
Soon I hear a clicking louder than before.
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Posted on 05-19-04 05:36 PM Link | Quote
Now THAT...was good shit. XD

That also reminded me of the one Calvin & Hobbes one that Watterson did for the treasuries he put out, you'd see it at the beginning...and reading this and remember that...yea...they're definitely Poe type works.

God, I hope you got an A on that...that was good shit.
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Posted on 05-19-04 07:55 PM Link | Quote
Quoth the me, "Give me more!"

Anyway, that was awesome. *bows down* I didn't think it was possible to pull out something like that, and you somehow did. I know I probably wouldn't be able to ;;

You'd better get an A on that. Or else... Some of us are gonna have to take a trip to see your teacher, with some blunt objects in our hands....
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Posted on 05-19-04 07:58 PM Link | Quote
I made a satiricial poem of The Raven when I was in 8th grade as well. It was called "The Pidgeon" and it was about a bird crapping on someone. Well, if I ever find it, I'll post it here. Good times, good times. Yours rocked, btw.
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Posted on 05-20-04 12:38 AM Link | Quote
A+ on it!!

My teacher said it was awesome, and I got the top score in the class.
All that rhyming paid off
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