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Toxic in a sublime state of mind Level: 75 Posts: 851/2857 EXP: 3732709 For next: 94195 Since: 03-15-04 Since last post: 3 days Last activity: 8 hours |
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I had to write a short story for my english class, and I had this idea in my head since I umpired one game with a player that was going to go play baseball in Florida. I came up with the title first, about a year ago, and then a few days ago got to writing it. And yeah, I know my ending sucks, I'm going to work on it later. Diaries of a Little League Superstar Nathan Krieger sunk down as low as humanly possible on the stool in the bar. All his efforts to drink his problems away had failed miserably, adding to the mounting number of problems in his life. His wife was never home, and a divorce seemed obvious. They were married when Nate was going to be the Rookie of the Year in the American League for the MLB. That was back when he was projected to hit 20 home runs, steal 40 bases, and get a gold glove at second base. That |
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Populous Red Koopa Level: 20 Posts: 14/132 EXP: 37045 For next: 5394 Since: 03-15-04 From: Finland Since last post: 14 days Last activity: 2 days |
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Ummm... This is the Modern Art, not Story Forum!?! |
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Jizuko Jiz Is The Magic! This board has run out of mana and can no longer use The Magic Level: 51 Posts: 192/1191 EXP: 1004683 For next: 9255 Since: 03-15-04 Since last post: 230 days Last activity: 213 days |
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Populous: No mod like behavior please Stories are art too, stories which are just for show and not for others to participate in go here. So this is the correct forum. | |||
Kefka Indefinitely Unbanned Level: 81 Posts: 908/3392 EXP: 4826208 For next: 166641 Since: 03-15-04 From: Pomona, CALIFORNIA BABY! Since last post: 4 hours Last activity: 4 hours |
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I like stories that I can relate to... and since I played baseball and also have been around godsends who bust (at the high school level though ), I was drawn into this from the very beginning... in short, I liked this story a lot. | |||
Toxic in a sublime state of mind Level: 75 Posts: 865/2857 EXP: 3732709 For next: 94195 Since: 03-15-04 Since last post: 3 days Last activity: 8 hours |
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Originally posted by Mighty Kefka I used all real life examples too The ump was me, the coach was one of the guys that was in the AAA league, and the superstar was a kid on the Red Sox in my town league. I'm not sure of his HR total, but he had 2 in one game of mine. |
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