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Schwa Green Birdo The Embodyment of Good, infused with the Living Assets "Alpha Psibeam!" (echo effects) Level: 66  Posts: 1941/2214 EXP: 2457091 For next: 4760 Since: 04-25-04 From: Spanaway, WA Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 13 hours |
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| Two people with excellent comics, Peardian and Magikoopa Myster, have inspired me to start my own. However, this one will differ highly from theirs... (I want to be as origional as possible.) Here's the first three comics to an ongoing Sprite Comic I have started, one based off by best Rom Hack ever, Super Mario Bros.: Chaos Control. It starts off, of course, with Bowser on his way to the Chaos Emerald... Sonic the Hedgehog fans will laugh. And for your benefit, PNG format. #01:  #02:  #03:  Criticism, anyone? If anything, they're better than my Megaman comic from ages ago... And P.S. I already have much of the plot written out on my Hard Drive. (edited by Schwa on 09-05-05 05:30 PM) |
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Danielle Local Moderator  Level: 76  Posts: 2210/3359 EXP: 3958078 For next: 47982 Since: 09-15-04 From: RATE Since last post: 3 hours Last activity: 3 hours |
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I like it!  It's certainly entertaining. Looks like his "plan" is getting a detour.  I love the learning experience with the sonic stuff. I'd love to see more, please post them! |
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Yoshi Dude XKEEPER STOLE MY CAR KEYS Level: 79  Posts: 2943/3271 EXP: 4572680 For next: 6787 Since: 03-15-04 From: give me a number folks. Since last post: 3 hours Last activity: 2 hours |
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Not bad. The fact that you avoided many noob errors (squished text, half-assed graphics, etc) already gets the YD Seal of Approval.  The one thing that stands out for me is how annoying it is to read. Going from left to right.. you need some line breaks in between panels or something. Especially in the last row, it just doesn't work out with the way it is right now. Keep going, I'm interested in seeing where this strip is headed. |
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Peardian Lava Lotus The Uncanny Mario Art Master KvSG #87 is up! No Trouter yet... Halloween's over... Turkey time! Level: 58  Posts: 1269/1696 EXP: 1545376 For next: 32170 Since: 07-01-04 From: before 3:00 - school, after 3:00 - Pearl Island Since last post: 7 hours Last activity: 6 hours |
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 They're tiny, but they're funny. Good job, Schwa!I hated that dang cave... |
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Cymoro PATRICK DUFFY WILL LASER YOUR SOUL   Level: 67  Posts: 2077/2216 EXP: 2549743 For next: 43129 Since: 03-15-04 From: Cymoro Gaming Since last post: 6 hours Last activity: 4 hours |
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| You need gutters. Gutters are a basic way of separating comic panels from one another. Just give each panel a black border, and have a 5 pixel-wide white gap in between each panel. That way, it's not confusing. | |||
AP Panser Level: 22  Posts: 163/333 EXP: 56817 For next: 1533 Since: 08-07-05 Since last post: 6 hours Last activity: 6 hours |
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| Your comic is really cool and is kinda humorous for one. Keep it up! Spoiler: I also think this comic is a cool way to tell your plot of your SMB3 hack.  (edited by AP on 09-05-05 08:05 PM) |
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Ran-chan Moldorm eek, when are they going to stop growing... Level: 143  Posts: 11457/12781 EXP: 35293588 For next: 538220 Since: 03-15-04 From: Nerima District, Tokyo - Japan Since last post: 12 hours Last activity: 12 hours |
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Originally posted by Peardian Yeah, they´re tiny because if they were big, it´d take an assload of time to load them. Good job, Schwa. I´m looking forward to the next strips. |
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Schwa Green Birdo The Embodyment of Good, infused with the Living Assets "Alpha Psibeam!" (echo effects) Level: 66 Posts: 1945/2214 EXP: 2457091 For next: 4760 Since: 04-25-04 From: Spanaway, WA Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 13 hours |
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| Got #4 ready. The gutter thing is a brilliant idea, and I'll do that... but this one doesn't have the 5-pixel gaps, since I'm just now reading your post. #4:  Look closely at Flasher's eyes... |
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Peardian Lava Lotus The Uncanny Mario Art Master KvSG #87 is up! No Trouter yet... Halloween's over... Turkey time! Level: 58 Posts: 1279/1696 EXP: 1545376 For next: 32170 Since: 07-01-04 From: before 3:00 - school, after 3:00 - Pearl Island Since last post: 7 hours Last activity: 6 hours |
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Glowing... my, how useless.  Looks good, Schwa! |
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Magikoopa Myster Lakitu Level: 34  Posts: 283/553 EXP: 238506 For next: 15145 Since: 12-01-04 From: I'm a Magikoopa! Watch it! Since last post: 9 hours Last activity: 8 hours |
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| Ha! Good one Schwa! |
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fabio Chuck Level: 45  Posts: 1148/1479 EXP: 629903 For next: 30261 Since: 07-02-05 From: Somewhere in Texas Since last post: 7 hours Last activity: 7 hours |
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| Those enemies were annoying. Good thing Bowser burned those enemies up. Otherwise, he would have to wait until the enemy stopped flashing. |
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Schwa Green Birdo The Embodyment of Good, infused with the Living Assets "Alpha Psibeam!" (echo effects) Level: 66 Posts: 1951/2214 EXP: 2457091 For next: 4760 Since: 04-25-04 From: Spanaway, WA Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 13 hours |
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I'm glad someone's studied their Sonic the Hedgehog, fabio. Two cookies for you.  To Peardian: Useless? Uh-oh, I feel a Sonic the Hedgehog rant coming on... Flashers are NOTHING to mess around with. Developed by Dr. Ivo Robotnick as a low-cost tool to light dark places, it one day occured to him to install an electricity emitter inside the bulb, to use Flasher as essentially a living robot mine. In groups with other assult robots like Slicer and Shellcracker, Flashers were devestating to Ivo's enemies, as they would light up and form grids around the foe as Slicer and Shellcracker closed in for a powerful attack against their immobile enemies. Flashers were an excellent way to attack foes, as they were small and cost-efficient, but as Ivo's empire expanded, the foes he began to face were easily able to wipe out the small, unarmored Flashers. The blueprints were eventually scrapped, and now the only ones left live in Mystic Cave zone, an endangered species of robots who light up only to protect themselves, not to attack. If an authority caught Bowser attacking a Flasher like that, he'd get a BIG fine. And for the record, I made all that BS up out of the top of my head. |
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Peardian Lava Lotus The Uncanny Mario Art Master KvSG #87 is up! No Trouter yet... Halloween's over... Turkey time! Level: 58 Posts: 1282/1696 EXP: 1545376 For next: 32170 Since: 07-01-04 From: before 3:00 - school, after 3:00 - Pearl Island Since last post: 7 hours Last activity: 6 hours |
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| That sounded so official, it's scary. Okay, I take it back. Maybe it's not so useless... |
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Schwa Green Birdo The Embodyment of Good, infused with the Living Assets "Alpha Psibeam!" (echo effects) Level: 66 Posts: 1953/2214 EXP: 2457091 For next: 4760 Since: 04-25-04 From: Spanaway, WA Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 13 hours |
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#5 is ready, complete with 3-pixel gutters. I like the blurry effects on this one. |
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fabio Chuck Level: 45 Posts: 1152/1479 EXP: 629903 For next: 30261 Since: 07-02-05 From: Somewhere in Texas Since last post: 7 hours Last activity: 7 hours |
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| I prefer Dr. Robotnik over Eggman. Anyway, Bowser is in big trouble. What's his next plan? |
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Riku Giant Goomba Level: 42  Posts: 765/1239 EXP: 505941 For next: 15421 Since: 06-21-05 From: ....Is this like a custom title? Since last post: 6 hours Last activity: 6 hours |
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| .....Bowser is always funny. Becoming funnier in each game. Just like in PM:TYD. | |||
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Peardian Lava Lotus The Uncanny Mario Art Master KvSG #87 is up! No Trouter yet... Halloween's over... Turkey time! Level: 58 Posts: 1286/1696 EXP: 1545376 For next: 32170 Since: 07-01-04 From: before 3:00 - school, after 3:00 - Pearl Island Since last post: 7 hours Last activity: 6 hours |
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| I love that last line. Keep up the good work, Schwa! |
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Ran-chan Moldorm eek, when are they going to stop growing... Level: 143 Posts: 11496/12781 EXP: 35293588 For next: 538220 Since: 03-15-04 From: Nerima District, Tokyo - Japan Since last post: 12 hours Last activity: 12 hours |
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| I like the blurry effects in those too. And Robotnik sounds way better than Eggman. Great last line. |
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Peardian Lava Lotus The Uncanny Mario Art Master KvSG #87 is up! No Trouter yet... Halloween's over... Turkey time! Level: 58 Posts: 1290/1696 EXP: 1545376 For next: 32170 Since: 07-01-04 From: before 3:00 - school, after 3:00 - Pearl Island Since last post: 7 hours Last activity: 6 hours |
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| I prefer Robotnik, too. What person in their right mind would call themselves "Eggman"? Robotnik sounds more menacing. | |||
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Schwa Green Birdo The Embodyment of Good, infused with the Living Assets "Alpha Psibeam!" (echo effects) Level: 66 Posts: 1957/2214 EXP: 2457091 For next: 4760 Since: 04-25-04 From: Spanaway, WA Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 13 hours |
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| To Peardian and Trapster, regarding Eggman's name... You two are eggsactly right! Robotnik is better! But who knows... I may throw in a pun about the name... Did you move the cursor over #5? #6 coming very soon. I'm gonna try to do 1 a day, and when Macromedia Fireworks expires after 27 days I don't know what I'll do. That thing is like $500, a great investment, but my family and I are po'. |
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