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Cymoro PATRICK DUFFY WILL LASER YOUR SOUL   Level: 67  Posts: 2011/2216 EXP: 2549743 For next: 43129 Since: 03-15-04 From: Cymoro Gaming Since last post: 6 hours Last activity: 4 hours |
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Well, I recently felt like trying to make some more comics, and I felt like making one before I left for camp. So, I drew one, scanned it in, inked it, and then colored it. Yes, the style is similar to Penny-Arcade (the first guy looks like Tycho, but I tried to base him off what I look like), but whenever I draw, my art mostly reflects what I've been looking at recently. Compared to what shit my comics used to look like, it's an improvement. Yes, the left hand in the second panel is shit, but I'm working on drawing hands, which used to be a huge problem for me (including feet/shoes, but I'm good at them now). Well? Comments? |
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Yoshi Dude XKEEPER STOLE MY CAR KEYS Level: 79  Posts: 2672/3271 EXP: 4572680 For next: 6787 Since: 03-15-04 From: give me a number folks. Since last post: 3 hours Last activity: 2 hours |
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Haha, you're right, it's a huge improvement.  Not bad at all. I like how you even made the backgrounds interesting, that gets neglected in a lot of comics. My biggest complaint would have to be the small text in the second and third panels. I realize you're trying to save space, but at that size it's gets annoying to read. I recommend either a different size, or a different font.. or a way to keep it from looking blurred. |
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Cymoro PATRICK DUFFY WILL LASER YOUR SOUL Level: 67 Posts: 2014/2216 EXP: 2549743 For next: 43129 Since: 03-15-04 From: Cymoro Gaming Since last post: 6 hours Last activity: 4 hours |
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| Alright, I upped it by 1 px, and it looks much, much better. I don't even know why I didn't do this before. Thanks for the comment on the background. I was trying to make something different, and that looks damn good. |
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