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Sukasa

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Posted on 08-13-05 05:32 AM Link | Quote
Um, yeah. the title says it all. I redid my intro screen for COTMK 2, and was wondering what you guys thought/ how I could improve it. It's too similar to BMF's, and I'd like ideas for how to change it while still keeping the overall "feel" to it.

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Posted on 08-13-05 05:34 AM Link | Quote
Not bad. I suggest using another font for the title, though, since the regular one looks... well... too regular...


(edited by Smallhacker on 08-12-05 08:35 PM)
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Posted on 08-13-05 05:35 AM Link | Quote
Nice, but it's just a teensy bit hard to read - is that BG Death Egg Zone from sonic? It looks pretty sweet.
Sukasa

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Posted on 08-13-05 05:38 AM Link | Quote
I'll keep the font in mind, the nice thing is that the game's font is still a WIP, so by the time the next dem ocomes out, it will be better. That is the death egg BG, but I had to change it's palette to accommodate the Layer 3 colours, which for the title screen are pasted over the other palette entries.
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Posted on 08-13-05 05:42 AM Link | Quote
Looking quite good, I'd also recommend a new, bigger, more decorative font, since the top half of the screen looks a bit unexciting except for the BG. The border is looking nice too. The only thing that needs work is the top half and it will look really good.
Sukasa

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Posted on 08-13-05 05:44 AM Link | Quote
Thanks. The red and green dots on layer 3 are also animated, they flash in a 16-frame animation. A bigger font...? I've got just the idea!
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Posted on 08-13-05 06:01 AM Link | Quote
try to make it scroll vertically instead of horizontally to make it look like you are taking off/landing, and maybe put a rocket ship on layer 3
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Posted on 08-13-05 05:05 PM Link | Quote
Dude, that will make it, good job you made!
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Posted on 08-13-05 05:59 PM Link | Quote
This looks very nice, Sukasa. If you add bigger text, it will look even better. Great job!
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Posted on 08-13-05 11:28 PM Link | Quote
Nice, the the text for the title is way too small...
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Posted on 08-14-05 02:23 AM Link | Quote
On the Double Crossed word in the title screen, while is the words in two different colors? I think it would look better if it was one color. Just a suggestion.


(edited by fabio on 08-13-05 05:28 PM)
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Posted on 08-15-05 08:36 PM Link | Quote
Now I have to make another intro BG. I used the same like you. Anyway, fix up the font and it will look great.
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