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Clockworkz

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Posted on 07-20-05 02:08 AM Link | Quote
I've been playing Pokemon Silver lately, and I realized how ridiculous some of the stuff in that game is. Perferablly, this part. And this part.
Just doodly stuff. Crticism welcome, though not needed.


(edited by Clockworkz on 07-19-05 05:40 PM)
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Posted on 07-20-05 02:39 AM Link | Quote
Pretty bad, and really light in color. It might be funny, Im not sure. I don't play the pokemon games.

I like the ball (electrode?) tho. He looks good.

(ps: I used to play the pokemon games, and I know abit about them)
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Posted on 07-20-05 02:39 AM Link | Quote
Bad: The wrinkles on the clothes and pose proportion seem somewhat odd.
Good: The storyboard and I like the teeth!
Clockworkz

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Posted on 07-20-05 03:38 AM Link | Quote
Remained bored, so I made another one. More comedic value or your money back. Or not.
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Posted on 07-20-05 03:45 AM Link | Quote
xD that is hilarious...and I know what part you mean in silver when that dumb ass rocket guy just gives you the password. Funny...keep making more...
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Posted on 07-20-05 04:37 AM Link | Quote
This part also irritated me.

Number 4. Dumbass red haired kid. I so worded the last panel completely wrong..


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(edited by Clockworkz on 07-19-05 09:04 PM)
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Posted on 07-20-05 06:30 AM Link | Quote
Hah. Lance is such an ass.

Hey take out those Electrodes while I......do something.
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Posted on 07-20-05 06:36 AM Link | Quote
XD that fourth one is hilarious. And I got what you meant...
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Posted on 07-20-05 06:40 AM Link | Quote
These are fuuny. The next time I play the game, I'll remember to name him Shitface. The rival is such an idiot.
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Posted on 07-20-05 08:08 AM Link | Quote
That's so true.

For quick drawings on a piece of paper, those are good. Can't wait to see more.
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Posted on 07-20-05 12:01 PM Link | Quote
Some there are pretty funny to me. I think they look pretty nice, Clockworkz.


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Posted on 07-20-05 11:50 PM Link | Quote
"One helluva New Year's Party!" or... "Frostitutes!" This really should have gone first, for Chronology's sake.

Episode 6: There is No Lame Egg Pun in This Title! Read Mr. Pokemon's text first for complete entertainment.
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Posted on 07-21-05 02:12 AM Link | Quote
Two more great comics! These are my favorite I have seen so far here. Keep em up!
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Posted on 07-21-05 04:48 AM Link | Quote
Those are slightly more disturbing than the rest, especially the first. My favorite is still the Lance one.
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Posted on 07-21-05 06:35 AM Link | Quote
Here's some more comments:

"One helluva New Year's Party!" or... " Frostitutes.: I hate to wake up with her. That was awkward.

Episode 6: There is No Lame Egg Pun in This Title: That was funny that the guy already knew that it was a useless Togepi and then cooks it.

Those were pretty funny. Keep up the good work.
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Posted on 07-21-05 07:00 AM Link | Quote
Originally posted by Peardian
Those are slightly more disturbing than the rest, especially the first. My favorite is still the Lance one.
XD I know what you mean.
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Posted on 07-21-05 07:54 AM Link | Quote
Wow, Clock. They're kinda iffy as far as being drawn goes, but as far as jokes go, they're excellent. Keep it up, I'm definitely laughing. My favorites so far are number 4 and 6.
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Posted on 07-21-05 10:27 AM Link | Quote
Originally posted by Grey
Wow, Clock. They're kinda iffy as far as being drawn goes, but as far as jokes go, they're excellent. Keep it up, I'm definitely laughing. My favorites so far are number 4 and 6.
What is your definition of "iffy"?
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Posted on 07-21-05 10:34 AM Link | Quote
I believe he's referring to how they look like they were drawn pretty quickly. And the text is a bit hard to read sometimes.

Clean it up a bit (clarity improvments needed), and it'll be better. Just the cosmetic things that have to be improved, far as I can tell.
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Posted on 07-21-05 08:46 PM Link | Quote
Well I like they way they are drawn. Even thought it gets kinda messy at some points, that is what I like about the comic...the way it is drawn. And have messy handwriting too so I have no problem reading Clockworkz' handwriting.
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