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Riku Giant Goomba Level: 42  Posts: 293/1239 EXP: 505941 For next: 15421 Since: 06-21-05 From: ....Is this like a custom title? Since last post: 6 hours Last activity: 6 hours |
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This is probably a bad comic. NO FLAMES!   I'll post the next 1 when I get finished. |
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Yoshi Dude XKEEPER STOLE MY CAR KEYS Level: 79  Posts: 2506/3271 EXP: 4572680 For next: 6787 Since: 03-15-04 From: give me a number folks. Since last post: 3 hours Last activity: 2 hours |
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| The comic is just bad, and you clearly were lazy about it. I mean look at Toad. You couldn't even take away the white block around it. The text looks terrible. Ignoring the material, which I don't even get.. you don't need a border that thick. The border text should NOT clash with the actual words in any way. Why would you choose neon green lettering? There are other shades of green that are easier to read. And you need to improve your typing skills and grammar. "Iknow" and "Luigi, You're brother".. no. Think about what you're going to say before you say it. Something that isn't so bad.. in the first panel, you can't tell that you're supposed to read from right to left. If you made it so Wart's text was obviously above Luigi's, it'd be easier to follow. The other two panels are even worse. If you're going to dedicate a whole panel to just words, it better look nice. The last panel doesn't make sense, did you forget to put borders or something? I have no idea what's going on. I've told you enough to have you STOP with your "next 1", and completely start over. Spend more time on it this time to make it look decent, at least. (edited by Yoshi Dude on 07-16-05 02:13 PM) (edited by Yoshi Dude on 07-16-05 02:14 PM) |
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Riku Giant Goomba Level: 42 Posts: 294/1239 EXP: 505941 For next: 15421 Since: 06-21-05 From: ....Is this like a custom title? Since last post: 6 hours Last activity: 6 hours |
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| My new 1st animated comic. http://www.freewebs.com/supermario6464/Super%20Mario%20(%20reloaded%20).ppt (edited by MarioMaster on 07-16-05 02:20 PM) |
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Thomas Buzz Blob Level: 26  Posts: 122/298 EXP: 98852 For next: 3423 Since: 10-29-04 From: United States Since last post: 88 days Last activity: 83 days |
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| Frist Comic 1) You didn't plan ANYTHING out 2) The Dialoge Boxes are mess in the first frame 3) The second frame doesnt show who the dialoge goes to. 4) The first and second frame dont match each other 5) Toad sprite doesn't match the quality of the other sprites 6) If you do make a next one try getting a basic storyline in there. ---------------------------- Second Comic Powerpoint presentations are not animated comics....Gif Images are animated comics... (edited by Thomas on 07-16-05 02:23 PM) (edited by Thomas on 07-16-05 02:23 PM) |
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Kyoufu Kawa I'm not bad. I'm just drawn that way. Level: 70  Posts: 1835/2481 EXP: 3008456 For next: 7355 Since: 03-19-04 From: Catgirl Central Since last post: 14 hours Last activity: 13 hours |
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| Also, don't use BMP files on the Internet. There should be law against that. | |||
Peardian Lava Lotus The Uncanny Mario Art Master KvSG #87 is up! No Trouter yet... Halloween's over... Turkey time! Level: 58  Posts: 1002/1696 EXP: 1545376 For next: 32170 Since: 07-01-04 From: before 3:00 - school, after 3:00 - Pearl Island Since last post: 7 hours Last activity: 6 hours |
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| It would be better if the panels were, you know, all one picture. By the way, either Wart's taking a dump, or you just got a screenshot and put Wart over Mario.  By the way, the PowerPoint is huge and is taking forever to load. ... 33 minutes remaining and rising.  |
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Cymoro PATRICK DUFFY WILL LASER YOUR SOUL   Level: 67  Posts: 1880/2216 EXP: 2549743 For next: 43129 Since: 03-15-04 From: Cymoro Gaming Since last post: 6 hours Last activity: 4 hours |
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you wnat to se min lol i laend mi tricks from u |
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Prier Archangel Administrative Priestess. NUCLEAR SUB WEEEOOOO Level: 119  Posts: 6652/8392 EXP: 18790939 For next: 138352 Since: 03-15-04 From: Nerima Dist. - Tokyo, Japan Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 1 day |
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Originally posted by MarioMaster That's akin to saying: 'You're all dumbasses...DON'T FLAME ME!!!' |
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