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Kario

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Posted on 04-08-04 10:50 AM Link | Quote
Yeah, its time to hear another of Kario's poems. Please resond, as poetry doesnt get recognized much...

I Thought I Knew You

No matter how hard I try
Nothing seems to matter
You never really notice
The effect it has thereafter

I want to tell you the truth
I want to tell you lies
But no matter what I say
You never seem surprised

You've heard it all before
It's all the same to you
No matter who says it
It doesnt seem that new

Different Person
Different Time
Different Reasons Altogether
But you've heard it all so many times
It doesnt seem to matter

So now I quit, I cant go on
You make no sense to me
I thought that I knew you
But only who you used to be
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Posted on 04-14-04 07:06 PM Link | Quote
That was great poetry. It discribes someone you thought you knew. Like you met someone who was younger, than when you met the person again you think "I know that person" but can't think of his name.
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Posted on 04-14-04 07:22 PM Link | Quote
GOD I LOVE POETRY
You are a god for posting poems here
That poem was very moving and i can relate that poem to my life in so many ways.
Did you write it yourself?

I have a few poems i wrote myself on my website
Kario

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Posted on 04-15-04 08:34 AM Link | Quote
Well thanks. This is the first time my poetry has been recognized on this board. Usually it just dies in the forum. I will defnintely post more later.

Yeah, I write my own poetry, I won't post someone elses.
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Posted on 04-15-04 08:40 AM Link | Quote
We need a thread purerly for poetry
Someone could even make up a mario poem
And if only i knew you posted poems before the old board went down
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Posted on 04-15-04 09:02 AM Link | Quote
I will just make a new thread for each poem. They said they would make a Poetry forum if their was enough poetry submitted, so I am thinking about posting some more. Maybe ya'll could too. EVERYBODY!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted on 04-15-04 09:04 AM Link | Quote
i am willing to paste poems, but... do we write them in here or make new threads?
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Posted on 04-15-04 09:58 AM Link | Quote
New Thread. Title it "POST POETRY HERE" or something. comments can be sent in PMs so people wont be afraid to sound sentimental. Just a thread for posting poetry. Maybe it will get stickied!
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Posted on 04-15-04 10:10 AM Link | Quote
I don't think you should make a new thread for each piece of poetry.. that's just annoying.

Personally, I never review poetry because it does not stand out for me. A lot of times it just appears to be a load of garbage, but I cannot critisize because I'll be told I don't understand, or something ridiculous. I don't know about others.


(edited by Yoshi ARR on 04-15-04 01:11 AM)
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