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Shyguy
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Posted on 06-19-05 10:33 PM Link | Quote
Once upon a time, there was a peaceful town, called Butter Town. Everyone got along great. No worries, no troubles. Kirby Star was living in peace when all of a sudden, thousands of kid-like screaming came over the horizon. Kirby Star looked out and saw a lot of multicolored dots. Eventually forming in to view as a whole army of shyguys!

Kirby Star: What the heck? Man, that is noisy! Ugh! They really irk a man!

Kirby Star walked out there to shut them up.

KS: Hey, guys! Mind if you- AAAAAGH!!!!

The few shyguys in the first row lifted Kirby Star out of the way. When he lands on other shy guys they just throw him backwords off of their heads.

The stomping sound of the army subsided after he got up from the ground after the seemingly endless mosh pit. He saw them get closer to to Butter Town!


KS: Oh, no! What would my friends think!? They'd be in for a rude awakening!


Please do this one. It's a cool story! >=(


(edited by Shyguy on 06-22-05 05:46 AM)
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Posted on 06-24-05 10:02 AM Link | Quote
Kirby Star felt a tap on his back. The origin? Cyberaptor, 3rd Guardian of Cybercity, who had just then been teleported to the area. Cyberaptor stepped forward, causing his heavy metallic armor to clunk quietly. He didn't leave a very long pause when his computer, built into his armor, starting speaking.

Computer: Greetings, civilian. We have detected a presence of numerous shyguys around the area. Have you seen them? Our leader has determined that they are hostile, and we have taken it upon ourselves to ensure that minimal casualties are assumed.

Cyberaptor stared at Kirby Star, awaiting an answer. A little antenna unfolded off of his back and emitted a faint green beam of light, scanning him.



(edited by CheesePie on 06-30-05 04:00 PM)
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Posted on 06-24-05 09:12 PM Link | Quote
Seeing this futuristic-looking dinosaur, Kirby Star didn't know what to think. Since the shyguys ran into the town, he might as well tell him.

KS: Uh, yes, they have. There were thousands of them. They ran over to that town over there.

Kirby Star pointed directly to Butter Town.

KS: I hope we can stop them. Shyguys have a way of getting in trouble.

With that, he ran off to Butter Town to see what the shyguys were up to.

Funny, at first you wanted to do this story. >=(


(edited by Shyguy on 06-25-05 01:42 PM)
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Posted on 06-27-05 04:32 AM Link | Quote
I do. A two-day absence isn't much...at least for me, anyway. Hey, it's the weekend.
---

Cyberaptor looked in the direction the Kirby Star pointed.

Computer: Immobilizing this force should not prove to be much of a challenge. Still, duty calls.

Cyberaptor zoomed off toward the town, powered by a jetpack, and easily passed up Kirby Star along the way. When the raptor arrived, he immediately activated a cloaking device, and observed the shyguy's movements.
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Posted on 06-27-05 05:35 AM Link | Quote
The shyguys were wreaking havoc to the town. Shyguys were found teasing like age children, stealing things, and even taking over shops. It was a true mess.

A little ways down, they were found in the movie auditorium performing their own shows of the directors trying to catch them, and failing.

A bit more ways down, they were teasing the park animals. They chased and tortured squirrels, "unstings" bees, and even catching the birds with their nets.

Kirby Star then finally came.


KS: Alright, you guys! If you don't stop this, this instant- GACK

All of a sudden, a whole horde of shyguys went and climbed all over him, attempting to suffocate him!


(edited by Shyguy on 06-26-05 08:36 PM)
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Posted on 06-27-05 11:03 PM Link | Quote
Computer: What havoc! The shyguys are in too many places at once for us to deal with. Luring them to our position may help.
Cyberaptor: I will create a hologram to bring them in - wait - the Kirby creature seems to be in trouble.

Cyberaptor became visible again, and charged straight at the mob that had tackled Kirby Star! Once he had reach the shyguys on the outside of the swarm, Cyberaptor's antenna folded out of his back, and shot a green wire frame-like beam at the soldiers. One by one, they slowly disappeared, being sucked up by the beam and converted into data, which was then stored in Cyberaptor's computer! Hopefully, the shyguys' attention would be turned to Cyberaptor, and they'd let Kirby Star escape.


(edited by Kirbynite on 06-28-05 04:17 PM)
(edited by Kirbynite on 06-28-05 04:17 PM)
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Posted on 06-29-05 01:00 AM Link | Quote
A shyguy: Oh, no!!!!!

Another shyguy: RUN!!!!!!

The shyguys ran as fast as they can away from Kirby Star and Cyberaptor. One tripped over, glanced at Cyberaptor for a bit, then made a shyguy sound as he ran away. (a slight high pitch noise)

KS: Whew! That was close! We HAVE to find out where they're staying!

Kirby Star ran for the houses part of town, then looked back.

KS: Thank you. If you want, you can help me find a place where they keep their hideout. We must hurry!
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Posted on 06-29-05 11:44 PM Link | Quote
Cyberaptor followed Kirby Star.

Cyberaptor: Yes, I will accompany you.

Cyberaptor's antenna started whirling around. Cyberaptor was using it to track down the hideout of the shyguys, but it wasn't guranteed to work...

Cyberaptor: Do you have an idea why these shyguys would attack here?
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Posted on 06-30-05 01:12 AM Link | Quote
OOC: I feel a little embarassed to join, but after recieving my PM Shyguy said it was OK.

"I do."

The voice that replied to Cyberraptor came from his left. Standing there is a tan-skinned man with no shirt, a towel around his neck, black, worn-out pants, and a belt around his waist with many old-fashoned gadgets and weapons. Strapped to his back on a belt is a brass-colored crossbow.

"Shyguys are mischief makers by nature," the man continues, walking closer to the Raptor. "They travel in large groups and are very curious. Just like children, basically. Shyguys are basically children all their lives, but they gain the intelligence of an adult as they grow older. Intelligence, not wisdom.

"Since they are children all the time, their hideout, of course..." By now he has reached Cyberraptor and Kirby, "...is linked directly to the things children like. Candy, toys, think along those lines. There are only a few exceptions to that rule, none of which I can currently think of...

"Normally I wouldn't offer to help you, but there doesn't seem to be an Pheonix around here, and I'm out of work at the moment. You on an adventure?" the man askes the two characters. "I need one. Badly."
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Posted on 06-30-05 01:21 AM Link | Quote
Yay, Schwa's joined!
-----

Cyberaptor's antenna quickly created a green beam over the man, which moved from his head, down to his feet, and then back.

Computer: ...Greeting, Tuxydon. Yes, we are taking efforts to stop these shyguys. However, it would be up to Kirby Star to decide if you may join us.

Cyberaptor stood still, and the antenna continued rotating, seeking the hideout.
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Posted on 06-30-05 02:49 AM Link | Quote
KS: I'd gladly let you help out. The more the merrier. These shyguys can be strong with their numbers. I smell someone is behind all this. I wonder if there's anywhere people don't live, where they would hide out...... Someone moved out of a house before in town. Let's go check there.

Kirby Star walked to the direction of the vacant house.
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Posted on 06-30-05 10:19 PM Link | Quote
When Cyberraptor scans, he is confronted with data confirming large amounts of Oracle Energy inside Tuxydon.

"Watch it!" Tuxydon yelps as he gets scanned. "I don't trust machinery."

He follows Kirby to the vaccant house. "Oh, I get it... This ain't going to be like one of those Paper Mario-type things, is it? That would be too easy... I've never played Paper Mario, but I heard rumors... Like I said, I don't trust machinery..."
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Posted on 06-30-05 11:45 PM Link | Quote
Computer made some strange clicking noises as he processed the data of the scan, but made no indication that he was intrigued by this
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Posted on 07-01-05 01:18 AM Link | Quote
All of a sudden, a shyguy walked in. He then noticed all these people in there.

Shyguy: Oh, no! People! I gotta run!!!!!

The shyguy then ran out the door as fast as he came in.

KS: Well...... We can't very well know how to get into the shyguy hideout with us scaring them crapless. We need to do something.
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Posted on 07-01-05 02:16 AM Link | Quote
Cyberaptor: I can hide us. Everyone stand next to the left wall, away from this fake one.

Cyberaptor waited until everyone was away from the center of the room, and then joined them. His antenna pointed straight upwards, and then spewed out a green wire-frame aura, which swept over the three of them. As soon as they were completely covered, their image was replaced with a hologram of the left wall and the small bit of floor next to it, rendering them completely invisible!

Computer: Now we just wait for the shyguy to return.
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Posted on 07-01-05 09:21 AM Link | Quote
Tuxydon hears Cyberraptor's question.

"Paper Mario is an electronic game of some sort... I've never played it. I don't play machine-type games."

As the hologram covers Tuxydon, he flinches and falls away, ruining it.

"Aah, what the heck! How do you know that's safe, for criminy's sake?"

Yes, Tuxydon has a grudge against technology, that's for sure... but how can he succeed in helping crack the Shyguy base if he can't even trust Cyberraptor?
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Posted on 07-02-05 12:59 AM Link | Quote
Cyberaptor sighed frustratedly, and disabled the hologram.

Cyberaptor: You are going to have to trust me if you are to help us. That is, unless you , or Kirby Star, can provide a way to hide us?
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Posted on 07-02-05 03:43 AM Link | Quote
KS: Hmm..... Shyguys are known to have the Mix ability! Let me try something.

All of a sudden, a shyguy walked in again.

Shyguy: Oh, no! Peo-

Kirby Star ate him, now he is scrolling aabilities.

KS: Wait for it.... waaaait for it.....

Just then, Kirby Star gained the ninja ability!

KS: Ok, guys! Sheild your eyes!\

The area kinda made a small explosion, disappearing the three into the shadows.

KS: Now we are invisible to them. Ninjas are cool, eh?

Just then, another shyguy came in, angry for some reason or other.

Shyguy: Shyguy! We can't do a thing with you tugging along. Enjoy the free outdoors! We- Oh, oh my. I'm talking to myself.....

The shyguy then went up to the wall, then looked around to see if anyone was near, then he opened the secret door! Fortunately for our heroes, the shyguy forgot to paint over the door again.
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Posted on 07-02-05 09:36 PM Link | Quote
"My apologies, dino-man... I get, uh... antsy... when I'm around machinery. Yeah. Think about it... My profession is Pheonix hunting. I use a crossbow for that. Something electronic like a missile launcher wouldn't be able to fell a Pheonix... but enchanted ice-razors would, if aimed correctly, right? I have no reason to trust machines, and I never will. Now let's go into that base."

He draws three throwing knives in his right hand. "I'm itching for a fight."

And he heads inside the secret door before the others.
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Posted on 07-03-05 01:23 AM Link | Quote
Cyberaptor stepped through the door next.

Computer: ...I suppose that technology can be intimidating, but we all have our own...powers, don't we?

Cyberaptor stared at Tuxydon through his helmet. It was impossible to tell what Computer or Cyberaptor meant. After a few seconds, Cyberaptor turned around.

Computer: Are you coming, Kirby Star? You should see what's inside this room. It might be a bit of a disappointment, though.
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