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Shyguy The Original Femme Fatale! Level: 57  Posts: 310/1998 EXP: 1443008 For next: 42920 Since: 02-14-05 Since last post: 2 hours Last activity: 1 hour |
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Here is my second comic. I'm sorry for making a new thread about my comics, but this one is part of a series. It's nothing like my first one. It's an adventure. (edited by Master M on 03-19-05 12:29 AM) |
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windwaker Ball and Chain Trooper WHY ALL THE MAYONNAISE HATE Level: 61  Posts: 1318/1797 EXP: 1860597 For next: 15999 Since: 03-15-04 Since last post: 4 days Last activity: 6 days |
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| 1) was that supposed to be funny? (seriously) 2) grammar.  |
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Shyguy The Original Femme Fatale! Level: 57 Posts: 313/1998 EXP: 1443008 For next: 42920 Since: 02-14-05 Since last post: 2 hours Last activity: 1 hour |
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No, it was action. Not comedy..... and I only had one grammar error. (edited by Master M on 03-19-05 02:04 AM) |
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JDavis Trick or Treating Local Mod Affected by 'Halloween Syndrome' ++ Level: 44  Posts: 558/815 EXP: 568676 For next: 42609 Since: 03-15-04 From: Ada, Oklahoma, USA Since last post: 5 hours Last activity: 4 hours |
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| You still have text touching, and sometimes going outside, the borders of the text boxes... And when I said they should be pointed at the mouth I didn't mean they should go over the people's faces like that, I just meant that the general direction they should be pointed is toward the mouth. Other than that... It's better than the first one, but what's with the stripes in backgrounds of the fourth and eighth panels? |
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Shyguy The Original Femme Fatale! Level: 57 Posts: 315/1998 EXP: 1443008 For next: 42920 Since: 02-14-05 Since last post: 2 hours Last activity: 1 hour |
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| That's my feeble attempt at day transition. The comic takes place early in the morning. | |||
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Black Lord Level: 34 Posts: 228/453 EXP: 235639 For next: 18012 Since: 03-15-04 From: Nebraska, what's a Nebraska Since last post: 8 days Last activity: 1 day |
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| It's better then your last attempt, but really not much better... the sprites don't match up too well with eachother, especially the self made things. And for being 17 years old, I'd think you could think of some better dialogue. | |||
Ramadan Roy Like Like ...Or you'll be wearing your ass for a hat. Renowned Otaku Level: 44 Posts: 608/816 EXP: 569705 For next: 41580 Since: 03-15-04 Since last post: 13 hours Last activity: 7 hours |
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Originally posted by Master M Two, actually. One doesn't say "gut feeling". (edited by The Dogan on 03-19-05 10:41 PM) |
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JDavis Trick or Treating Local Mod Affected by 'Halloween Syndrome' ++ Level: 44 Posts: 560/815 EXP: 568676 For next: 42609 Since: 03-15-04 From: Ada, Oklahoma, USA Since last post: 5 hours Last activity: 4 hours |
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| Uh... yeah, they do. | |||
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Valcion YOU WA SHOCK Level: 50  Posts: 817/1139 EXP: 939607 For next: 7710 Since: 03-15-04 From: internets. Since last post: 3 hours Last activity: 2 hours |
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| A guy puts a couple of sprites in his comic and he thinks he's the funniest guy ever. Your comic sucks. TOP VIEW SPRTIES DO NOT GO IN A SIDE VIEW COMIC. |
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Peardian Lava Lotus The Uncanny Mario Art Master KvSG #87 is up! No Trouter yet... Halloween's over... Turkey time! Level: 58  Posts: 448/1696 EXP: 1545376 For next: 32170 Since: 07-01-04 From: before 3:00 - school, after 3:00 - Pearl Island Since last post: 7 hours Last activity: 6 hours |
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| I'm interested in where this is going. Try moving the text over a little... |
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Shyguy The Original Femme Fatale! Level: 57 Posts: 320/1998 EXP: 1443008 For next: 42920 Since: 02-14-05 Since last post: 2 hours Last activity: 1 hour |
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Originally posted by ValcionGot me a sore throat..... |
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Violent J Melon Bug Level: 41  Posts: 272/749 EXP: 479154 For next: 991 Since: 05-05-04 From: Since last post: 8 hours Last activity: 8 hours |
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You should get Photoshop CS. I have it and look at my fancomic for Fireball20xl.com, it's beutifull! Incase you cant tell the picture is Psy holding a banana. (edited by Sonicandtails on 03-21-05 04:53 PM) |
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Peardian Lava Lotus The Uncanny Mario Art Master KvSG #87 is up! No Trouter yet... Halloween's over... Turkey time! Level: 58 Posts: 460/1696 EXP: 1545376 For next: 32170 Since: 07-01-04 From: before 3:00 - school, after 3:00 - Pearl Island Since last post: 7 hours Last activity: 6 hours |
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| The speech bubbles are cool. What's with Psy's eyes? | |||
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JDavis Trick or Treating Local Mod Affected by 'Halloween Syndrome' ++ Level: 44 Posts: 562/815 EXP: 568676 For next: 42609 Since: 03-15-04 From: Ada, Oklahoma, USA Since last post: 5 hours Last activity: 4 hours |
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I think he's supposed be doing this:  ... But they did a bad job of it. (edited by JDavis on 03-21-05 10:08 PM) |
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Peardian Lava Lotus The Uncanny Mario Art Master KvSG #87 is up! No Trouter yet... Halloween's over... Turkey time! Level: 58 Posts: 463/1696 EXP: 1545376 For next: 32170 Since: 07-01-04 From: before 3:00 - school, after 3:00 - Pearl Island Since last post: 7 hours Last activity: 6 hours |
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| Oh... I see it now... I like the sketch. | |||
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Shyguy The Original Femme Fatale! Level: 57 Posts: 327/1998 EXP: 1443008 For next: 42920 Since: 02-14-05 Since last post: 2 hours Last activity: 1 hour |
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 Personally, I like the second part better.(edited by Master M on 03-23-05 07:11 AM) |
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Peardian Lava Lotus The Uncanny Mario Art Master KvSG #87 is up! No Trouter yet... Halloween's over... Turkey time! Level: 58 Posts: 467/1696 EXP: 1545376 For next: 32170 Since: 07-01-04 From: before 3:00 - school, after 3:00 - Pearl Island Since last post: 7 hours Last activity: 6 hours |
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| Haha... silly Knuckles. Why is everything white with black outlines? Is that Brumbland? I think you need a new Link sprite... Try one of the sprites from the 2D rooms. |
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