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| Acmlm's Board - I2 Archive - Modern Art - Yup, another one :P |
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Vyper Bit Level: 26  Posts: 48/256 EXP: 100094 For next: 2181 Since: 03-15-04 From: Final Fantasy Fire Since last post: 8 days Last activity: 7 days |
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Ok, I made this yesterday and am looking for some more comments on it. It's supposed to be non-color (hense the name Shadow Flare). I believe I've improved tremendously in this one, and I've gotten some good comment so far. How is it? |
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windwaker Ball and Chain Trooper WHY ALL THE MAYONNAISE HATE Level: 61  Posts: 1234/1797 EXP: 1860597 For next: 15999 Since: 03-15-04 Since last post: 4 days Last activity: 6 days |
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| That's great, man. The A's and L could be a bit more distinct, though. | |||
Itachi86 Micro-Goomba Level: 7 Posts: 8/16 EXP: 1009 For next: 439 Since: 02-26-05 Since last post: 244 days Last activity: 244 days |
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Yea, it looks good. Everything seems to fit in nicely, and I agree, the A's and L's need to be fixed or something. |
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Vyper Bit Level: 26 Posts: 49/256 EXP: 100094 For next: 2181 Since: 03-15-04 From: Final Fantasy Fire Since last post: 8 days Last activity: 7 days |
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| Thanks guys, I'll look into a better grunge font. Got any suggestions? | |||
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Keikonium Banned Level: NAN Posts: 1015/-2459 EXP: NAN For next: 0 Since: 04-02-04 Since last post: 63 days Last activity: 9 hours |
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| That looks really good. The L's dont seem bad at all, but the A's don't really look like A's...more like triangles.... I found this one font:  that may look good if you wanted to use it...it can be downloaded Here if you run windows and Here if your running a Mac. |
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Vyper Bit Level: 26 Posts: 50/256 EXP: 100094 For next: 2181 Since: 03-15-04 From: Final Fantasy Fire Since last post: 8 days Last activity: 7 days |
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Ooooh, that is a nifty font  I'll experiment another time with different fonts, I'm getting tired  I just got done with another one, this for a friend.  |
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Tarale I'm not under the alfluence of incohol like some thinkle peop I am. It's just the drunker I sit here the longer I get.  Level: 73  Posts: 1490/2720 EXP: 3458036 For next: 27832 Since: 03-18-04 From: Adelaide, Australia Since last post: 4 hours Last activity: 2 hours |
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| Not a fan of the Vash one, just cause I don't think I like the way it fades out. Might've been better if you'd just left the extraction complete and found a different way to blend into the background.... | |||
Kario In Possession of a Stolen Shovel Level: 65 Posts: 1367/2082 EXP: 2321379 For next: 14249 Since: 03-15-04 From: Texas... Yeehaw! Since last post: 2 days Last activity: 17 hours |
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| Kinda looks like Sharow Elare, but it still looks cool. Vash one is awesome. |
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ETG Tektite Level: 14 Posts: 37/60 EXP: 11348 For next: 1723 Since: 03-16-04 From: Texas Since last post: 6 days Last activity: 5 hours |
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| Pretty good. The way the finger just comes out of nowhere to hold the donut on the Vash one bothers me. You could convert the text to paths and edit the text in the first one to make it more readable. | |||
Peardian Lava Lotus The Uncanny Mario Art Master KvSG #87 is up! No Trouter yet... Halloween's over... Turkey time! Level: 58  Posts: 374/1696 EXP: 1545376 For next: 32170 Since: 07-01-04 From: before 3:00 - school, after 3:00 - Pearl Island Since last post: 7 hours Last activity: 6 hours |
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| Looks good, but the letters L,A, and D are kinda hard to read. I like donuts... | |||
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Itachi86 Micro-Goomba Level: 7 Posts: 11/16 EXP: 1009 For next: 439 Since: 02-26-05 Since last post: 244 days Last activity: 244 days |
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| you should work on your blending for the vash sig. Other than that, good job. | |||
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Vyper Bit Level: 26 Posts: 51/256 EXP: 100094 For next: 2181 Since: 03-15-04 From: Final Fantasy Fire Since last post: 8 days Last activity: 7 days |
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| Updated! |
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Kario In Possession of a Stolen Shovel Level: 65 Posts: 1381/2082 EXP: 2321379 For next: 14249 Since: 03-15-04 From: Texas... Yeehaw! Since last post: 2 days Last activity: 17 hours |
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| Much better on the first one. The Vash one is still my favorite. | |||
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Peardian Lava Lotus The Uncanny Mario Art Master KvSG #87 is up! No Trouter yet... Halloween's over... Turkey time! Level: 58 Posts: 376/1696 EXP: 1545376 For next: 32170 Since: 07-01-04 From: before 3:00 - school, after 3:00 - Pearl Island Since last post: 7 hours Last activity: 6 hours |
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That looks better, but the f is kinda hard to read. And, Itachi86, your layout just consumed Vyper's post...  |
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Itachi86 Micro-Goomba Level: 7 Posts: 13/16 EXP: 1009 For next: 439 Since: 02-26-05 Since last post: 244 days Last activity: 244 days |
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are you serious???? I tested this layout in IE and firefox, thats not happening to me, I'll take it off right away, and see if i can fix it.  (edited by Itachi86 on 03-01-05 07:14 PM) |
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ETG Tektite Level: 14 Posts: 38/60 EXP: 11348 For next: 1723 Since: 03-16-04 From: Texas Since last post: 6 days Last activity: 5 hours |
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| You still need to adjust the type. Atleast get rid of one of those smears below the 'a' so it dosen't repeat. (add a spill to another letter if you like it, it just looks too cookie cutter for a random grungy mess.) |
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