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Level: 82 Posts: 808/1610 EXP: 5120948 Next: 88279 Since: 02-19-07 Last post: 3612 days Last view: 4602 days |
Ok |
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Level: 82 Posts: 816/1610 EXP: 5120948 Next: 88279 Since: 02-19-07 Last post: 3612 days Last view: 4602 days |
Really, this is worse than before. |
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Level: 82 Posts: 818/1610 EXP: 5120948 Next: 88279 Since: 02-19-07 Last post: 3612 days Last view: 4602 days |
Don't you mean "optimal board quality"? |
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Level: 82 Posts: 819/1610 EXP: 5120948 Next: 88279 Since: 02-19-07 Last post: 3612 days Last view: 4602 days |
Optimal in the sense that all the layouts suck. |
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Level: 82 Posts: 825/1610 EXP: 5120948 Next: 88279 Since: 02-19-07 Last post: 3612 days Last view: 4602 days |
Squash, your layout makes ignoring what you say really easy. |
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Level: 82 Posts: 827/1610 EXP: 5120948 Next: 88279 Since: 02-19-07 Last post: 3612 days Last view: 4602 days |
It lacks contrast. |
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Level: 82 Posts: 838/1610 EXP: 5120948 Next: 88279 Since: 02-19-07 Last post: 3612 days Last view: 4602 days |
What is a thought, but half of another? |
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Level: 82 Posts: 840/1610 EXP: 5120948 Next: 88279 Since: 02-19-07 Last post: 3612 days Last view: 4602 days |
Thanks for having a layout that's readable, stag. |
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Level: 82 Posts: 842/1610 EXP: 5120948 Next: 88279 Since: 02-19-07 Last post: 3612 days Last view: 4602 days |
Haha, your country has flooding. |
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Level: 82 Posts: 843/1610 EXP: 5120948 Next: 88279 Since: 02-19-07 Last post: 3612 days Last view: 4602 days |
Posted by Har D. Har KoopaPosted by Clockworkz I don't think he's attacking you personaly. |
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Level: 82 Posts: 845/1610 EXP: 5120948 Next: 88279 Since: 02-19-07 Last post: 3612 days Last view: 4602 days |
It doesn't rain, cloud over or anything here. It doesn't even get cold or hot. =\ |
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Level: 82 Posts: 847/1610 EXP: 5120948 Next: 88279 Since: 02-19-07 Last post: 3612 days Last view: 4602 days |
It's not that bad, just work on the language flow, and maybe use commas. I really like the line where Bob said “I slipped.”, it really illustrates the type of character this Bob is and the transition is pretty smooth there. I thought the spacing was a bit odd, so if you're trying to make a poem, try something easy like iambic pentameter for a start. If it's just supposed to be prose, you don't have to use all those new lines, except when starting a new paragraph.
In this case it's rather fitting because of Bob's passive nature, but using passive verbs really has an impact on how people visualize the character. Just my input. O: |
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Level: 82 Posts: 848/1610 EXP: 5120948 Next: 88279 Since: 02-19-07 Last post: 3612 days Last view: 4602 days |
It's 7x Fahrenheit and slightly breezy all the time. |
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Level: 82 Posts: 849/1610 EXP: 5120948 Next: 88279 Since: 02-19-07 Last post: 3612 days Last view: 4602 days |
A bit south of you, I think, in San Diego, CA. |
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Level: 82 Posts: 852/1610 EXP: 5120948 Next: 88279 Since: 02-19-07 Last post: 3612 days Last view: 4602 days |
Posted by FSX It's less than a mile from the coast, I don't know what you're talking about. |
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Level: 82 Posts: 853/1610 EXP: 5120948 Next: 88279 Since: 02-19-07 Last post: 3612 days Last view: 4602 days |
Luminous might be closer to truth. |
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Level: 82 Posts: 854/1610 EXP: 5120948 Next: 88279 Since: 02-19-07 Last post: 3612 days Last view: 4602 days |
In reference to your schedule, as opposed to 'light', Alastor. |
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Level: 82 Posts: 855/1610 EXP: 5120948 Next: 88279 Since: 02-19-07 Last post: 3612 days Last view: 4602 days |
Incidentally, ||board is better, but that's really non-topical. |
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Level: 82 Posts: 858/1610 EXP: 5120948 Next: 88279 Since: 02-19-07 Last post: 3612 days Last view: 4602 days |
Posted by Gywall How about a legal action theme to go along with it? |
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Level: 82 Posts: 859/1610 EXP: 5120948 Next: 88279 Since: 02-19-07 Last post: 3612 days Last view: 4602 days |
89th hole in the ground. |
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