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 Porcupo Level: 41 Posts: 38/317 EXP: 446195 Next: 33950 Since: 03-29-07 From: Somewhere far, far away. Last post: 6074 days Last view: 5258 days |
FirePhoenix0 gave me an idea for a Zelda story, and I want to know if anyone would care enough that I eould actualy write it. I have a good idea for the plot.
Link himself will not actually be in it. I will make up places, (Exept, like, Hyrule Caste and death mountain and stuff) for it takes place in the distant future with Links ancestor. |
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 Bullet Bill Level: 50 Posts: 154/505 EXP: 899605 Next: 47712 Since: 02-23-07 Last post: 5531 days Last view: 5514 days |
Cool, I give inspiration. 
Anyways, I think that if you have an idea for a story, go for it. Who says you need a strong following on this board to be able to write it. there are plenty of other places to showcase your work, online or in real life. Or, you can just write for yourself. That's what I did with my first story, until I discovered online communities. I say that you should start writing it and if you find yourself to continue to have inspiration as you write, keep going.  ____________________ |
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Porcupo Level: 41 Posts: 71/317 EXP: 446195 Next: 33950 Since: 03-29-07 From: Somewhere far, far away. Last post: 6074 days Last view: 5258 days |
Okay 
Here it is... ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Installment 1 Terin darted out of the house and scrambled up a tree. He crawled from branch to branch as he approached the gates. As he looked down to check on the guards, he missed his footing. One of the guards frowned and looked up as Terin jumped up a branch, disappearing into the leaves. The guard stood for a second, then shook himself and looked back down. Terin let loose a great sigh of relief. He slowly progressed until he was over the fence. He began to climb down when he heard a guard say, "You know, I swear I saw something move in that tree a second ago." The other replied ,"It was probably just a squirrel. Stop jabbering." "No, it was bigger then that. Maybe we should check it out." "It was nothin', stop fretting," "Really, I saw something." "Fine, fine a quick search, if it'll please you..." The gate slowly came open, and Terin backed into the foliage and picked up a rock. The two guards walked out, and taking careful aim, Terin threw the rock behind the two, rustling a bush across the path. "What was that?" "It came from over there!" With the guards distracted, Terin slipped off down the road. After a sufficient distance, he slowed down and looked back. The guards had stopped searching and closed up the gates. "Well, glad that's over with," Terin stuck his hands into his pockets and turned to a wild game trail off into the forest. As he descended into the thick of the woods, the trail began to slope down. After a heady trek, he came out into a small clearing. It was a grassy indent in the earth, with a small waterfall and stream. There, tied to a tree near the middle, stood Terin's horse, Uterin. She was slowly chewing on some grass, but looked up as Terin approached. Uterin whinnied, “Hey there, girl. Settle down. You don’t want to attract the guards, do you?” Terin said softly, feeding her a sugar cube. Twenty minutes later found Uterin sipping stream water, while her master laid on the ground, staring up at the stars. As he began to close his eyes, he heard voices. They were loud and urgent, and Terin stood up. He heard a yell, and set off at a run. He slipped up the makeshift path as the noises began to get louder. As he approached the opening, he stopped in the shadows and watched. A large group of soldiers began down the path, leaded by a knight in all black armor. He wore a large thick visor, so his face was blocked off. As the group progressed, Terin saw people he knew. It was the Herin town villagers! They were being led along in chains and shackles. As the group passed, however, Terin noticed that someone wasn’t there. It was his cousin, Elisea. She must have escaped. The soldiers and townsfolk finely passed, and Terin tiptoed out into the open. The guards were gone, and the gate was wide open. Terin ran into the town and entered Elisea’s home. He searched around, but found not hide nor hair of his cousin. As he began to leave, however, something caught his eye. On a shelf by the door was a sword. It was the heirloom of the Old Ordon line. He gently lifted it down and admired it. It glinted in the moonlight from the open window. He began to put it back when a shriek split the air. “HEEEEEELP!” End of installment 1 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ |
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Bullet Bill Level: 50 Posts: 158/505 EXP: 899605 Next: 47712 Since: 02-23-07 Last post: 5531 days Last view: 5514 days |
Not bad at all; I can see promise in it. Nice use of description and good job ending the chapter with a cliffhanger. That's a very good way to keep people interested, but that doesn't mean to do it every chapter.
I'm interested in it. Even though this writing board is pretty dead to the rest of the users here, keep posting more as you write. At the very least, you'll have one reader, and hopefully more. ____________________ |
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