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Hiryuu
Posted on 06-25-07 09:45 AM (rev. 2 of 06-25-07 09:45 AM) Link | Quote | ID: 49365

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Well, I -am- working on it but...

...I got sidetracked with a few things, including looking at Rydain's novella, so I only have a spoiler to give you. I have tomorrow off and should have it finished by then if it's any consellation.

Spoiler:

“Who are you?”

Rain gulped, not exactly sure what she was supposed to say to something like that. “Ah, ahm...just passing through?”

The short, blue-haired girl grabbed a spear from behind her back to bring to full view where Rain could see. That made Rain more tense. “Ahahahaha...shit?”

The girl pointed the spear directly at Rain. “You’re to come with me.”

“Why?” Rain asked plainly.

That was enough to get a reaction. More or less the wrong one. The girl quickly jabbed forward, attempting to skewer Rain in the process. She only met with minor success, nicking Rain on the shoulder as she dodge rolled off to side, feeling a pang of pain come from the near-death experience.

“Ah!” Rain winced, noting the cut she had when she got back up. ~She’s fast!~

This wasn’t going to be pretty.

“I’ll only say this once more. Come with me now,” the girl repeated.

Rain grimaced. “You know, that’s not a really nice way to address someone you know tha-whoa!”

She jumped back this time, missing another spear thrust by inches and moving towards the entrance crater that didn’t look too fun to drop in on with all the rocks below her and the jagged cliffs leading to the ground about a good fifty feet down.

~I have a feeling this means we can’t be friends...~ Rain thought, mildly complaining to herself about her left shoulder...

Which soon healed itself within a few seconds of her thinking that as a cool feeling went through her. It made her slightly dizzy considering it caught her off-guard. She looked at her shoulder briefly afterwards, noticing the mark was gone.

“You forget that we’re here, you know.” Yukina said, internally.

Rain dodged yet another thrust but this time took the option of delivering a vicious spin kick to the girl’s head when she passed her up, sending her sprawling to the ground, making not much more than a grunt upon hitting it.

~That’s all well and good, but...~

The girl got back up, briefly dusting herself off. Rain gaped, noticing that it barely did anything to her.

~...~

She then jumped, spear in hand and dive-bombed Rain’s position, who dodged out of the way, taking some excess debris with her on the girl’s warpath crash into the ground.

“Urgh!” Rain said, getting knocked back by the rocks that flew her way on impact.

~...how am I gonna...~

Her train of thought was interrupted as a few other sounds could be heard around a cliff edge on where they stood. More of them...swords.

~...fight all of these?!~

Hiryuu
Posted on 06-26-07 06:25 AM (rev. 2 of 06-26-07 10:38 AM) Link | Quote | ID: 49674

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And OF COURSE my piece of crud server decides to die (for once, in a long time).

Temp link for Chapter 17.
Permanent Link for Chapter 17.

I'll repost this after my server goes back up but it IS written.

EDITED!

Hiryuu
Posted on 07-01-07 08:14 PM Link | Quote | ID: 51258

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Okay guys...I've got the most part of 18 up and running but I'll likely finish off the rest of it and have it up by Monday morning.

Was gonna hold it at ransom because of X but meh...

After that, 19 and end of arc.

Then I dunno what.

Hiryuu
Posted on 07-02-07 12:02 PM Link | Quote | ID: 51570

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Chapter 18's done.

Hiryuu
Posted on 07-10-07 05:39 PM Link | Quote | ID: 53687

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Well, I got a little ways into 19 but there's just so much I've yet to write. I've extended my due date out until next Sunday to try to come up with everything that I need to write to get it correct. I have a lot of things to close up and not a lot of time to do so. Hopefully, I can get this done by then.

Hiryuu
Posted on 07-28-07 06:37 AM Link | Quote | ID: 59139

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Those of you that actually follow this may note that I have, in fact, not got 19 up yet.

Well a few things happened and one of them was that I got a new job. Thanks to that I've been VERY MUCH pressed for time and not able to complete what I had down for 19. That should probably come as no surprise. I really won't have time to start working on this until another week from now and I also have people breathing down my neck about DDR simming. Very tight ship I'm running and someone's going to get the short end so I can't really tell you when 19 will be done. Just know that it will be big, large and probably well worth the time to end up this arc.
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