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dastari
Posted on 08-31-09 08:34 AM Link | Quote | ID: 114308


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Last view: 5320 days 		My wife and I just made a label for Dragoon X Omega, a Dragon Warrior hack. Let me know what you think.

http://i648.photobucket.com/albums/uu208/dastari/BKDragoon.png

Bukkarooo
Posted on 08-31-09 10:51 PM Link | Quote | ID: 114320


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Looks good, though the drawn girl against a picture background seems a bit off. Also, you're going to want to take off Nintendo's name and its seal of quality. Since it's a hack, which also isn't finished, they wouldn't have given it that seal. May not seem like a big deal, but remove it just to be safe, in case Nintendo somehow stumbles upon the art.

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setz
Posted on 09-01-09 12:59 PM Link | Quote | ID: 114333


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Posted by Bukkarooo
... Since it's a hack, which also isn't finished, they wouldn't have given it that seal...

huh?

Trax: wow that seems like a blatant advertisement

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Bukkarooo
Posted on 09-01-09 10:40 PM Link | Quote | ID: 114350


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The box art has the Nintendo Seal of Quality thing. They wouldn't want that being put on something they didn't make.

and Trax, setz is right, don't advertise so blatantly

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setz
Posted on 09-03-09 02:44 AM Link | Quote | ID: 114388


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Last view: 2581 days 		no i understand that part, what I didn't get was are you saying DXO is unfinished? Its kind of the finished updated version of one hack, and even has a finished sequel.

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Bukkarooo
Posted on 09-03-09 03:16 AM Link | Quote | ID: 114389


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oh... well, that just shows how little I know about hacks and such haha

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Posted on 09-04-09 01:18 AM Link | Quote | ID: 114423


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blackhole89
Posted on 09-04-09 01:34 AM Link | Quote | ID: 114425


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Even on cartridge labels, passages of text Capitalized Like This are rather penetrant. You should do away with most of the capital letters in that portion.

Also, the anime-style character needs some work. The lines and shading come across as somewhat awkward.

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dastari
Posted on 09-09-09 03:37 AM Link | Quote | ID: 114752


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Last view: 5320 days 		Thank you all for the criticism. I was also going to point out that the hack was finished some time ago.

Also try and keep in mind that when reduced to NES label size a lot of these issues are more difficult to see.

Also regarding the text, my idea was to mirror the style of the Dragon Warrior label as much as possible which is where the text is there and why it is the way that it is.

Now as for making the character blend in better with the background and working on the shading I will take to heart and see what I can do.

More comments are appreciated if forthcoming.

Thanks!

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