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Please chime in on a proposed restructuring of the ROM hacking sections.

05-04-24 08:35 AM

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emcee

Posted on 07-05-07 04:44 AM

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His tears look like a handkerchief coming out of his eye.

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Stark

Posted on 07-05-07 05:05 AM

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Considerably better linework, but the hair is still wrong and I'm can't call it good until you color it.

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Posted on 07-05-07 08:03 AM

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Posted on 07-05-07 08:12 AM

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lighting: its mostly consistent this time except for the tears, and the hair. everything else seems lit from the top-left, but his left (our right) side of the face has tears highlighted from the other side, and the hair seems like just a gradient.

I can see how this might have happened seeing as how all the official art isn't exactly awesome, but you're not bound by those rules. Perhaps you should have the hair colors follow the protrusions at the top, even if the original art isn't exactly like that it'll give the idea that they're different strands/bushels of hair and are each colored differently. Another thing with the hair is it doesn't seem to come foward at all, like a mohawk would; it seems like a fan behind the head more than hair, it should follow the angle of his face accordingly (the pink section should be roughly between his eyes.)

You've also got some bad inconsistencies with the line weight, and it just doesn't look good. If you're going to have outlines at least make them all similar, I can understand some interior lines being thinner, but other than the mouth, the nose, the toes, tears, and the eyelids, it looks tacky.

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