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Clockworkz |
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Panser Level: 42 Posts: 216/344 EXP: 505779 Next: 15583 Since: 02-19-07 Last post: 5379 days Last view: 5375 days |
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Xkeeper |
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Level: 105 Posts: 2451/2846 EXP: 12035865 Next: 226395 Since: 02-19-07 Last post: 6068 days Last view: 2805 days |
Xkeeper is getting too comfortable with the quote button, methinks.
The text and textbox don't fit at all. I don't know what it is, but it feels clashing. The left character is looking fowards (towards us), yet the text indicats "to the right". Comics suck that way. It might be better to exclude direction from the text entirely and let the characters themselves show where it's coming from. ____________________ I dealt with it. |
Clockworkz |
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Hiryuu |
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Done. Level: 79 Posts: 1134/1471 EXP: 4472393 Next: 107074 Since: 02-19-07 From: ??? Last post: 6094 days Last view: 6087 days |
Pretty much what X said.
If it's left, have it point left; right - right, behind or forwards - none at all. |
Sonicandfails |
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Lantern Ghost Level: 60 Posts: 656/766 EXP: 1680609 Next: 92169 Since: 02-19-07 Last post: 5972 days Last view: 5778 days |
I would suggest the textbox is given a semi-transparent look with a possible glow or emboss/bevel. ____________________ I miss post headers more. |
Clockworkz |
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Sonicandfails |
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Lantern Ghost Level: 60 Posts: 664/766 EXP: 1680609 Next: 92169 Since: 02-19-07 Last post: 5972 days Last view: 5778 days |
The pure white clashes with the rest of the panel. ____________________ I miss post headers more. |
cpubasic13 |
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Lakitu Level: 52 Posts: 406/555 EXP: 1036488 Next: 47352 Since: 02-19-07 From: Citra, Florida Last post: 6023 days Last view: 4454 days |
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Clockworkz |
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Panser Level: 42 Posts: 222/344 EXP: 505779 Next: 15583 Since: 02-19-07 Last post: 5379 days Last view: 5375 days |
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Sonicandfails |
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Lantern Ghost Level: 60 Posts: 665/766 EXP: 1680609 Next: 92169 Since: 02-19-07 Last post: 5972 days Last view: 5778 days |
Ok, perhaps just a semi-transparent would do the white of the speech bubble justice. ____________________ I miss post headers more. |
Hiryuu |
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Done. Level: 79 Posts: 1161/1471 EXP: 4472393 Next: 107074 Since: 02-19-07 From: ??? Last post: 6094 days Last view: 6087 days |
I think he's trying to say something around the lines of making the BG to the speech bubble about 80% or 90% opacity so the background art isn't completely cut away. I guess that'd work but that's really a matter of preference.
By the by, much better. |
Raccoon Sam |
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Cobrat Level: 56 Posts: 271/672 EXP: 1380901 Next: 17275 Since: 02-19-07 From: Hi Last post: 3475 days Last view: 2707 days |
The speech bubble is alright I guess, but I don't like how you've drawn the characters.
I mean, look at her lower armpit. The brushwork there looks really choppy. ____________________ |
setz |
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Spike fuck~ Level: 58 Posts: 531/722 EXP: 1537874 Next: 39672 Since: 02-19-07 From: Pittsburgh, PA Last post: 5298 days Last view: 2586 days |
Posted by Raccoon Sam thats not choppy brushwork, thats hair. ____________________ |
Raccoon Sam |
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Cobrat Level: 56 Posts: 272/672 EXP: 1380901 Next: 17275 Since: 02-19-07 From: Hi Last post: 3475 days Last view: 2707 days |
I didn't mean that...
I meant the edge of her shirt or whatever, near the armpit. Look at the edge of it. ____________________ |
Clockworkz |
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Panser Level: 42 Posts: 224/344 EXP: 505779 Next: 15583 Since: 02-19-07 Last post: 5379 days Last view: 5375 days |
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Hiryuu |
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Done. Level: 79 Posts: 1165/1471 EXP: 4472393 Next: 107074 Since: 02-19-07 From: ??? Last post: 6094 days Last view: 6087 days |
Not to mention, most of these things take years of time to get completely right. The fact that you're -consistently- working on it (and have been over a long period of time) is proof enough that you'll get something that you'll eventually like and run with it.
Two things I can think of that went from readable to really good was Dominic Deegan and EGS and Clockz had a better start than either of them, really. I'd really wonder how the would progress three-to-five years from now. |
Raccoon Sam |
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Cobrat Level: 56 Posts: 273/672 EXP: 1380901 Next: 17275 Since: 02-19-07 From: Hi Last post: 3475 days Last view: 2707 days |
Posted by Clockworkz Hey, it's alright. From a guy who says he's "only learning" and with only a Mouse and Photoshop 6, that's pretty damn good! ____________________ |
CKY-9K |
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Pokey Level: 57 Posts: 98/693 EXP: 1431394 Next: 54534 Since: 06-27-07 From: cKy Last post: 218 days Last view: 126 days |
It's pure fucking shit, no I'm pulling your leg.
It's pretty nice actually. ____________________ |
Clockworkz |
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Tatrion |
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Beezo Level: 49 Posts: 373/477 EXP: 825825 Next: 58058 Since: 02-19-07 Last post: 5890 days Last view: 5871 days |
*post asking for legible text* ____________________ |
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