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Kirby Mario
Posted on 02-21-07 06:48 AM Link | Quote | ID: 3236


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Before I start showing my screenshots I only have time to upload the worlds and
I don't have enough time to upload others.

Story: Undecided

Worlds:





[img]http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h282/KirbyMario/w4.png[/img

I have no time to add screenshots of the levels and upload them yet. Probably tomorrow.

Any comments?


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tt87
Posted on 02-21-07 03:25 PM Link | Quote | ID: 3458


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1st reply!

Looking good.

What's with the transparent castle top?

Raccoon Sam
Posted on 02-21-07 03:26 PM Link | Quote | ID: 3460


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The Overworlds look pretty dandy, but you shouldn't have big plain areas. Add more bushes and decorations.

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Kles
Posted on 02-21-07 03:51 PM Link | Quote | ID: 3464


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Looks creative and different. Although undetailed, it looks a little big like a half way realistic world.

blackhole89
Posted on 02-21-07 08:59 PM Link | Quote | ID: 3612


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Yeah, you ought to add somewhat more detail to it.

Also, stop taking screenshots straight from LM.

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Nicole
Posted on 02-21-07 09:46 PM Link | Quote | ID: 3664


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On the second screenshot, you have a long straight coastline going across the top... you should try to change that up a little and add some things.

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Higsby
Posted on 02-21-07 11:01 PM Link | Quote | ID: 3758


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In the second screen shot there is a green switch palace beside a yellow level. Unless it was an accident make sure to change that level to red. Other than that it doesn't look bad for a first hack.

Ailure
Posted on 02-22-07 12:09 AM Link | Quote | ID: 3887

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Third overworld looks a bit plain.

Otherwise, I like the overworlds. Bit squarish at places, but much better than most SMW hacks, well at least compared to the ones I played...

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Krisan Thyme
Posted on 02-22-07 12:39 PM Link | Quote | ID: 4453


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I'd have to agree with Ailure, it looks much better than what I'm used to seeing here for someone just starting out, but.. There is quite a lot of room for improvement as well.. For example, the flat straight edges along the top of the second screenshot would do much better if it were.. well, not flat and straight. Hard edges like that are kind of bland, uninteresting really.

There are numerous other things I could spend the time criticizing, but for now I'd say just to work on making the islands seem more shapely and go from there based on the opinions you get from it.

Kles
Posted on 02-22-07 07:09 PM Link | Quote | ID: 4613


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I actually found the third one quite interesting. It needs more detail, but the basic layout is nice.

Krisan Thyme
Posted on 02-22-07 07:34 PM Link | Quote | ID: 4635


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The general idea of whats going on in the third one is good, yea. It just could use a lot of tweaking to make it better overall, the implementation itself could be done better I guess I'm saying.

Kirby Mario
Posted on 02-22-07 08:37 PM Link | Quote | ID: 4695


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I noticed that after I uploaded the images. Thanks for telling me about the overworlds.

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piplup324
Posted on 07-23-07 03:36 AM Link | Quote | ID: 57003


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pretty cool and nice over world but theres a problem when i use events when ever i beat the level nothing happens and im not a basic hacker

Ice phoenix
Posted on 07-23-07 04:12 PM Link | Quote | ID: 57175


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[citation needed]

Maxx
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The third and foruth world look a bit plain. Are you working on that?

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Ailure
Posted on 07-25-07 12:10 AM Link | Quote | ID: 57521

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Posted by piplup324
pretty cool and nice over world but theres a problem when i use events when ever i beat the level nothing happens and im not a basic hacker
Don't bump five months old thread, especially when you're asking a question that is way offtopic.

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