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| Acmlm's Board - I3 Archive - Modern Art - I had a freaky dream. So I made a story based on it. |
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Deleted User Banned                  Since: 05-08-06 Last post: None Last view: 6301 days |
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Very freaky dream. Not so good story about it, but meh. I'm a first-timer. Be nice in critiquing please. Even if you have to be mean, be nice.  |
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Razman Red Paragoomba       Since: 11-17-05 From: Where I can kick your ass Last post: 6490 days Last view: 6490 days |
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| ...Like you said. Freaky... VERY freaky. That's all I can say. I had a freaky dream too and I wanted to make a movie about it. | |||
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Thank you Razman. 
Everyone else, what's taking ya? Alright! Be mean then. 
Just critique it.  |
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Alastor Fearless Moderator Hero  Since: 11-17-05 From: An apartment by DigiPen, Redmond, Washington Last post: 6301 days Last view: 6301 days |
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| Honestly, what's there to say? It's not very good, and you apparently already know this so you likely know why =/ | |||
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Deleted User Banned Since: 05-08-06 Last post: None Last view: 6301 days |
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| I actually take a liking to it. It has a nice freaky feel to it. Have you read it word for word? | |||
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Deleted User Banned Since: 05-08-06 Last post: None Last view: 6301 days |
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| What is your favorite part of it? | |||
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I thought you could only post once!?!?! You dream about Hedgehogs? |
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Schwa Panser Embodiment of Good, infused with the Living Assets "Alpha Psibeam!" (echo effects)  Since: 11-18-05 From: Tacoma, WA of the Material Plane; Crystal Psipalace Last post: 6563 days Last view: 6305 days |
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| Some of the best stories are inspired by dreams.
I'm a huge Sonic fan. This story wigs me out. BAD. Nice job there. 
Although... Tails Doll WAS a real character. Ever play Sonic R for the Saturn console? He wasn't a very good character, though... but that's off topic. Still, Alastor, don't say things like that, really. Writing about scary dreams helps people like us to relieve us of their aftereffects. Subconsciously that's probably what Shyguy was trying to accomplish. And that's coming from a hardcore writer's perspective. So there. (Yeah, Shy, it wasn't bad, but don't let it go to yer head! Woot!) |
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Sukasa Birdo Not quite as active as before. Xkeeper supporter Xk > ||bass I IP Banned myself! Twice!  Since: 11-17-05 From: Somewhere over there Last post: 6302 days Last view: 6301 days |
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| Interesting... definitely freaky. to be honest though, it felt a little rushed, but that's about it. I'm a fairly big sonic fan too, and I liked the story overall. (edited by Sukasa + on 05-25-06 03:23 PM) (edited by Sukasa + on 05-25-06 03:23 PM) |
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