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Clockworkz Birdon Since: 11-18-05 Last post: 6430 days Last view: 6430 days |
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And a more refined Werewolf girl to boot.
Ta da. This I know: The chest seems a bit thin, and the hair is blurry and odd. First time with that technique. I'm also aware that the left arm seems a bit poorly constructed, but that's just me. Also, the right arm may or may not be a little too long. I don't know. EDIT: Spent an hour refining. She looks better. Check the link again.... (edited by Clockworkz on 04-25-06 08:01 PM) |
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Simon Belmont Except I'm totally fucking hyped about Dracula X: Chronicles. Since: 11-18-05 From: Pittsburgh Last post: 6430 days Last view: 6430 days |
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The shading on the hair seems inverse, I would suggest thinking about how light would shine on the person rather than coloring it. The black line on her right bicep looks out of place, considering how thin her other arm is, if nothing else you should've made it a very dark brown. Her breasts look odd, very lopsided. Head seems large for the body. Overall it's improvement . I would suggest Posting all your work in one thread, since you seem to be doing it so often. At least until a thread dies out. Just to keep the board abit cleaner =]. | |||
Apophis Ropa Since: 11-17-05 Last post: 6431 days Last view: 6430 days |
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her left tit is bigger... | |||
Clockworkz Birdon Since: 11-18-05 Last post: 6430 days Last view: 6430 days |
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D'oh >.o Now I gotta fix shit again
I'm very VERY ocd about my artwork. I'll try to patch it up a bit. |
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Tarale 2710 Affected by 'Princess Bitch-Face Syndrome' ++++!! Persona non grata Since: 11-17-05 From: Adelaide, Australia Last post: 6430 days Last view: 6430 days |
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I'd remove some of the line detail from the hand and also from the arms. I get the impression you are trying to show muscle tone; but I think for a girl it's best to do it with shading and not linework (softer looking).
Coloring is good, and it's good to see you experimenting with line width/heaviness too. |
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Clockworkz Birdon Since: 11-18-05 Last post: 6430 days Last view: 6430 days |
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I took your advice, but...
Is there any way to select and free transform several layers at once? Using Photoshop 6, and I don't feel like completely redoing the head. I just wanna resize it. Advice, please? |
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