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1239 Newcomer                Since: 04-11-06 Last post: 6641 days Last view: 6641 days |
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Hey what's sup folks... I'm a first time writer, long time reader. Well not really but I always wanted to say that  . Anyways here are some sprites. I'm looking for some feedback, some C&C would be great!
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MathOnNapkins  1100  In SPC700 HELL     Since: 11-18-05 Last post: 6328 days Last view: 6327 days |
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| I don't usually visit the Modern Art forum, but I'm happy I chanced upon your thread. I'd have to say I really like these sprites. They have good shading (certainly not amateur shading like I would do). I also like that the graphics show off diverse character traits. The girl looks shy and innocent, the white haired guy looks tense and reserved, and the red haired guy with the belt looks like a straightforward, frank, and confident person.
I will say this though, the red guy's belt has too little contrast. It just looks like a big white hold in his abdomen to me due to the light brown outline of the buckle. Perhaps you can find a way to shade it so it is more clear that it is a buckle. You might even eliminate the outline and fill in other details there. Same thing goes for the white haired guy, it looks like he's wearing a metal armored speedo based on how he's standing. It doesn't help that his shirt is white, which matches the buckle. The girl.... I can't tell if she's wearing a dress but again it looks like a giant white vacuum in her abdomen. I'm not sure what kind of look you were going for but it needs a little less contrast so we can tell what it is. It almost looks like her legs are a big green doughnut. edit: well I noticed she may be doing a curtsy (sp?) but I think the white is ill advised. Use a light shade of green if that's what you intended to portray. (edited by MathOnNapkins on 04-11-06 08:40 AM) |
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insectduel Lantern Ghost Not welcome here anymore.  Since: 11-18-05 From: Bronx, New York Last post: 6571 days Last view: 6365 days |
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Originally posted by macubex That Sprite reminds me of Marik Ishtar |
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Cruel Justice I have better things to do. Since: 11-18-05 From: At my house! Last post: 6328 days Last view: 6328 days |
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Those guys look like hobbitses! 
I want to pick them up and pet their fuzzy bulbous heads! |
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1239 Newcomer Since: 04-11-06 Last post: 6641 days Last view: 6641 days |
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| Wow, been to a few sites and that is probablly the best suggestions I got so far out of the very FEW that were given. Anyways, you are right, I never noticed the belt buckle issue and the girl look odd too me from the beginning, couldn't put my finger on it. I'll adjust them and repost them later. |
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