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Acmlm's Board - I3 Archive - Modern Art - WIP (Potentially NSFW. Female Nudity) UPDATED 13/03/06 | New poll | | |
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Tarale 2710 Affected by 'Princess Bitch-Face Syndrome' ++++!! Persona non grata Since: 11-17-05 From: Adelaide, Australia Last post: 6313 days Last view: 6313 days |
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I found a use for the webhost on my gateway at home.
Dumping of WIP Pictures! currently I seem to be drawing... random nekkid chick. I have a problem. I keep drawing pictures where I just work on anatomy. Not happy with many things so far... like hands... feet... and thighs.... but I kinda want to keep working on that stuff, maybe one day I'll be good at anatomy. I also need to remember to put clothes on sketches at a rough stage rather than get carried away in my desire to learn anatomy... I keep winding up with nekkidness lately. |
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Kyoufu Kawa Intends to keep Rom Hacking in one piece until the end Since: 11-18-05 From: Catgirl Central Station Last post: 6313 days Last view: 6313 days |
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Noise... I see little to no anatomy problems here. | |||
D 2007 D Since: 02-19-06 Last post: 6361 days Last view: 6361 days |
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Originally posted by Tarale I nickname her Random McRanders. The thumb improved from the last time I saw it -- the hand overall, too -- but it still looks a bit pointed. The bottom foot also seems a bit twisted, but aside from that it looks very good. |
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LizardKing Bullet Bill Since: 11-18-05 Last post: 6317 days Last view: 6313 days |
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First thing that hit me was that her head looks to small. | |||
Iori Yagami Hardhat Beetle Since: 11-18-05 From: Hell's keeper Last post: 6520 days Last view: 6520 days |
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Head's too small and bottom foot(not the foot she's sitting on) is awkward from all that I can see wrong with the pic. | |||
mattp Red Paratroopa Since: 03-04-06 Last post: 6578 days Last view: 6578 days |
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The whole... top left ( our left ) shoulder is really odd looking. | |||
Tarale 2710 Affected by 'Princess Bitch-Face Syndrome' ++++!! Persona non grata Since: 11-17-05 From: Adelaide, Australia Last post: 6313 days Last view: 6313 days |
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Thanks for your comments guys -- are any of you able to be any more specific though?
I think I know why the foot looks twisted; I'm having trouble with the placement of the toes so they overlap properly but still look right. o.o I think that one's just a matter of fine tuning as is the hand resting on her thigh. (I tend to go over things multiple times till I'm happy with it, and I think that's one of those things that will improve each time I go over it and over it) I need to know more specifically what's wrong with the shoulder as it looks fine to me. The way she's sitting she would be in a contrapposto pose; so I've made sure to align the shoulders and hips thusly... is it the angle or is it something else? And yeah, I wouldn't be surprised if the head's still too small. I have problems with that I guess -- I used to draw them FAR too big and now I've been trying to correct that with... mixed results. :-/ I've already made a few corrections to head-size but the beauty of digital artwork is I can play silly-buggers in Photoshop and correct it some more fairly easily |
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Iori Yagami Hardhat Beetle Since: 11-18-05 From: Hell's keeper Last post: 6520 days Last view: 6520 days |
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If you want some tutorial help with stuff or just to look at some. Here's a good site. http://www.polykarbon.com/tutorials/ | |||
Tarale 2710 Affected by 'Princess Bitch-Face Syndrome' ++++!! Persona non grata Since: 11-17-05 From: Adelaide, Australia Last post: 6313 days Last view: 6313 days |
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Yeah, I've seen the polykarbon stuff before, but to be really honest I don't find it very helpful at all. The stuff on hands and feet isn't all that helpful really :-/ That said, it's hard to find a good tutorial on hands full stop, and I gave up on tutorials long ago....
EDIT : Thanks to the magic of Photoshop, VPN, Remote Desktop Protocol and FTP, I have done a real dodgy and fixed the head size. It's obvious what I've done... but I think the size itself is better and I can fix it up later (edited by Tarale on 03-09-06 02:22 AM) (edited by Tarale on 03-09-06 02:22 AM) |
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Tarale 2710 Affected by 'Princess Bitch-Face Syndrome' ++++!! Persona non grata Since: 11-17-05 From: Adelaide, Australia Last post: 6313 days Last view: 6313 days |
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... uh... comments on the updated pic...anyone? o.o I've made many changes... | |||
Tripcode Mel (USER WAS TOTALLY AWESOME FOR THIS POST) Since: 11-18-05 From: さげMOTHERFUCKER DO YOU SPEAK IT Last post: 6318 days Last view: 6318 days |
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Something about her right boob seems funny. |
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