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Tarale

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Affected by 'Princess Bitch-Face Syndrome' ++++!!
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Since: 11-17-05
From: Adelaide, Australia

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Posted on 03-08-06 08:13 AM Link | Quote
I found a use for the webhost on my gateway at home.

Dumping of WIP Pictures!

currently I seem to be drawing... random nekkid chick.

I have a problem. I keep drawing pictures where I just work on anatomy. Not happy with many things so far... like hands... feet... and thighs.... but I kinda want to keep working on that stuff, maybe one day I'll be good at anatomy.

I also need to remember to put clothes on sketches at a rough stage rather than get carried away in my desire to learn anatomy... I keep winding up with nekkidness lately.

Kyoufu Kawa
Intends to keep Rom Hacking in one piece until the end








Since: 11-18-05
From: Catgirl Central Station

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Posted on 03-08-06 01:31 PM Link | Quote
Noise... I see little to no anatomy problems here.
D 2007
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Since: 02-19-06

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Posted on 03-08-06 01:33 PM Link | Quote
Originally posted by Tarale
I found a use for the webhost on my gateway at home.

Dumping of WIP Pictures!

currently I seem to be drawing... random nekkid chick.

I have a problem. I keep drawing pictures where I just work on anatomy. Not happy with many things so far... like hands... feet... and thighs.... but I kinda want to keep working on that stuff, maybe one day I'll be good at anatomy.

I also need to remember to put clothes on sketches at a rough stage rather than get carried away in my desire to learn anatomy... I keep winding up with nekkidness lately.



I nickname her Random McRanders.

The thumb improved from the last time I saw it -- the hand overall, too -- but it still looks a bit pointed.

The bottom foot also seems a bit twisted, but aside from that it looks very good.
LizardKing

Bullet Bill








Since: 11-18-05

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Posted on 03-08-06 03:20 PM Link | Quote
First thing that hit me was that her head looks to small.
Iori Yagami

Hardhat Beetle








Since: 11-18-05
From: Hell's keeper

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Posted on 03-08-06 04:07 PM Link | Quote
Head's too small and bottom foot(not the foot she's sitting on) is awkward from all that I can see wrong with the pic.
mattp

Red Paratroopa


 





Since: 03-04-06

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Posted on 03-08-06 06:47 PM Link | Quote
The whole... top left ( our left ) shoulder is really odd looking.
Tarale

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Since: 11-17-05
From: Adelaide, Australia

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Posted on 03-08-06 07:47 PM Link | Quote
Thanks for your comments guys -- are any of you able to be any more specific though?

I think I know why the foot looks twisted; I'm having trouble with the placement of the toes so they overlap properly but still look right. o.o I think that one's just a matter of fine tuning as is the hand resting on her thigh. (I tend to go over things multiple times till I'm happy with it, and I think that's one of those things that will improve each time I go over it and over it)

I need to know more specifically what's wrong with the shoulder as it looks fine to me. The way she's sitting she would be in a contrapposto pose; so I've made sure to align the shoulders and hips thusly... is it the angle or is it something else?

And yeah, I wouldn't be surprised if the head's still too small. I have problems with that I guess -- I used to draw them FAR too big and now I've been trying to correct that with... mixed results. :-/ I've already made a few corrections to head-size but the beauty of digital artwork is I can play silly-buggers in Photoshop and correct it some more fairly easily
Iori Yagami

Hardhat Beetle








Since: 11-18-05
From: Hell's keeper

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Posted on 03-08-06 11:10 PM Link | Quote
If you want some tutorial help with stuff or just to look at some. Here's a good site. http://www.polykarbon.com/tutorials/
Tarale

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Since: 11-17-05
From: Adelaide, Australia

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Posted on 03-08-06 11:45 PM Link | Quote
Yeah, I've seen the polykarbon stuff before, but to be really honest I don't find it very helpful at all. The stuff on hands and feet isn't all that helpful really :-/ That said, it's hard to find a good tutorial on hands full stop, and I gave up on tutorials long ago....

EDIT : Thanks to the magic of Photoshop, VPN, Remote Desktop Protocol and FTP, I have done a real dodgy and fixed the head size. It's obvious what I've done... but I think the size itself is better and I can fix it up later


(edited by Tarale on 03-09-06 02:22 AM)
(edited by Tarale on 03-09-06 02:22 AM)
Tarale

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Affected by 'Princess Bitch-Face Syndrome' ++++!!
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Since: 11-17-05
From: Adelaide, Australia

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Posted on 03-12-06 11:00 PM Link | Quote
... uh... comments on the updated pic...anyone? o.o I've made many changes...
Tripcode Mel
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Since: 11-18-05
From: さげMOTHERFUCKER DO YOU SPEAK IT

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Posted on 03-13-06 04:46 AM Link | Quote
Something about her right boob seems funny.
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