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golden goomba![]() Red Goomba ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 11-18-05 Last post: 6671 days Last view: 6671 days |
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here is some new shots of SMEQ
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() you know before i was fbp but my user got deleted so... now im golden goomba |
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The Kins![]() Hoarder ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 11-18-05 From: Hurf. Last post: 6336 days Last view: 6322 days |
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Oh, god.
I can't wait! |
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Pasgeti_;![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() 560 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 11-18-05 Last post: 6361 days Last view: 6332 days |
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![]() Bowser eat moshoom skin he's so evil ![]() ![]() We have a rope a normal pipe and an multicolored pipe... AWESOME[/sarcasm] ![]() Just...... ![]() You destroyed the great smw overworld with your own crappy overworld be proud. |
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golden goomba![]() Red Goomba ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 11-18-05 Last post: 6671 days Last view: 6671 days |
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dont be mad![]() |
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Pasgeti_;![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() 560 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 11-18-05 Last post: 6361 days Last view: 6332 days |
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How to make this hack a little better in easy steps:
1. Fix all spelling errors. 2. Get rid of the multicolored pipe. 3. Fix the overworld. The hack would still look really bad but it would be an improvement. (edited by Dragon master on 11-18-05 09:39 AM) |
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Cruel Justice I have better things to do. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 11-18-05 From: At my house! Last post: 6322 days Last view: 6321 days |
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That's the funniest hack I've ever seen. ![]() Don't jump in the water! Water burn baby! Water burn baby! |
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The Kins![]() Hoarder ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 11-18-05 From: Hurf. Last post: 6336 days Last view: 6322 days |
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Originally posted by golden goombaFirst hacks are never very good. Experiment, learn, throw around a fre hacks as you learn, ask questions. Just realise that your first hacks will likely suck and people will tell you as such. ![]() |
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S.N.N. wtf ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 11-17-05 From: Ontario, Canada Last post: 6327 days Last view: 6321 days |
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I'm gonna assume English isn't your strong point? It's ok ![]() I don't know how you can stick a pipe on the OW with an unrevealed path next to it - pipes can't reveal events. The pipe can't be a level. Unless you're gonna change it, I highly DON'T recommend putting the pipe there. I'd suggest, since it's your first hack, take your time, and learn how it works. Then give a shot at another one, and it'll probably turn out better. |
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Deleted User Banned ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 05-08-06 Last post: None Last view: 6322 days |
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Some of the screens look weird, but its a good try. The best of luck to you. | |||
Andy![]() Zora ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 11-17-05 Last post: 6651 days Last view: 6651 days |
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Did you cahnge the events or just put them at different levels? The vine leading to the green switch place dosn't make sense to me. (edited by Andrew on 12-24-05 10:38 AM) |
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Rain Man![]() Paragoomba ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 11-18-05 Last post: 6457 days Last view: 6457 days |
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My mom could make a better hack than this. | |||
Bloodstar![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() 660 blue boar boobies Fatal error: Allowed memory size of 8388608 bytes exhausted (tried to allocate 35 bytes) in /var/www/acmlm.org/board/profile.php on line 42 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 11-17-05 Last post: 6322 days Last view: 6321 days |
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![]() WHAT. Mario collects some strange thing to grow, eh? ![]() zzzz- what? Don't wake me up now! ![]() ![]() REEEEEEWENGE! *hic* ![]() My first OW was better than this. And that's sad... Yeah... You should look at other hacks and see how they're made. Eventually you'll get better, though... don't quit because people don't like your first. (though that mushroom IS horrible... ![]() |
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Clockworkz![]() Birdon ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 11-18-05 Last post: 6321 days Last view: 6321 days |
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I pray this is a joke hack. I can't believe this. And yes; my mother could make a better hack, as well.
There's nothing redeeming about this. At all. |
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Chris![]() Spiny ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 11-17-05 Last post: 6431 days Last view: 6431 days |
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You have a lot to work on... I see that it's your first hack, so I kind of understand and all. Just try to work more on it. It could be better; really, it could... ![]() |
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Rain Man![]() Paragoomba ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 11-18-05 Last post: 6457 days Last view: 6457 days |
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Being his first hack doesn't compensate for the poor grammar. | |||
Smallhacker![]() Super Koopa I AM A Group Of Officially Frustrated Younglings, G.O.O.F.Y. MEMBER |
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C'mon, people. Give some constructive criticism instead. ![]() |
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Deleted User Banned ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 05-08-06 Last post: None Last view: 6322 days |
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I remember my first hack, it´s name was "Super Mario World: The Tree Red Moons". I´ve cancelled it and it never has published on my homepage. Some levels of it are very cool, with very good ExGFX, but....bah ![]() (edited by andres on 11-18-05 05:56 PM) |
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Kailieann![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 11-18-05 Last post: 6321 days Last view: 6321 days |
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First of all, for everyone who pointed it out, I just feel compelled to point out that many of the better hacks out there have multicolored pipes.
As for the actual screens... ![]() The mushroom sprite is a bad edit, but it's not the worst I've seen (because, of course, I read sprite comics..) Using the paw prints and Ms to indicate the dialogue between Yoshi and Mario is a good idea, but it still needs a little work on the presentation. The alignment of the text is poor. You should make sure the Auto Space box is checked in the editor, and check the preview to make sure it looks good. The spelling and grammar needs work. It should be: "Yoshi: Mario! Help! Peach is gone again. I think it's Bowser. Look at this mushroom. Bowser ate all the skin! Mario: Let's-a go!" ![]() As I already said, many of the better hacks out there have multicolored pipes. That doesn't mean it's a good idea. Move it over a tad, especially if you're using it as an exit. I'd say the level design isn't very good, but there doesn't really seem to be much design. Either move the rope down a little so it's closer to the bottom of the screen, or put something underneath it so that it doesn't look quite as empty. The water level and the mountain background don't mix. At all. Change the background to match the level. ![]() "I want revenge! Meet me in the pipe." Other than that, it's fine. Generic, but fine. ![]() Too much open space. Looks like a whole lot of nothing. The paths on the left edge don't line up. Putting two levels right next to eachother isn't a good idea for your first hack, it can cause problems with movement. The vine doesn't look good. The edges of the lake don't line up. Overall, it sucks, but it's not completely beyond hope. And, more to the point, everyone has to start somewhere, and first hacks are usually not the best. (edited by Kailieann on 11-18-05 07:29 PM) (edited by Kailieann on 11-20-05 01:40 PM) |
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Sparx![]() Waddle Doo ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 11-18-05 From: San Diego Last post: 6334 days Last view: 6321 days |
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Exactly. Fix the spelling, try to make the overworld better if you can, and NEVER use multi-colored pipes. | |||
golden goomba![]() Red Goomba ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Since: 11-18-05 Last post: 6671 days Last view: 6671 days |
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i know... i fix it tomorrow |
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