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morpheus
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Since: 06-28-06

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Posted on 06-29-06 12:05 AM

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This is a ruff draft story line for my up and coming ROM hack oh pokemon Ruby ou fire Red (not sure), Pokemon legends. Anywayz rate my storyline from 1-10. Tell me what you think. Maybe some suggestions Oh and be fair. Please do steel my Idea.
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Ages ago in the World of Roen, Humans and Legendary Pokemon where in peace with each other. The Pokemon were so fond of the humans that they built them a Kingdom, The Roen Kingdom. The Humans returned the favor by building statues of the ten Legendary Pokemon in the corners of the Kingdom. Each Legendary Pokemon statue had there own cities within the kingdom.

Articuno + Suicune= Artic City
Moltres + Entei = Flame City
Zapdos + Raikou = Lighning City
Ho-Ho + Lugia = G.S. Kingdom
Celebi+ Mew = Central Kingdom
(working titles)

Man and pokemon lived together in peace for centuries until a powerful Evil spread the land. An evil pokemon / Human Hybrid named Ujin nearley destroyed the roen Kingdom. In a quick move all of the Legeadary Pokemon joined together and sealed the evil away in a stone relic for good...Or did they?
The Legendaries new that the evil will once again try to eliminate the Kingdom of Roen. The Legendaries prophesized (predicted for those who don't know) that a boy will stand up against the evil and destroy it once and for all.

Atfer The extreme battle with Ujin the Legendaries posessed the statues and promised to never leave the kingdom and to protect it until the end!
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September 6th 2012,

A brillinat scentist by the name of professor Flemming has made a scientific break through. he discovered the Relic in which Ujin was sealed. Heplans to release the evil in to the kingdom and conqure the kingdom of Roen. He plans to do this with a divice used to control and brain wash powerfulpokemon.
However the relc is locked. In order for him th open it he must gather the souls of the ten Legendary Pokemon. If this Happens there will be an elemental unbalance causing drouts, floods, mudslides, heatwaves, eathquakes, tsunamis and many other natural disasters.

You play as a pokemon trainer by the name of Kyru, The Boy Fortold by the Legendaries. It's Up to you to stop the Diabolical plans of Prof. Flemming for the sake of the world!!

Darkdata

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Since: 02-25-06
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Posted on 06-29-06 12:41 AM

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I give it a 5-6

-2 For the pokemon/human crossbreed
-1 Sounds like a bad si-fi story
-1 Why would they posses the statues when they could live as pokemon?
-1 PENDING that you dont do pokemon/pokemon crossbreeds.

Yoronosuku

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Since: 11-17-05
From: Massachusetts is my new home..

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Posted on 06-29-06 04:57 AM

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-10 for the fact that you prpbably won't even make this hack .-. and another 10 for "Please do steal my idea" xP really though. People need to not think so big with these ideas, the likelihood that you'll pull this off is not very high I'm affraid, and you aren't even establshed to prove us otherwise. Just saying .-. the story itself is too broken anyway. Too many legendaries (they arent even that good, sdfdjejhsg) and it just dosn't sound Pokemon like.

Koolboyman