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Clockwork JB

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Since: 02-12-06
From: Melbourne, Australia

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Posted on 05-04-06 10:17 PM Link | Quote
This is the first episode of my new sprite comic, Mushrooms and Flowers. This comic will later feature characters from many games including Samus, Kirby, Sonic, Pikachu and many others.

Episode 1



Comments: Not a very funny comic, just an introduction

Episode 2



Comments: Why has lakitu been ordered to hold back? What are the devious plans of the koopas?

Episode 3



Comments: The plan is revealed! Who can stop Bowser and Eggman from taking over the world?


(edited by Clockwork JB on 05-04-06 09:59 PM)
(edited by Clockwork JB on 05-04-06 10:24 PM)
(edited by Danielle on 05-10-06 09:17 PM)
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Since: 11-17-05
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Posted on 05-04-06 10:24 PM Link | Quote
Not only is that horribly unfunny, it's not even internally consistent.

Unless cake is the exact same thing as tea now.

I don't think it is.
Cirvania

Cyball
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Posted on 05-04-06 10:26 PM Link | Quote
Clashing art/sprite styles= bad.

You should use the MLSS Mario and Luigi, they're much better, and fit in more easily.

Otherwise, good job.
Clockwork JB

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Posted on 05-04-06 10:29 PM Link | Quote
Like I said, it's not supposed to be funny, it's just an intro. And that's the only MLSS bg I used.


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Clockwork JB

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Since: 02-12-06
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Posted on 05-10-06 09:35 PM Link | Quote
Episode 4



Samus travels the warp to enter the Mushroom world. Another introductory comic.

Episode 5



Kirby and Yoshi may be in a spot of bother...
Peardian

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KvSG #193 is up!








Since: 11-17-05
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Posted on 05-10-06 09:40 PM Link | Quote
Well, this is certainly getting interesting.


Yay, Eggman!
Clockwork JB

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Since: 02-12-06
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Posted on 05-10-06 11:53 PM Link | Quote
The multitude of Shy-guys was inspired by your comic Peardian. The Yoshi-Kirby teamup was unavoidable.
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Posted on 05-14-06 04:14 PM Link | Quote
This is getting pretty cool. Keep up the good work!
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Since: 11-17-05
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Posted on 05-14-06 06:52 PM Link | Quote
I usually don't do this since it is stupid to do, but...



And since I felt like I accomplished nothing with this, I'll only do this when I see something that has the same quality work as yours... which is not good.

So far, your 5 comics into it and only the first 2 has a sequential story part to it. Still not funny, though. Its like... you are trying to copy Peardian, Magikoopa Myster, and a whole bunch of others' sprite comics into one. I'm still wondering when Megaman is coming into this as this is so random...

Therefore, when I have to sit here and figure out what happened in the story because you decide to branch off onto a story on all the characters in all the SNES games, I'll lose interest in the comic altogether.

Its best to keep one story and stick with it. Otherwise... ummm... you'll not do well. You could do like Kyouji does and do random things, but... keep it to one story so we don't have to ask too many questions. 2 at the most.

The artstyles still clash, nevertheless. GBA Samus won't work in SNES Mario. Nor would SNES Samus.

And the second comic: a blank frame = bad.

I do, however, like the word bubbles. Although they can only hold two lines.
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