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Thayer Fuzz Ball Level: 38  Posts: 748/988 EXP: 349428 For next: 21019 Since: 06-28-05 Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 1 day |
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| It's great to finally hear the truth from someone who's really in charge. Yay Mouse! Thanks for answering questions that it seemed no one else would answer. | |||
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Thayer Fuzz Ball Level: 38 Posts: 749/988 EXP: 349428 For next: 21019 Since: 06-28-05 Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 1 day |
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All we have in the house is kosher wine, and that's hard to get drunk off of. I drank it excessively once during the holidays. My grandmother told me it was non-alcoholic, which proved to not be entirely true. I wound up with one heck of a a banger of a headache, but was never disoriented.  |
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Thayer Fuzz Ball Level: 38 Posts: 750/988 EXP: 349428 For next: 21019 Since: 06-28-05 Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 1 day |
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As of right now, you've not peer'd out. There are 16 people in the channel, I just woke up, MonopolyMan is rambling as usual, last night we had a massive trivia battle (while I was trying to do some filing on my computer...  ), really fun. |
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Thayer Fuzz Ball Level: 38 Posts: 751/988 EXP: 349428 For next: 21019 Since: 06-28-05 Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 1 day |
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Originally posted by Elric I think part of the problem is that I had to abuse CSS and tables like crazy to get the layout to work right in the beginning. I'll find some type of resolution for this. And yes, even now, when I opened up IE, I could definitely see the problems (I couldn't before though with the first layout I had in this thread  ). I don't use IE, and I wonder how many of the rest of the users on these forums do. I used to have Opera, but all I use right now is Firefox for Internet browsing. I don't want to have a layout though that gets blocked by others, so I'll try to find some kind of fix for this. |
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Thayer Fuzz Ball Level: 38 Posts: 752/988 EXP: 349428 For next: 21019 Since: 06-28-05 Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 1 day |
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Originally posted by Schwa I realize that writing is art, I just wasn't sure if it went here, and I didn't want to see his thread get closed. Overall, it's an okay introduction, sometimes your writing feels stiff, and I think some of the word choice is questionable. And yes, Tarale's right, more line breaks. Some examples: - the flesh of it's victims as though "its", not "it's" - I live, or maybe lived, I'm not sure, this just feels awkward. - government maintained it's hold Same mistake as before, "it's" is the same as "it is", not the possessive of it. - One day, a criminal I think "One day" may be unnecessary, I feel like it breaks the overall flow of your writing, honestly. - refused to give him a small portion of currency well, I realize what you're going for, but it doesn't feel like it fits with the rest of your writing, I'd try to rephrase it somehow, not really sure how though. - found "not guilty" If you're going to use it in quotes, a more impactful way to say this would be "innocent", i.e. He was tried and found to be "innocent", Do you see what I mean? It's just got a little more oomph. - The paragraph where you're describing the criminal and "Death Hand", I think you should re-arrange some of the sentences, it's good yes, but it seems off-balanced, you might even split the part where you mention the governments into a separate paragraph. Anyway, can't wait to see another chapter. Nice job overall, just remember some of the things I said above for your next chapter. Hope this helps  |
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Thayer Fuzz Ball Level: 38 Posts: 753/988 EXP: 349428 For next: 21019 Since: 06-28-05 Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 1 day |
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BlueRobot, it's mostly a place with a few layouts for websites, but I learned a lot from their code. Mind you most of it... I ignored to make my layout on here.  A List Apart, I always found this to be really informative and helpful.  |
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Thayer Fuzz Ball Level: 38 Posts: 754/988 EXP: 349428 For next: 21019 Since: 06-28-05 Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 1 day |
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Originally posted by Clockworkz  I don't think that works somehow. (edited by Thayer on 09-20-05 08:03 AM) |
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Thayer Fuzz Ball Level: 38 Posts: 755/988 EXP: 349428 For next: 21019 Since: 06-28-05 Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 1 day |
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| Okay, well then you suck for not editing your thread. |
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Thayer Fuzz Ball Level: 38 Posts: 756/988 EXP: 349428 For next: 21019 Since: 06-28-05 Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 1 day |
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Originally posted by LegionOriginally posted by Gauleiter Max woot~ |
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Thayer Fuzz Ball Level: 38 Posts: 757/988 EXP: 349428 For next: 21019 Since: 06-28-05 Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 1 day |
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| It might have been your mom. |
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Thayer Fuzz Ball Level: 38 Posts: 758/988 EXP: 349428 For next: 21019 Since: 06-28-05 Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 1 day |
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| Looks like a mashed up disgusting penis. | |||
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Thayer Fuzz Ball Level: 38 Posts: 759/988 EXP: 349428 For next: 21019 Since: 06-28-05 Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 1 day |
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Originally posted by KwanOriginally posted by SamuraiX Oh noes, he's right guys. Acmlm rarely posts here if ever. |
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Thayer Fuzz Ball Level: 38 Posts: 760/988 EXP: 349428 For next: 21019 Since: 06-28-05 Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 1 day |
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Originally posted by HyperHacker Notice that the people who responded, were responding prior to Mouse posting his error, and Atma probably was responding around the same time Mouse posted, look at their times, they're close enough, and that's what happened.  |
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Thayer Fuzz Ball Level: 38 Posts: 761/988 EXP: 349428 For next: 21019 Since: 06-28-05 Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 1 day |
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| But you only had like 3 more than me in the end. |
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Thayer Fuzz Ball Level: 38 Posts: 762/988 EXP: 349428 For next: 21019 Since: 06-28-05 Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 1 day |
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Originally posted by AP Piff, he's added two words that aren't really what the experience is about. It's more about having fun than anything else.  (edited by Thayer on 09-20-05 06:33 PM) |
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Thayer Fuzz Ball Level: 38 Posts: 763/988 EXP: 349428 For next: 21019 Since: 06-28-05 Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 1 day |
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| Honestly, I consider bumping when you're bringing a thread in from another page or from at least 15+ threads down. And at any rate, if you've got something important to contribute or something useful, I wouldn't be too concerned about bumping. |
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Thayer Fuzz Ball Level: 38 Posts: 764/988 EXP: 349428 For next: 21019 Since: 06-28-05 Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 1 day |
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Originally posted by knuck Where I live, most of the time it seems like it's more sloshy with rain and mud than snow on New Year's, seems like we usually get a bit of snow before New Year's, then we get some afterwards, but I don't really remember having any snow last year or the years before. (edited by Thayer on 09-20-05 08:29 PM) |
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Thayer Fuzz Ball Level: 38 Posts: 765/988 EXP: 349428 For next: 21019 Since: 06-28-05 Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 1 day |
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| I've always felt that the body decomposes and the soul goes into a stasis, whereas your spirit will either remain at rest for a time with the soul, and eventually will no longer exist after the soul is restored, but the spirit can also be disturbed from rest, but I don't mean like 95% of the so-called ghosts that supposedly exist, I'm thinking of something else, it's difficult to explain really. :\ | |||
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| I've been trying to find out, but I believe the alcohol content is around 8~14%, I'm NOT SURE. Still looking to find out. | |||
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Thayer Fuzz Ball Level: 38 Posts: 767/988 EXP: 349428 For next: 21019 Since: 06-28-05 Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 1 day |
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Originally posted by FreeDOS Or instead, he could set the "background-color:white;", so that if his image doesn't load, it wouldn't go to a black background. |
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