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Posted on 02-02-05 02:59 AM Link | Quote
Kirby jolted to his feet, and coughed up a tiny bit of blood. He was panting very hard, and seemed to not know where he was. Infact, his eyes were very dialated.

Hooktail let out a blood curling scream. She was not sliced in half, since her hide were made to deal with element. However, the dragon couldn't take the pain. She hurled all of the poor Goombas and Koopas she ate, and stood up on her hind legs. She let out one more roar, and toppled over backwards, landing with a room shaking thud.
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Amongst the puke of audience members, there was one toad that landed quite gracefully, ridding on something pink. He stepped off it and stepped on its end, sending it up in the air, where he caught it. As he turned around, our heroes got a good look at him. His head was white with red spots. He wore a red vest over his jean-jacket, which itself was covering a yellowish button-up shirt and a red T-shirt. He also had on a pair of jeans and white Nike sneakers. Jack spotted him, and immediately landed and returned to normal, the sword vanishing from his hands.

Jack: Dad!

Martin1186: Jack? Jack!

The two rushed at each other and had a hug as one might expect a father and son who hadn't seen each other in so long would have. That is, ignoring that the father in this case was half the son's height.

Jack: But how did you survive in there?

Martin1186: Ugh, I had to sustain myself on what that beast had been eating. She had horrible tastes.

Jack: What about the stomach acid?

Martin1186: Oh, that wasn't so much of an issue.

Martin1186 holds up the pink think he had been riding on. Printed quite clearly on it were the words "Hover board", as well as a Mattel logo.

Jack: Ah.



((Bonus, since I forgot to post the sprite of Jen1186 way back when we ran into her, here's the sprites of both her and Martin1186. You may recognize them, especially with the hints given in the post. ))
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Teddylot kicked the defibrillator equipment aside to have it smack into a goomba. He then patted Kirby on the back a few times.

Teddylot: Good to see you're back in action ... hmm, you look a bit dazed though. You should be more on your guard, or something. People might take ... advangtage ... *pillages* Ooo ... wonder what we have here. *shuffles through wallet* Nothing, apparently! Man, Kirb, you're pretty boring ... except for your money ... which is now my money. ^.^
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Kirby was still panting hard. His eyes were as odd as it was before, though they seemed to be fixed on Hooktail's body.

Kirby stopped panting. He bared his teeth and tightened his fists. A very deep growl escaped his throat as he started walking forward. With every step he took, his speed increased, until he was running.

The spikey headed lad let out a loud yell as he leapt into the air. He slammed his fists onto Hooktail's belly. A strained hiss came out of the dragon's mouth, while a star-shaped diamond flew out of her jaws.

Kirby landed on the ground, restarting his deep panting.
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Grey: "Yoink!"

The detective took off his hat and held it out as the diamond landed neatly inside of it. He placed the hat, diamond and all, on his head, and looked around the room, having taken cover in what seemed to resemble an offline trance for the entirety of the battle.

"What?"
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END OF CHAPTER!

GREY GOT THE STAR STONE
STAR POWER INCREASED
GREY LEARNED EARTH TREMOR
(somehow)

Kirby and his friends have recovered the Star Stone and defeated Hooktail. The
people of Fungeria are now free from fear and worry. Jack was able to see his father again. But, Schala is nowhere to be seen. Where is she...? And will Kirby ever find out he was tricked? The adventure had just begun.


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Far above the ground, the Kingdom of Zeal safely floated by. Upon the main island stood the majestic castle that ruled the entire kingdom. In a hallway, inside the magnificent castle, giant doors swung open.

Mewtwo - ~I am here. Why has Birdo requested my presence so urgently?~

Female Black Mage - I.. uh.. I don't know. Birdo will be here shortly.. so.. could you please wait at the back of the room?

Mewtwo - ~Alright.~


(edited by Kirbynite on 02-05-05 06:53 AM)
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Meanwhile, in an undisclosed, faraway location in Earth's orbit...

A pair of X-Naut Gims, each with dark, flowing cloaks with large red X's emblazoned across the back, and glowing red eyes to match, drag an unconsious Danielle Zeal down a steel hallway, with large windows on each side showcasing a majestic view of Earth.

Her hair is an absolute mess, and their are rips and tears all over her cloak, evidently from the sharpest of yoyo strings. The two drag her by her arms, not even bothering to pick her up. As they reach the end of the hallway, the X-Naut to the left stands close to the door, his optical camera lining up with the small sensor on the door. Moments later, a pair of large bars to the left and right of the door turn a bright flourescent green, and the door slides open. The two finish dragging Danielle into a lavish, well-furnished office, and flop her into a chair. Someone's got rather good taste, judging from all the completely filled bookshelves, globe-shaped bar, and the large desk, complete with big cushy chair.

As Danielle's eyelids begin to flicker, a large painting behind the desk slides up into the ceiling, revealing the exact figure depicted in the portrait -- Edward M. Hashimoto. His black trenchcoat floats out behind him, ripping in the nonexistent wind, and his rectangular sunglasses shine as dangerously as ever.


Edgar: Wakey wakey! Did you miss me, hmm?
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Danielle immediately let loose a ball of spit, which splattered as it made contact with Edgar's glasses.

Dani - I never thought I'd ever see YOU again. What do you want? I've got more important things to do than be dragged around by... :: looks around :: You stole Melvin's stuff again?

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Birdo finally entered the room.

Birdo - Mewtwo! Sorry to have kept you waiting.
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Almost by thought, the loogie stopped inches from Edgar's face, and immediately shot off in another direction towards the trash can.

Edgar: Now, is that any way to say hello to an old friend? And by the way, these happen to be my things.

Edgar began to walk around his desk.

Edgar: Maybe you haven't been enlightened as to the purpose of your visit yet? Well, I'll ask you once, very nicely in fact...

He paused.

Edgar: Where is the map, Danielle?
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Dani - Map? :: blinks ::

Danielle pauses for a bit. She then realizes what he's talking about.

Dani - I don't know what you're talking about. :: yawns :: Why don't you go bug someone else, like Sky, or Melvin?

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Birdo finally made it across the long hallway. She was left with huffing and stitches in her sides.

Birdo - Whew.. I haven't worked out for a bit... :: wheeze ::

Mewtwo - ~Why have you called me here, Birdo?~

Birdo - Well.. um.. *flips through pages in clipboard* I have received reports that Kirbynite has run off in a hurry to Rogueport. Aparantly, he's on some treasure hunt for Crystal Stones.

Mewtwo - .... ~And why would I care?~

Birdo - Huh? I.. er.. oh.. um.. I thought you would've liked to give Danielle a present.. or..

Mewtw - :: sighs :: ~Call for me when you have something important to tell me. I am very busy~
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In the corner of Edgar's office, a security camera lowered from the cieling. However, this camera had two lenses. The front of it, where the lenses were, was black, but the rest of its casing was a light grey. On either side there was a tiny bit of plastic that stuck out, almost like ears. It was suspended from a thick rectangular pole, which presumably held the necisary wires inside of it, for none were visible. The usual red power light was located on the bottom of the camer, roughly adjacent with the pole. As it surveyed the area, it quickly caught sight of Dani. The twin camera lenses seemed to gleam for a second, as the camera fixated on her.
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OOC: I'ma give up that there diamond. The whole point of the Grey character is to have someone who's horribly weak in the party. What RPG would be complete without the suck character?
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Moments mater, the back of Edgar's hand made contact with Danielle's cheek, sending her reeling back into the chair. Several large metal cables spiraled out from the chair, restraining her to the chair in such a proper manner as to give most otakus nosebleeds. Edgar crossed his arms and grinned.

Edgar: You see, unlike my archnemesis, I have no qualms with forcing the information out of you.

He promptly began to reach for her robe.

Edgar: Let's see just how long you can keep your mouth shut...

Right on cue, the portrait on the wall flickered, it's image replaced with that of... a badly disguised reploid with a beard, wearing a large purple dome helmet of some sort, with big purple horns on the sides. The edges of a green fedora could be seen poking out from under it. He also wore yellow-trimmed circular goggles, and a large red spiked collar of some sort was around his neck, along with a matching red cape.

Lord Crump: Edgar!

Edgar jumped. He cocked his head around, his hands only centimeters from Danielle's... uh, yeah.

Edgar: I'm BUSY!

Lord Crump: But it's important!

Edgar: Ugh! Fine!

The reploid on the monitor cleared his throat.

Lord Crump: A group of adventurers retrieved the Crystal Star from Hooktail.

A video feed promptly appears in the middle of the screen, with everybody standing around a defeated Hooktail. Edgar grins, and looks back to Danielle.

Edgar: Friends of yours?


(edited by Melvin on 02-05-05 10:41 PM)
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Danielle - Kirbynite? Doesn't surprise me.. :: snorts :: :: looks at Edgar :: Of course they're familar. Now would you let me go? Knowing who they are, you should that they'll hurt you more than usual if you even try to touch me.

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Birdo - Mewtwo, wait.. Danielle.. She's... been captured.

Mewtwo's eyes began to glow several fierce intensities.

Birdo - Hey.. um.. d-do you like fried eggs?

Mewtwo - ~... yes.. But what does that have to do with this? ~

Birdo - Well.. um.. we haven't gone out on a picnic in...

Mewtwo shot a glare at Birdo, which sent the pink dinosaur soaring through the hallway.

Mewtwo - ~Danielle is captured, and you have the nerve to suggest a picnic? I'm going down to this Rogueport and find her myself.~
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Edgar smirked, his sunglasses shimmering slightly.

Edgar: ... They have the map, don't they?

He grinned, and motioned for the X-Naut Gims.

Edgar: Rahahahaha! Your face says it all! Gims, take her away!

Danielle feels a sudden, painful thump on the back of her head -- and then everything goes black. The X-Naut Gim nearest to her puts his yoyo away, and the cables restraining her unbuckle and retract into the chair. The two take her by the arms once more, and drag her off.

As the door shuts behind both Gims, Edgar turns back to the videoscreen on the wall, which still displays Lord Crump's mug.


Edgar: Well, from the looks of it, Kirbynite and his friends have the map. Several units of my X-Nauts are scouring the Boggly Woods for the second Crystal Star -- Do not let them have it! Is that clear?

Lord Crump: Crystal.

The vidscreen flickered to static for a moment, then back to the portrait of Edgar. He pivoted on his heels, facing the door, then bellowed into the emptiness--

Edgar: Shinobi Sirens!
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The shadows in the emptiness began to swell up. The darkness protruded out of the floor, forming three feminine bodies. Color ran up the bodies, revealing skin, clothes, and assortment of ninja equipment. All three of the figures wore straw hats, creating an unnatural shadow over their eyes. Aside from the hats, and ninja gear, all the similarities ended.

The shortest figure was clearly elderly, with the long, crooked nose sticking out from underneath her straw hat. Her grayed hair hung behind her head and sat on her hunched shoulders, and didn't even have the slightest glimmer in any lightning. She wore a magnificent, blue kimono, which only seemed to be a waste of good cloth since it was on such a disturbing body.

The largest figure was obviously the largest one, with her "big boned" body stretching her yellow, traditional ninja outfit to the limit. Her long, blonde, bangs hung around the bottom edges of her staw hat, but still revealed her pig-like nose. Despite the length of her bangs, her hair was still short, which was a shame, since her enormous body could've used some more concealing.

The last figure was probably the youngest one out of the three of them. Her body could've easily been said to be perfect when standing next to the other two. Then again, her nicely shaped body wasn't an eyesore, quite the opposite actually. Her long, reddish-brown hair flowed to around her chest and shoulder-blade level. She wore a sleeveless black shirt with a middriff. The random straps around her body were all red, including the straps wrapped around her silver gauntlets. Her brown pants were very baggy and seemed very comfortable.

The elderly ninja steps forward and speaks with a wicked grin.


Beldam: We are here. Tell me, did the Queen of Zeal tell you where the map is?
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Edgar couldn't help but grin, before breaking out into torrents of evil laughter.

Edgar: Rahahahahaha! Danielle Zeal has grown weak and pitiful ever since she turned to the side of good... She didn't even need to tell me where the map was. I saw it in her eyes!

Edgar stopped suddenly, lowering his sunglasses a bit, allowing the three kunoichi to feel his intense gaze.

Edgar: You certainly did take your dear sweet time in kidnapping her, however. As a result, Kirbynite and his friends now have the first Crystal Star.

Another grin crossed Edgar's face, as he pointed to the door.

Edgar: But no matter! Go! Find Kirbynite, and take the map from him! Show him the consequences of crossing my path!
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((Man, this was the coolest scene ever. ;; ))

Beldam: Kirbynite, huh?

The fat ninja uttered an unintelligent "buh", while the younger one fidgeted, feeling very uncomfortable.

Beldam: You can look forward to a good report from me. Marilyn, Vivian, let's go. And remind me to ask one of the witnesses for a picture.

And with that, the three kunoichi melted into the shadows.

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Dani finally regained conciousness. She looked around and found herself back in her room.

Dani - Ugh... Had those three never casted that odd spell.. That filthy male would've been burnt before he had even thought of pulling that stunt..

Danielle slowly gets up to her feet. She was all alone in her room. She knew the security cameras outside the room would catch her if she tried to escape.

Dani - I can't use telepathy.. How am I going to get a message out saying I've been captured? :: stomps foot :: Argh! Stupid, filthy males!

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Meanwhile, in Fungeria, the group of heros were standing outside of the mayor's building, with the mayor, Martin1186 and Jen1186. Kirby was sitting against a tree, but he seemed to have regained himself. He was quite tired, however.
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Loff T.: So, you killed the dragon. Big deal, nothing we couldn't have done...

Jack: Loff...

Loff T.: What do you expect? The key to the country? A medal of honor? We don't have that kind of money! *reaches in his pocket* Here, take this. It's all you're getting.

Loff T. throws a badge with a large "D" on it to Jack, before returning to his house.

Jack: *catches it* D Emblem badge?

Jack equips the badge. His hair and pants go from white to black. His vest, pant pockets, and even his eyes change from their usual blue to red. His white shoes darken, becoming gray. Even his skin becomes slightly darker. His large, white wings become a pattern of black and brown.

Jack: ... Great, now I can look like my idiot "brother". *removes badge, returning to normal*

Martin1186: So that's what Draco looks like?

Jack: Not quite, but it got the colors right.

Jen1186: I do wish we'd get to meet him.

Jack: Well, I'm sure you can understand his reluctance. You two probably died in his reality. It'd be like turning on the faucet of a sink of bad memories.

Fem: You need to work on your analogies, Dad.

Jack: ... Let's stick to you calling me Jack. The whole "Dad" thing's a bit awkward.

Fem: Meh

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A door on the left side of Dani's room, clearly marked "BATHROOM", loudly unlocks.
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Danielle looked at the west side of the room. She rolled up her sleeves and marched towards it.

Dani - I hope someone's hiding inside. I wouldn't mind taking out some frustration now that I'm not restrained :: snorts ::.

She stepped towards the door, which opened up in a very Star Trek-esque manner. There was a lot of room to walk around in the bathroom, but there wasn't much. There was just a bathtub with a shower curtain, a toilet, and a sink. After a brief examination, Dani found no one, not even even invisible.

Dani - ... Well.. I suppose it wouldn't hurt to take a shower. A queen isn't fit to think when she's dirty.

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Holding his left hand to his forehead, Kirby got up to his feet. He slowly walked towards Fem.

Kirby: Hey.. Let's go see your grandpa. Maybe he might tell us somewhere else we could go now that we have a star.
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