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gnkkwinrrul Dry Bones Level: 39  Posts: 253/647 EXP: 402054 For next: 2717 Since: 03-15-04 From: LYKEOMGIMFROMSOMEPLACE???? Since last post: 81 days Last activity: 40 days |
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World 1 overworld Slippery Bridge 1 (ice world 2)  World 2 overworld  Reznor's Tree Fort (world 1 castle)  Forest Island 1  That's all for now...feedback appreciated. Thanks  |
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Darkmatt Red Cheep-cheep Level: 24  Posts: 140/212 EXP: 75447 For next: 2678 Since: 03-15-04 From: Clarkston, WA Since last post: 9 days Last activity: 10 hours |
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| The hills look like crap in the 2nd screenshot, fix them. Change the 5th screenshot's bg to something else, or make a graident BG. Other then those 2, everything else looks nice. |
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Mariokoolguy Red Paragoomba Level: 13  Posts: 40/56 EXP: 8345 For next: 1922 Since: 10-01-04 From: Florida(somewhere) Since last post: 376 days Last activity: 339 days |
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| My opinions: Overworld Pic 1:The overworld looks very lumpy by tree fort.I give 4 stars.(Wow!) Overworld pic 2:The same as OW Pic 1. Stage pic 1:the hill look like that in SMB3.Good!I give 5 stars!(Highest Rank) Stage Pic 2(tree fort):Good castle!5 stars! SP3:Nice and Tree filled.4 Stars. Overall:21/25Your Grade is.... A- (edited by Mariokoolguy on 10-12-04 02:24 PM) |
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Aioria Boss Bass  Yes I will!! ;D  Middle Ages Warrior Level: 58 Posts: 1131/1567 EXP: 1516086 For next: 61460 Since: 03-15-04 From: near the pneumon ultramicroscop icsilicovolcanoconiosis land Since last post: 19 days Last activity: 19 days |
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| Your overworlds are beautiful, but in terms of levels you have to fix a lot of things: -on the second screen those hills are made wrong. You are using only 2 pices of the hill structure. It actually has 3: the top ^ (1) the area between the top and the 'body' /..\ (2) and the body of the hill [::] (3) You are only using (1) and (2), and forgeting to use (3). Your hills are like this: ..^.. /..\ /..\ /..\ /..\ But they should be like this: ..^.. /..\ [::] [::] [::] So, rip the other part of the hill and follow this scheme I told you. The way it looks now is crap, but if you put the rest of the hill (as i just described above) it will look good. .................................................................................................... -The last screen's background uses a few palletes (only 5 or 6, from what I'm seeing). This means that you could avoid the status bar problem on it, so rearrange the palletes in your tile editor. Remember that you can use from pallete 0 to 8, and you have also palete C (for rows 0 and 1). This means you have a total of 9 paletes to use in each one of the 2 first rows that are used for backgrounds. So, you don't need to affect the status bar. And this 'fix the status bar' request goes for the 'ice level w/ smb3 hills' screen also. (edited by Aioria on 10-12-04 02:42 PM) (edited by Aioria on 10-12-04 03:26 PM) |
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Keikonium Banned Level: NAN Posts: 736/-2459 EXP: NAN For next: 0 Since: 04-02-04 Since last post: 63 days Last activity: 9 hours |
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| 1st Shot: - The vine is messed up. - The level below mario cuts off part of the cliff. Not really a big deal  .- The level to the left of mario has plant parts below it. - There is a plant part on the plant farthest left. - Its going to look weird going right at marios current position. He goes down a cliff and will just keep walking... .2nd Shot: - The hills need some work (palette work and what Aioria explained) - The fish just look odd. Are they custom made? 3rd Shot: - Looks good. - The vine is messed up tho. 4th Shot: - All is good except for "?" box palette. - The lamp needs to be a bit darker its to bright to make it look like its in the BG. 5th Shot: - Coins look odd everything else is good. |
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gnkkwinrrul Dry Bones Level: 39 Posts: 255/647 EXP: 402054 For next: 2717 Since: 03-15-04 From: LYKEOMGIMFROMSOMEPLACE???? Since last post: 81 days Last activity: 40 days |
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Thanks for the feedback... Anyway, I have already fixed the vines but those are old pictures, and also the coins. The fish are custom made...I couldn't find the second frame for them so I made it myself, and I made the fins go a little too far in...Otherwise, I will fix this up.Some more screens... Forest island 2 - first half  Forest island 2 - second half  Forest ruins - first part  Forest ruins - second part...  Tundra wastes 2 (ice world 3)  I swear that's all. I know some of the status bars need to be fixed here too. (edited by gnkkwinrrul on 10-12-04 03:48 PM) |
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Cruel Justice XD Level: 55  Posts: 367/1384 EXP: 1253266 For next: 60923 Since: 03-20-04 From: Darkwoods Penetentiary Since last post: 11 hours Last activity: 7 hours |
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| I LOVE the underwater ghost shot. That is the most unique one I've seen so far. The rest could use some work. Try to use the same initiative you used in that level for everything else, you'll do wonderfully.  |
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gnkkwinrrul Dry Bones Level: 39 Posts: 263/647 EXP: 402054 For next: 2717 Since: 03-15-04 From: LYKEOMGIMFROMSOMEPLACE???? Since last post: 81 days Last activity: 40 days |
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Okay, fixed the snow hills...they look MUCH better now  |
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Aioria Boss Bass Yes I will!! ;D Middle Ages Warrior Level: 58 Posts: 1135/1567 EXP: 1516086 For next: 61460 Since: 03-15-04 From: near the pneumon ultramicroscop icsilicovolcanoconiosis land Since last post: 19 days Last activity: 19 days |
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| Wow I really liked the Panser idea in the last shot |
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gnkkwinrrul Dry Bones Level: 39 Posts: 264/647 EXP: 402054 For next: 2717 Since: 03-15-04 From: LYKEOMGIMFROMSOMEPLACE???? Since last post: 81 days Last activity: 40 days |
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They're a pain to make though...the top and the bottom use 2 different pallettes so the top looks red while the bottom is green  |
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Mario Maniac Snifit Level: 26 Posts: 225/281 EXP: 100860 For next: 1415 Since: 08-01-04 Since last post: 243 days Last activity: 167 days |
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Damn! I was thinking about do this with pansers...bad to me.  Sorry, but I can't see any difference in the new hills image. |
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Cruel Justice XD Level: 55 Posts: 370/1384 EXP: 1253266 For next: 60923 Since: 03-20-04 From: Darkwoods Penetentiary Since last post: 11 hours Last activity: 7 hours |
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| I swear, someone has GOT to teach me how to make my own sprites... The pansers look very awesome. I have some really cool ideas that would go well if I had the knowledge. By the time I fully understand, most of you would probably be tired of this sort of thing... |
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elixirnova Red Paratroopa Level: 22  Posts: 85/177 EXP: 56507 For next: 1843 Since: 04-05-04 From: Midgar Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 1 day |
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| i like your sprites O_o i wish i could do all that maybe im just too lazy... but the levels are very vivid and colorful except for a few little glitches... which can easily be fixed looks promising keep up the good work! ill look at them in more detail tomorrow +_+ im tired now :-P |
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gnkkwinrrul Dry Bones Level: 39 Posts: 265/647 EXP: 402054 For next: 2717 Since: 03-15-04 From: LYKEOMGIMFROMSOMEPLACE???? Since last post: 81 days Last activity: 40 days |
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| Well the hills used to have gaps in them and I put some background hills in. By the end of today, I'll probably have a demo out going up to half of world 2...with the yellow switch palace and a bonus level 14 levels in all. All I have left to do is make the pansers green or red like they are supposed to be and to work out a couple of minor glitches. |
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