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TapTap Nipper Plant Level: 24  Posts: 78/405 EXP: 68995 For next: 9130 Since: 08-22-05 From: Yoshi's Island Current Posting Mode: Spree Since last post: 7 hours Last activity: 6 hours |
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It is 1993, the time of SMW, and Mario has beaten bowser the same way that he always did in SMB1. we now join mario in this moment of suspense... #1-Toad? Comment: Hello! Our princess is in another castle! What will happen next? Dun Dun Dunnnnnn... I have up to #4 done. |
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Setzer Popo Level: 36  Posts: 496/532 EXP: 290182 For next: 17928 Since: 04-22-04 From: Not Florida. because I'm going to sink it. Since last post: 5 hours Last activity: 48 min. |
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| LMAO a mario sprite comic with no background and MSPaint textboxes? YOU"RE SO ORIGINAL IT HURTS | |||
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Shyguy The Original Femme Fatale! Level: 57  Posts: 1690/1998 EXP: 1443008 For next: 42920 Since: 02-14-05 Since last post: 2 hours Last activity: 1 hour |
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| So me up to #4 then!!! Waddaya waiting for !? |
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Peardian Lava Lotus The Uncanny Mario Art Master KvSG #87 is up! No Trouter yet... Halloween's over... Turkey time! Level: 58  Posts: 1420/1696 EXP: 1545376 For next: 32170 Since: 07-01-04 From: before 3:00 - school, after 3:00 - Pearl Island Since last post: 7 hours Last activity: 6 hours |
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The only thing I have to say is try to keep the text from touching the edge of the text box, especially when they're both the same color. Otherwise, it looks good.  |
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TapTap Nipper Plant Level: 24 Posts: 79/405 EXP: 68995 For next: 9130 Since: 08-22-05 From: Yoshi's Island Current Posting Mode: Spree Since last post: 7 hours Last activity: 6 hours |
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| It gets better. Number 2!  #2-Hut! Comment: I don't really like this one. Number 3:  #3-I'm alive! Number 4:  Cupcakes? |
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Peardian Lava Lotus The Uncanny Mario Art Master KvSG #87 is up! No Trouter yet... Halloween's over... Turkey time! Level: 58 Posts: 1421/1696 EXP: 1545376 For next: 32170 Since: 07-01-04 From: before 3:00 - school, after 3:00 - Pearl Island Since last post: 7 hours Last activity: 6 hours |
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| Some of the text boxes aren't pointing to anybody and some of the frames look like you copied them exactly (ex: first two frames of #3). Otherwise they're pretty good. | |||
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NSNick Laidback Admin Level: 85  Posts: 3684/3875 EXP: 5895841 For next: 2699 Since: 03-15-04 From: North Side School: OSU Since last post: 9 hours Last activity: 1 hour |
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| Neither particularly well done nor funny. For that matter, it doesn't even make sense. | |||
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Shyguy The Original Femme Fatale! Level: 57 Posts: 1693/1998 EXP: 1443008 For next: 42920 Since: 02-14-05 Since last post: 2 hours Last activity: 1 hour |
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| Check my comic! It's better by far! | |||
Bella Ludwig Von Koopa You're Gonna Love Me Level: 76  Posts: 2543/2962 EXP: 3891483 For next: 114577 Since: 03-29-04 From: Groovy Way Since last post: 8 min. Last activity: 6 min. |
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| Yeah, I liked the first one in some ways more than others. After, the script kind of went off into different subjects. | |||
Chris Boo Level: 46  Posts: 782/922 EXP: 663200 For next: 48574 Since: 04-20-04 Since last post: 7 hours Last activity: 4 hours |
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This comic can be better. It doesn't look interesting so far though. None of it makes sense to me, and well...if you're trying to make someone laugh, it isn't happening.  A few suggestions though... Maybe suggestions will help.Suggestions: 1. CREATION -- Most important thing. You could at least design your comic to make it look colorful and cool in your eyes and others. What you provided, however, is something I expect to see on a nes rom.  2. IDEAS -- If you're planning on making people laugh, you have to at least come up with some ideas and jot them down on some paper. Rushing through with the comic just to get things done isn't going to really get you anywhere... This is about all I can come up with so far... I expect to see that you've improved in the future. The comics you have so far aren't bad though. Just a few improvements just so that others can feel well entertained by them. |
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Snika Boo Level: 44  Posts: 734/916 EXP: 600678 For next: 10607 Since: 07-21-04 From: Freezing Cold Alaska! Since last post: 2 days Last activity: 2 days |
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| Eh... Nice comics. Maybe you should considered using your artwork instead of sprites? It could still be about Mario and his crazy antics, just with your drawings. | |||
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TapTap Nipper Plant Level: 24 Posts: 80/405 EXP: 68995 For next: 9130 Since: 08-22-05 From: Yoshi's Island Current Posting Mode: Spree Since last post: 7 hours Last activity: 6 hours |
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| I'm not going there. My mario's worse by far. I can't even add shading. | |||
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Cymoro PATRICK DUFFY WILL LASER YOUR SOUL   Level: 67  Posts: 2124/2216 EXP: 2549743 For next: 43129 Since: 03-15-04 From: Cymoro Gaming Since last post: 6 hours Last activity: 4 hours |
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| I'll be blunt. These suck. Stop making sprite comics. You're using MSPaint, you have unfunny dialogue, you're trying to set it up like a movie that's going frame by frame, which really, really fucking annoys me, and (in addition to the last mention) you're repeating already said comments. This sucks. This is the most critical I can get of this. (edited by Cymoro on 10-04-05 08:14 PM) |
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