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Simon Koopa Level: 19  Posts: 102/115 EXP: 30045 For next: 5732 Since: 03-18-04 From: Sweden Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 7 hours |
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I started drawing this last night and I'm quite satisfied with what I've got so far, especially the face. I'm not that experienced in drawing hair but I think it came out alright. Anyway, It's kind of an attempt at capturing the beauty of the female body, it's a bit manga influenced in some areas. I've almost finished it but there's one tiny problem, I just can't get the left hand right. Got any tips or suggestions? |
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Tarale I'm not under the alfluence of incohol like some thinkle peop I am. It's just the drunker I sit here the longer I get.  Level: 73  Posts: 2271/2720 EXP: 3458036 For next: 27832 Since: 03-18-04 From: Adelaide, Australia Since last post: 4 hours Last activity: 2 hours |
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Well, it's looking very very good. I'm impressed  I'm also mildly jealous that you can draw hands, but that's another story  Well, with that hand, I'm not sure what to suggest, but when I put my hand back behind me like that, it seems to bend backwards a little... Your linework is very nice, and your shading is also good. You have a good sense of anatomy. I can see very little that I can think of that might need correcting. The ear seems a little small, and the lower leg also seems a bit... off... although I can't put my finger on why. The rest is excellently done, you've done a great job on chest and abdomen, some problem areas I have And I'm going to put a warning in the thread title; because of the nudity -- simply because we might have some people viewing from work, or school, or with nosy parents hovering behind them For future reference -- if you post nudity in Modern Art (and you are MORE than welcome to) just put a warning in the thread title Cheers. |
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Keikonium Banned Level: NAN Posts: 1818/-2459 EXP: NAN For next: 0 Since: 04-02-04 Since last post: 63 days Last activity: 9 hours |
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It looks pretty good to me. The hair reminds me of DBZ tho... . I have no tips on drawing the hand, except maby make it so its stretched out. Like open your hand as if you are trying to grab something, and draw the hand from the back (so we see the back of the hand. Maby a slight curve so you can slightly see the palm?The only thing that bothers me when looking at the picture is the leg and foot. They seem rushed, and way to thin. I know that sitting on a leg like that should make it look thin, but for some reason it just looks odd to me. Other than that, nice work. I wonder what this would look like with Tarale's shading and colouring. I bet it would look awesome. Keep up the good work, and I hope you get the hand figured out . |
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Simon Koopa Level: 19 Posts: 103/115 EXP: 30045 For next: 5732 Since: 03-18-04 From: Sweden Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 7 hours |
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Originally posted by TaraleThe ear seems small? Hmmm... Didn't really notice that, might be because I've got really small ears myself . About the lower leg, it might be a little crooked in the middle, could that be it? Perhaps I'll see if I can straighten it up a bit. |
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Cymoro PATRICK DUFFY WILL LASER YOUR SOUL   Level: 67  Posts: 1866/2216 EXP: 2549743 For next: 43129 Since: 03-15-04 From: Cymoro Gaming Since last post: 6 hours Last activity: 4 hours |
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| The hair looks a little off, like the strands are in giant clumps. Now, you said some areas were manga-influenced, and that may be one, but I don't think out-of-the-water hair will do that. | |||
Thomas Buzz Blob Level: 26  Posts: 134/298 EXP: 98852 For next: 3423 Since: 10-29-04 From: United States Since last post: 88 days Last activity: 83 days |
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| You are a really good artist!!! I have tried to do drawings that good many times but I just don't have the talent. The best one I ever did was a copy of a picture of Pikon from DBZ. xP | |||
Cruel Justice XD Level: 55  Posts: 959/1384 EXP: 1253266 For next: 60923 Since: 03-20-04 From: Darkwoods Penetentiary Since last post: 11 hours Last activity: 7 hours |
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| Almost done sums it up. I like the movement represented with the hair. Now if you can trace and refine your own picture, it would be excellent! | |||
Danielle Local Moderator  Level: 76  Posts: 963/3359 EXP: 3958078 For next: 47982 Since: 09-15-04 From: RATE Since last post: 3 hours Last activity: 3 hours |
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Originally posted by SimonOriginally posted by TaraleThe ear seems small? Hmmm... Didn't really notice that, might be because I've got really small ears myself I think it seems unusually big.. compared the the rest of her body, they could do being smaller. That's what I see. I also think the ear is a bit small, but nothing too terrible. Overall this looks great, I envy your ability to draw so well. Keep working on it and be sure to show the finished product! |
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Dark Vampriel Lynel "Life is just a dream on the way to death." Level: 57  Posts: 1303/1658 EXP: 1400355 For next: 85573 Since: 08-29-04 From: Somewhere..... Since last post: 2 hours Last activity: 4 min. |
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Awesome drawing and shading. As for the right hand look up tutorials on how to draw hands. Seeing as I'm not good in that category myself.  |
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Ran-chan Moldorm eek, when are they going to stop growing... Level: 143  Posts: 10573/12781 EXP: 35293588 For next: 538220 Since: 03-15-04 From: Nerima District, Tokyo - Japan Since last post: 12 hours Last activity: 12 hours |
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Dark Vampriel Lynel "Life is just a dream on the way to death." Level: 57 Posts: 1315/1658 EXP: 1400355 For next: 85573 Since: 08-29-04 From: Somewhere..... Since last post: 2 hours Last activity: 4 min. |
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| I found the hand tutorial I was thinking of a couple of days ago that can help you out. http://www.polykarbon.com/tutorials/hand2/hands.htm |
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