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tuna ... Level: 3 Posts: 386/2 EXP: 51 For next: 77 Since: 12-02-04 Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 1 day |
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| I'm waiting too. I can't wait to make even more fun of your pathetic paint skills. (it's obvious you're not going to listen either, so...) |
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Shyguy The Original Femme Fatale! Level: 57  Posts: 1305/1998 EXP: 1443008 For next: 42920 Since: 02-14-05 Since last post: 2 hours Last activity: 1 hour |
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| Xk, No wonder everyone adores you. I can see now why you've been unbanned(because of a lousy online tournament). When does Peardian arrive? (edited by Shyguy on 06-24-05 09:46 PM) (edited by Shyguy on 06-24-05 09:51 PM) |
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Peardian Lava Lotus The Uncanny Mario Art Master KvSG #87 is up! No Trouter yet... Halloween's over... Turkey time! Level: 58  Posts: 903/1696 EXP: 1545376 For next: 32170 Since: 07-01-04 From: before 3:00 - school, after 3:00 - Pearl Island Since last post: 7 hours Last activity: 6 hours |
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| What? I'm here. Oh... right. The comic... I dunno. (edited by Peardian on 06-24-05 09:54 PM) (edited by Peardian on 06-24-05 09:55 PM) |
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tuna ... Level: 3 Posts: 387/2 EXP: 51 For next: 77 Since: 12-02-04 Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 1 day |
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Originally posted by Shyguy< Actually, dipshit, I was unbanned for several reasons (okay, more like two). The tournament idea came after playing a game of Literati after being unbanned. So, shut the fuck up until you understand why I'm unbanned. < |
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Yoshi Dude XKEEPER STOLE MY CAR KEYS Level: 79  Posts: 2312/3271 EXP: 4572680 For next: 6787 Since: 03-15-04 From: give me a number folks. Since last post: 3 hours Last activity: 2 hours |
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Ahahaha  WE HAD A SHORTAGE OF TOURNAMENT HOSTS XKEEPER TO THE RESCUE! Magikoopa Myster, you can really do something with this if you listen to what people are saying about scenery. A line doesn't cut it. I know you said it was at the universe or something, so maybe a grassy plane wouldn't fit that, but you can still do SOMETHING. The only way half-assed strips like this work is if the dialogue pulls it through, and this obviously does not. I want to link to this comic Zem linked to one time, about two circles, #1 and #2, just talking in every strip. |
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Shyguy The Original Femme Fatale! Level: 57 Posts: 1306/1998 EXP: 1443008 For next: 42920 Since: 02-14-05 Since last post: 2 hours Last activity: 1 hour |
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Originally posted by Yoshi DudeYeah..... WHAT A HERO. T_T Anyway, I guess yeah. Matbe a blue vortex with like blue disky things all around. Make it futuristic! |
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tuna ... Level: 3 Posts: 389/2 EXP: 51 For next: 77 Since: 12-02-04 Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 1 day |
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Originally posted by ShyguySAR-FUCKING-CASMOriginally posted by Yoshi DudeYeah..... WHAT A HERO. T_T |
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Peardian Lava Lotus The Uncanny Mario Art Master KvSG #87 is up! No Trouter yet... Halloween's over... Turkey time! Level: 58 Posts: 904/1696 EXP: 1545376 For next: 32170 Since: 07-01-04 From: before 3:00 - school, after 3:00 - Pearl Island Since last post: 7 hours Last activity: 6 hours |
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I don't like where this thread is going...  |
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windwaker Ball and Chain Trooper WHY ALL THE MAYONNAISE HATE Level: 61  Posts: 1680/1797 EXP: 1860597 For next: 15999 Since: 03-15-04 Since last post: 4 days Last activity: 6 days |
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| My back hurts, and my tool remains unblown. |
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Valcion YOU WA SHOCK Level: 50  Posts: 904/1139 EXP: 939607 For next: 7710 Since: 03-15-04 From: internets. Since last post: 3 hours Last activity: 2 hours |
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| Too much crap, not enough good spritecomic. | |||
macks Level: 45 Posts: 710/900 EXP: 659955 For next: 209 Since: 03-15-04 From: Sweden Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 22 hours |
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| I'm opening this again. Don't flame. | |||
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Tarale I'm not under the alfluence of incohol like some thinkle peop I am. It's just the drunker I sit here the longer I get.  Level: 73  Posts: 2152/2720 EXP: 3458036 For next: 27832 Since: 03-18-04 From: Adelaide, Australia Since last post: 4 hours Last activity: 2 hours |
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Thanks, Max. And for everybody else, I'd appreciate it if we could keep this constructive, thanks.  Well, my critique. * You DO need to learn how to make a background. It doesn't have to be anything too fancy, but it does have to be more than you're doing now. A visually interesting background will draw the reader in, get them interested in your work. To get a reader to even read your work, they have to be interested at first glance -- and you'll need a background to do that. Everybody has already said it, but I'm trying to explain why it's so important. |
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Magikoopa Myster Lakitu Level: 34  Posts: 149/553 EXP: 238506 For next: 15145 Since: 12-01-04 From: I'm a Magikoopa! Watch it! Since last post: 9 hours Last activity: 8 hours |
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| Thanks alot max! Anyway, because of all the terrible responses, I'm gonna restart the comic. I'm also working on some custom Magikoopa Myster sprites, redoing the colors, and such. When that's done, the new part 1 will begin. Thanks. Oh, and I did do a background, but not for the introduction. It was the empty universe, another reality. I've also gotten permission from Peardian to use his stage. w00t!!!!! |
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Dei* Nipper Plant Level: 26  Posts: 63/412 EXP: 97995 For next: 4280 Since: 06-18-05 From: USA, Florida Since last post: 2 days Last activity: 1 day |
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| I dunno why that didn't make me laugh. Try making a gradient background on the panels like some comics do, it'd make it more interesting. Also, give some more thought into the dialouge of the characters, so it's at least amusing. :/ | |||
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Magikoopa Myster Lakitu Level: 34 Posts: 150/553 EXP: 238506 For next: 15145 Since: 12-01-04 From: I'm a Magikoopa! Watch it! Since last post: 9 hours Last activity: 8 hours |
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Here's the 'new' part 1! I hope you like it... More soon |
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Captain moneybags Bloober Level: 33 Posts: 239/447 EXP: 208968 For next: 20211 Since: 07-01-04 From: the lol land (or in reality sweden) Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 1 day |
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| Very good i only have three suggestions: 1. take away the white around the tv. 2. jokes you cant make an comic without jokes if there isnt alot of seriousness in it.... right now it has nothing appealing except nice sprites. 3. change the color of magikoppas talk bubbble it would give an bigger effect if you noticed it had another color than kirbys. |
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Dei* Nipper Plant Level: 26 Posts: 96/412 EXP: 97995 For next: 4280 Since: 06-18-05 From: USA, Florida Since last post: 2 days Last activity: 1 day |
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| Umm dragon master, he has a black bubble, and kirby has pink. O_o | |||
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Captain moneybags Bloober Level: 33 Posts: 240/447 EXP: 208968 For next: 20211 Since: 07-01-04 From: the lol land (or in reality sweden) Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 1 day |
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| I know but it's a little bit hard to see the black maybe make it something you notice more. | |||
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Magikoopa Myster Lakitu Level: 34 Posts: 151/553 EXP: 238506 For next: 15145 Since: 12-01-04 From: I'm a Magikoopa! Watch it! Since last post: 9 hours Last activity: 8 hours |
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Originally posted by Dei* Uh, MM has a purple bubble. But that doesn't really matter, does it?  |
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Yoshi Dude XKEEPER STOLE MY CAR KEYS Level: 79 Posts: 2336/3271 EXP: 4572680 For next: 6787 Since: 03-15-04 From: give me a number folks. Since last post: 3 hours Last activity: 2 hours |
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| Okay, this an obvious improvement. As dragon master said, if you copy and paste images with anti aliasing like that, try to get rid of them. It's not that hard and will look much better. Not much to comment on the material, but it's just the first comic. Bring on some more. And on a side note, could you make the color of your actual posts different from your header and sig colors? Right now it's annoying to look at. |
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