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gnkkwinrrul Dry Bones Level: 39  Posts: 462/647 EXP: 402054 For next: 2717 Since: 03-15-04 From: LYKEOMGIMFROMSOMEPLACE???? Since last post: 81 days Last activity: 40 days |
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Hello. I haven't been here in so long...been at work on this hack  Here are some screens. A test of Mario's strength...not very hard though.   More of the test.  World 1 Overworld. You are in the future  Yay... Mario's Plumbing Pad...so, his house.  Inside his house...  The burnt cliffs. Burning is fun....  Najaverek Canyon 1 - a deserted dwelling...spooky   Najaverek Canyon 2 - The forested side of the canyon...  Najaverek Lake - Pretty short, but may be hard to get to the exit...   Najaverek Canyon 3 - A place of alagae covered rocks...and yes, you do need to fly with Yoshi to beat it.  Hot Springs - A deep water maze made by a falling meteorite  Outside the hot springs...  The dark spire...Ooo  Outside dark spire...  and now inside.  Sunset Cliffs. Used the underground lava for the waterfalls  World 2 Overworld - the Arid Isles.  And Arid Isles 1 - at the time unfinished, but now finished. I will post more shots when I am done the 2nd world...which I almost am. I took the shots a while ago. :p Oh, and happy birthday to me |
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Sukasa Boomboom Error 349857348734534: The system experienced an error. Level: 57  Posts: 186/1981 EXP: 1446921 For next: 39007 Since: 02-06-05 From: *Shrug* Since last post: 6 days Last activity: 1 day |
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| Looking good! Just one thing-what in the #$%@ is the first shot saying?! It looks like "F You" inthe screenshot. |
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Alastor the Stylish Hey! I made a cool game! It's called "I poisoned half the food, so if you eat you might die!" Have a taco.  Level: 114  Posts: 5428/7620 EXP: 16258468 For next: 51099 Since: 03-15-04 From: Oregon, US Since last post: 2 hours Last activity: 2 hours |
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Luigi-San Melon Bug Level: 42 Posts: 222/736 EXP: 485962 For next: 35400 Since: 03-20-04 From: Mushroom Kingdom Since last post: 17 hours Last activity: 10 hours |
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Originally posted by Kyouji Craw My thoughts exactly  Might want to improve on the Arid Islands OV, otherwise this is good |
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Sketchie Mole Level: 28  Posts: 58/356 EXP: 118351 For next: 12987 Since: 12-27-04 Since last post: 7 days Last activity: 10 hours |
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| The bottom part of the first world map is kinda flat, though. Are you trying to show that it's an island or something? If so, then maybe you should put a beach around it to make it pop out and look more "3D-ish". Dark Spire? Looks very interesting  But the OW is kinda plain. Maybe put some rocks or islands in the water, and put some trees and hills on the cliffs? Same goes with Arid Islands. They just look like patches of deserts that got flooded or something. Unless that's what you're going for, I'd suggest you put some green patches there and here... after all, islands has a lot of water surrounding them, and that causes greenery... The Sunset Cliffs... bleh. The water just doesn't look very natural. It's like... FLOATING off the ground. O_o;; But otherwise, they look nice. And Happy Birthday to you! |
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Luigi-San Melon Bug Level: 42 Posts: 225/736 EXP: 485962 For next: 35400 Since: 03-20-04 From: Mushroom Kingdom Since last post: 17 hours Last activity: 10 hours |
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| It's supposed to be a waterfall. | |||
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Jesper Busy, busy, busy. Level: 69  Posts: 2241/2390 EXP: 2856000 For next: 13743 Since: 03-15-04 From: Sweden. Since last post: 176 days Last activity: 79 days |
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| Not too shabby. I like the Ganon Tower-ish Dark Spire. | |||
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Sketchie Mole Level: 28 Posts: 60/356 EXP: 118351 For next: 12987 Since: 12-27-04 Since last post: 7 days Last activity: 10 hours |
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Originally posted by Luigi-San Yes, I know, but look at the river leading down to becoming a waterfall. Look closely. ...it's FLOATING!!!  It's just not natural  ;; |
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Luigi-San Melon Bug Level: 42 Posts: 227/736 EXP: 485962 For next: 35400 Since: 03-20-04 From: Mushroom Kingdom Since last post: 17 hours Last activity: 10 hours |
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| It is made from the Lava GFX Perhaps it's supposed to be rapids... |
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Sketchie Mole Level: 28 Posts: 61/356 EXP: 118351 For next: 12987 Since: 12-27-04 Since last post: 7 days Last activity: 10 hours |
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| Hm... I'm no ROM hacker, but can you like... move the rapids down a bit so it looks more natural? You know, move the water layer down a bit so the water actually looks like it's touching the rock. Or are they both on the same layer, making it a moot point? |
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Juggling Joker Boomerang Brother SMW Hacking Moderator Yeah, JAMH is still being worked on. Level: 48 Posts: 609/1033 EXP: 811447 For next: 12096 Since: 03-15-04 From: Wyoming Since last post: 2 days Last activity: 3 hours |
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| The levels either feel too empty or too cluttered. You need to work on your sprite placement a bit. The overworld could also use some touchups, especially when lining up your cliff edges. Besides that, you're not doing a bad job with the original tilesets. | |||
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HyperLamer <||bass> and this was the soloution i thought of that was guarinteed to piss off the greatest amount of people Sesshomaru Tamaranian Level: 118 Posts: 3712/8210 EXP: 18171887 For next: 211027 Since: 03-15-04 From: Canada, w00t! LOL FAD Since last post: 2 hours Last activity: 2 hours |
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| Looks neat. A bit cluttered, but also some nice ideas. 1) Maybe a message box would work better?  2) Ice background with lava? 3) The bottom chunk of land looks really flat. 4) Cool, I hope that's not a midway gate at the beginning though. 5) Looks very interesting. 6) Ooh, how's Mario gonna get up there? There seems to be a gap at the bottom though. 7) Nice, but could stand to lose one of the chucks. That's a lot of enemies in a small space. 8) Er, why is there a goal point between those trees? 9) Looks hard. Hope all those sprites with the layer 3 water don't cause slowdown... 10) Nice plant. You did put a Yoshi at the beginning right?11) Ooh, it's all dank and spooky-like. Meteorites don't often carve underwater mazes though, usually just craters. 12) Ball-and-chains swinging off ? blocks? Way to take ideas from SMB3, people don't do that enough. Looks hard.13) Ooh, big castle. Kinda plain OW though. Maybe some rocks, islands and/or boats in the water? 14) Don't suppose you could move the camera up? Being at the top with the scorebar makes it look cluttered and hard to see. Those platforms in the background might be a bit confusing too. 15) Nice. Bowser statues don't really look right on diagonal slopes though... 16) Eh, this looks pretty crappy. The waterfalls, which look more like blue blocks, somehow make 90-degree turns and flow sideways? They disappear into blocks, even. It doesn't look like Mario's swimming at all, and the BG colour is too bright. 17) Those islands look very flat. Not necessarily a bad thing, just that it implies they're barely above the water, which might not be what you wanted. (It is a cool idea though.) Unless it's like a flooded place or something, they should be a bit more beach-coloured. The dotted path going diagonally doesn't look so good either, you'd probably be better using one that turns. 18) Not bad, colours need some work though. Other than those little things (a lot of them, but that's a lot of pics too ) it looks pretty nice. |
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gnkkwinrrul Dry Bones Level: 39 Posts: 464/647 EXP: 402054 For next: 2717 Since: 03-15-04 From: LYKEOMGIMFROMSOMEPLACE???? Since last post: 81 days Last activity: 40 days |
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| Thank you all for your feed back Firstly...the OW is old. I took the pictures a while ago and they look better now ^^ And I will change the lava...water stuff. The background may need to be a bit...toned down too :p It isn't saying f you...LOL. It's saying this is a test oF YOUr strength...I didn't even notice I took a shot of the f you part of it :p The weird stuff around the pics is because I didn't crop them right...left a bit of garbage in the picture. (edited by gnkkwinrrul on 03-15-05 09:57 AM) |
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PumpkinPie Boo! I'll scare your dad!  Big Boo Pretend Moderator All hail the Pumpkin King! Level: 47  Posts: 66/1158 EXP: 718208 For next: 47995 Since: 12-05-04 From: Halloween Town Treats: Many Tricks: Oh yes Since last post: 2 days Last activity: 8 hours |
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Uhm...alot of the time I don't even know what I'm looking at  I like the overworl, but the levels look like they were patched together without care. And yes, it is kind of cluttered. Tell me this: is it fun, though? Also, outside the hot springs - half of that platform is missing. wth? |
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gnkkwinrrul Dry Bones Level: 39 Posts: 467/647 EXP: 402054 For next: 2717 Since: 03-15-04 From: LYKEOMGIMFROMSOMEPLACE???? Since last post: 81 days Last activity: 40 days |
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World 2 is complete! More screens here  Re-done world 2. It was a nice green plain that got overrun with polluted waters :x  Re-done shot of the castle...  Sunset cliffs, redone for all of you complaining about it :p  Arid Islands 1. Its all polluted and yucky :o  Arid Isles 2...  Arid Ocean 1. How can an ocean be arid? I dunno :p  Arid Isles Mansion. Spooky :o  Arid Isles 3. Its a pipe maze  Arid Ocean 2.  And the processing plant, the source of the pollution. Feedback is appreciated |
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Magikoopa Myster Lakitu Level: 34  Posts: 82/553 EXP: 238506 For next: 15145 Since: 12-01-04 From: I'm a Magikoopa! Watch it! Since last post: 9 hours Last activity: 8 hours |
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Looks nice. Ooooo. Creepy.  You still have some pallette problems here. My eyes hurt from looking at it.  It's...ok...do a little pallette tweaking. This makes absolutely no sense at all. A bush on a mushroom? It's okay, but all those sprites should and will cause slowdown. It's fine. Pipe maze! Yay! Erm... yeah. It's ok. It's good. In a pipey sort of way... "And Mario saves the ocean by destroying the processing plant." Pretty good. Is the lava floating? Oh wait. It's not.  All in all, it's good. Kinda. Change some pallettes and it'll look great! |
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turtleman Koopa Level: 16 Posts: 4/119 EXP: 19658 For next: 598 Since: 03-18-05 Since last post: 160 days Last activity: 146 days |
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This makes absolutely no sense at all. A bush on a mushroom? welll it IS a game where an italian plumber goes on a quest to save a princess that was kidnapped by a dinosaur type thing with a spiked shell..... @gnkkwinrrul:looks great! cant wait ta play! |
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Devil_Evilone_RA Tektite Level: 14 Posts: 57/64 EXP: 11455 For next: 1616 Since: 06-19-04 From: Canada Since last post: 18 days Last activity: 18 days |
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I found a few OW island glitches... ...Not that I wouldn't do that, its just that i would look better if you fixed these mistakes. |
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cpubasic13 17 years old now. Time to buy some M rated games by myself! Level: 54  Posts: 915/1346 EXP: 1206934 For next: 26936 Since: 03-15-04 From: Blame my parents, Eddy Since last post: 2 days Last activity: 1 day |
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| You know he made a demo, right? I thought you might wanna know... so commenting on screenies when you could see it in game seems kind of pointless... |
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gnkkwinrrul Dry Bones Level: 39 Posts: 497/647 EXP: 402054 For next: 2717 Since: 03-15-04 From: LYKEOMGIMFROMSOMEPLACE???? Since last post: 81 days Last activity: 40 days |
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| Erm...first of all, which was already said, a demo was made. Second of all, I've already fixed this. Third, you just bumped a thread for not much reason |
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