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Sendy
Posts: 6/93 |
Use paler or darker colours for the background. I'd choose more complimentary colours for the background design work, or maybe even shades of the same colour. It's a really original background, but why are so many of the audience frowning when they are at the circus? |
Orange Pastry
Posts: 95/168 |
Hmm... maybe a carnival or something...
(I guess i'll work on the outside of the tent...)
The koopa's weren't that hard...
I dunno... I'm just a bucket of creativity |
cpubasic13
Posts: 73/1346 |
I like the Koopas. That is one of a kind! But one question... How are you planning on doing the overworld? |
Lemon Luigi
Posts: 67/356 |
Try just blue & white. Or, at least put some yellow & green in your origional pallete, and make the colors darker. |
Alastor the Stylish
Posts: 217/7620 |
Yes, but not by a lot. It doesn't contrast as poorly, but it's still... Not that great. Would be better if you just made it all blue, like a circus tent. Perhaps some people as well, but... |
Orange Pastry
Posts: 92/168 |
Ok the colors were evil...
Is this less blinding? |
KATW
Posts: 248/3959 |
 *lightbulb explodes* Its way too bright! Just like everyone else said.
Maybe a dark red and yellow tent BG would go a bit better with this FG but..... 
Now need to take my contacts out.... ow.  |
Darth Coby
Posts: 231/1371 |
Originally posted by Juggling Joker
Originally posted by Coby
He doesn't really have any black outlines in his BG, or where do you see any? 
I should have said "dark outlines" and it would have made more sense in context, I suppose.
Hmm, yeah. |
Juggling Joker
Posts: 44/1033 |
Originally posted by Coby
He doesn't really have any black outlines in his BG, or where do you see any?
I should have said "dark outlines" and it would have made more sense in context, I suppose. |
Populous
Posts: 11/132 |
Also, background ``watchers`` look bit crazy...
Did you change koopa shell GFX into a ball? |
Darth Coby
Posts: 230/1371 |
Hmm, alright.
*Coby goes to read that topic |
blackhole89
Posts: 48/971 |
@Coby: Follow the capitalized Custom Music Thread - although it doesn't look so, the progress done since its opening is immense. If you're good at composing - wait for release, and then - go on! You're first!
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Jesper
Posts: 137/2390 |
Originally posted by Orange Pastry
Yeah so... comments?
Yup it's the circus
The words 'bad' and 'colors' come to mind. Otherwise, neat. |
Darth Coby
Posts: 229/1371 |
It would only have a real psychedelic effect if you'd add some GOA or other ACID type of music to it. |
blackhole89
Posts: 46/971 |
It's ... hm ... gonna be called |
Darth Coby
Posts: 228/1371 |
Originally posted by Kyouji "Kagami" Craw
I don't know about you, but I have sensetive eyes. Blue right next to red with creepy faces that don't have full bodies just sorta screams out DIE, RETINAS! BWAHAHA
Lol, I guess you're right but I'd have to see it fullscreen to actually judge how my eyes would take it. |
Alastor the Stylish
Posts: 213/7620 |
I don't know about you, but I have sensetive eyes. Blue right next to red with creepy faces that don't have full bodies just sorta screams out DIE, RETINAS! BWAHAHA |
Darth Coby
Posts: 223/1371 |
Originally posted by Kyouji "Kagami" Craw
Yeah... I'm with Kefka, my eyes hurt.
Well, I guess that if you keep looking at it for a long time maybe... |
Alastor the Stylish
Posts: 211/7620 |
Yeah... I'm with Kefka, my eyes hurt. |
Smallhacker
Posts: 52/2273 |
Sounds like a new theme idea! Yay!
I like the screenshot, but some fadings would make it look better. Also, look closely at the people in the background. Their bodies ends right above the next person's head.
Also, edit a person in the crowd. Give him a black moustage, a purple nose and a yellow cap.  |
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