Dark Sorceress
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Originally posted by Trapster I don
Ran-chan
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I don |
Vystrix Nexoth
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that's pretty damn good. the portrait drawing looks to be in good order; her head might be too big in proportion to the rest of her body, and the top part of her hair makes it look as though the top of her head is flat. otherwise the shapes look pretty good, so no worries there.
the full-figure drawing could use some work, though, although it looks pretty good so far. Again, it looks as though the top of her head is flat, but the main issues are:- her shoulders come out too far, and her breasts are too far apart, which makes her entire upper body look disproportionately big compared to her lower body.
- Her crotch is way too high compared to her hips.
- The outer part of her raised forearm curves inward too much.
those aside, both drawings are pretty good, and the sword looks pretty badass. |
Prier
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Looks good to me. Though the head proportion might be off. Looking at it, it seems to be a bit funky...Might be me too though, since creative art doesn't seem to be my strong review point.
It'd be good to see how that is in color though. |
Dark Sorceress
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Hey everyone, I wanted to get your opinions on this picture, I need to know if everything is ok before I decide to ink it. I am making a desktop background for my comic.
I think everything is fine. But the problem is that I tend to overlook things that you tend to point out.
Also, I haven't done much with the shading and highlights yet, just a general idea on those.
Also just a warning, this picture is BIG. All I did was scan and reduce the contrast a bit, then uploaded.
Tell me what you think
http://www.angelfire.com/rpg2/traitor_joe/ScanBG.jpg |
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