Vystrix Nexoth
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not bad. the main problem with it that I see are the shoulders, which droop too far. see those lines along the base of her neck? those are bones which extend out to form the outer corners of the shoulders; in the drawing, the shoulders are way too low considering the angle of those lines.
also, her left arm (the one on the right side of the image) looks quite odd... her upper arm is too short (or nonexistent) and her lower arm (forearm) is too long, and both arms as a whole are too short (as are the fingers).
A visual explanation will probably be more easily understood than a written one:
Her body (shoulders down) as a whole is too low compared to her head anyway, so I've probably drawn the arm too long (shoulders relative to head/neck, elbow and wrist markers relative to her body) but it should suffice to explain where the elbows and wrists go relative to the body, how the arm is misshapen, and of course how the shoulders probably ought to look.
There are a few other minor points (head too wide; the bikini drawn with trim/bordering along the bottom, which makes it look like it's hanging over her body rather than being wrapped between the legs; her right breast (left side of the image) is not very distinct from her chest, shape-wise) but overall it demonstrates a decent "feel" for how the human body is laid out. in particular, her waist/hips/thighs seem to be in good order (although her legs look set a bit too far apart), her right arm (left side of image) seems to be in good shape, and her face and hair look nice.
Hope this helps you in future drawings.  |
