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Sokarhacd
Posts: 593/1757 |
The banner is for the Astaria Online website im working on, just thought I would show it along with the titlescreen. |
Yoshi Dude
Posts: 1745/3271 |
What does a banner have to do with anything?
It's looking better now though, good improvement. |
Xtreme984
Posts: 77/111 |
looks pretty cool, good job Dcahrakos. |
Sokarhacd
Posts: 582/1757 |
Alrighty, here is the new titlescreen, along with a banner for the site
http://gametech.mihopa.com/Astaria/images/Titlescreen.png http://gametech.mihopa.com/Astaria/images/banner.png |
Yoshi Dude
Posts: 1740/3271 |
The flames on the text look completely out of place.
This is more of personal pickiness, but why would blood only appear at the tips of the swords? Is this a game where you poke people? |
Sokarhacd
Posts: 581/1757 |
well, in the center of the swords, will be taken up with the menu so its not gonna be all that blank when I get it into the game, and program everything right.. |
windwaker
Posts: 390/1797 |
Perhaps you could make use of all that black background in some way .
The text could blend in a little more, though it looks pretty good. |
Gywall
Posts: 165/356 |
I always thought blood should be smeared with a few splatters..
It looks quite nice, Just work on the blood bit a bit more, ok?
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Sokarhacd
Posts: 579/1757 |
Well, since many people dont look in the game creation forum, so I thought I would get some feedback on this title screen for a game im working on...the sword I did from scratch, I think the blood looks nice, it was way different, until I made it splattered....anyway. here is a link
http://gametech.mihopa.com/Astaria/images/Titlescreen.png a link because its 800x600 and 238kb
comments/suggestions? |