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HyperLamer
Posts: 846/8210 |
You need to put spaces between your screenshots. Nice GFX, but too orange. |
iamhiro1112
Posts: 32/487 |
Looks pretty nice. So how many levels you got now? Anyway, Hope that you'll finish the game. Cause I like hacks that have non-smw graphics. |
Xkeeper 2.0
Posts: 81/1091 |
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Alastor the Stylish
Posts: 754/7620 |
Ah, I see. Well, good luck to you, then. |
iamhiro1112
Posts: 14/487 |
I know, I just meant I wanted to make another SMW hack that is based off Super Mario Land. Cause I always wanted another one of those games. |
Alastor the Stylish
Posts: 747/7620 |
It's not an SML hack though, that's just it's title. |
iamhiro1112
Posts: 13/487 |
Don't want to take away from your thunder but you might expect some competition soon. I'll probably make my own Super Mario Land hack. It won't have a number in it tho. I doubt it would be ready anytime soon cause I already got a hack or two that I am working on. Just letting you know your hack inspired me. |
Xkeeper 2.0
Posts: 61/1091 |
I'm using the rock wall BG for the labrynith zone.
Those screens just don't have any enemies on them.  (and I placed the enemies already)
The title is in progress... |
cpubasic13
Posts: 285/1346 |
Overworld: Good work.
1st SS: Pillar is orange, ground is grey... not really good together...
2nd and 3rd: No enemies... where are they!?
4th: No background. You should rip the background from that level in Sonic or make your own.
5th: Umm.... title screen looks kind of bland. If anything, make the title more exciting.
Of course, I don't know whether or not the level design as a full is good, but there are some adjustments you should make. Good work. |
iamhiro1112
Posts: 12/487 |
With your plans to make this a Super Mario Land game the hack can have potential. If you rip graphics from the Super Mario Land games anyway. Otherwise it don't remind me of Mario Land yet. There are overworld graphics in Super Mario Land 2 and 3 so you could make a new looking overworld. And ripping graphics from the Super Mario Land 2 and 3 would make it even more kickass. |
FPI Productions
Posts: 4/33 |
About the castle pics: I agree with Aioria, the grey and orange colours don't fit together.
The labyrinth Zone-screen: The graphics from Sonic are great to use at all, but for the screen, it looks very bland. The walls are bland, and there are no things like coins and/or enemies. ( That's a problem with all the castle screens, too)
Ok the level in the Title screen isn't edited I think, it's just the Demo World level. 
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Aioria
Posts: 266/1567 |
Originally posted by skateboarder11
 
1st screen: Awesome! Excellent  
2nd screen: Too empty :/ put some more details, some more tiles |
Kefka
Posts: 2040/3392 |
Sean, I never said there wasn't a diff... I was merely asking for a clarification.
EDIT: thanks, sb/Atma/Chibi/whatever your name is next week. |
Xkeeper 2.0
Posts: 60/1091 |
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seanbox344
Posts: 14/31 |
There is a difference between them. SMW4 started when my site first came on-line. And SML4 was just started by him. There is a difference. How I know because I host his stuff.
Skateboarder keep up the good work. Oh keep an eye out for me, I am starting up a hack myself too. Super Box World. |
Kefka
Posts: 2027/3392 |
Ok, sorry, but I usually associate the word "Giza" with some sort of a desert setting. And it is not that at all. It's a grassy area with icebergs... weird. Very strange mix indeed. By the way, is this called Super Mario LAND 4, or Super Mario WORLD 4? You've referred to it as both. |
Toadeeboy
Posts: 222/264 |
The overworld is good, but something about it isn't right. I really don't know what it is.
The level shots are great, though. |
Aioria
Posts: 265/1567 |
1st pic: if theceiling of your castle is grey, don't make the pillars that orange. The colors aren't fitting too much w/ each other
2nd & 3rd pic: you used only one palete, and that orange is too heavy. I mean, the colors are too 'shockin', meh i speak portuguese, i guess you understood |
Squash Monster
Posts: 104/677 |
I like the overworld, but those level screens were quite bland.
You should add more colors to them. They're just gray and orangy red right now. Not only is it monotonous, but the lack of color makes the two you do have clash. |
Xkeeper 2.0
Posts: 59/1091 |
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