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Wlokos
Posts: 23/176 |
For a first composition, it is very good. Keep working at them - Composing isnt too difficult after you get the hang of it. |
Vystrix Nexoth
Posts: 114/348 |
the first one makes me think of a cave or dungeon or something. the second one is like lizardking said, or perhaps as an ending theme. |
Ramadan Roy
Posts: 176/816 |
They seem sort of familiar, like different towns in an RPG. (hint, hint) But, I really like the way you use the instruments and stuff. It's a helluva lot better than what I can do in Fruity Loops. What program are you using, btw? |
Rin
Posts: 84/112 |
I like them both, they're cool  The first one would be better if it were faster, and had some sort of drum beat every bar or something. Very creepy, my kinda music XD The second one is nice, very good for an original composition. Inspires me to do something like that  I think the second one needs sometihng else in it.. it seems kinda empty or boring or somthing, im not sure! But good job. What do you use to make them? |
ExKay
Posts: 90/1114 |
Make the 1st one a bit faster.
The 2nd Midi is very good. |
tinzeee
Posts: 554/618 |
I liked the second one And its way better then what i can do... i can't even compose |
Clockworkz
Posts: 677/2002 |
Definately belongs in an RPG. Keep it up! |
Xkeeper
Posts: -4588/-863 |
Bleh, part 1 needs a higher tempo.
Then again I hate slow songs so I guess that's just me... ...
...song 2 is just... um... wierd. |
LizardKing
Posts: 93/596 |
Woah, I'd say that's pretty good. I'm not a good musical critic either, but..
That first part sounds like it could fit for a boss battle, or some other dramatic part, methinks.
It could also work in a place were something dramatic or important in the plot is revealed, or something that totally changes the plot. Uh, or something. 
Hehe, but now I'm just thinking... |
Devin
Posts: 41/136 |
*pictures some sort of RPG with Weasel's music and pixel art together*
Niiiiiiiiice. Not bad for 4-channel midis (I'm not a good critic, so I'll leave it at that ) |
Weasel
Posts: 246/454 |
It's not that good. I hate the piano part at measure 7 because it doesn't sound quite "right"
The second one is a little better, but I dunno...
But this is my very first composition Comment on it. What could I improve, what sounds like crap, what's good, etc.? |
