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fbp
Posts: 14/16 |
hey dont be mean to me this is my first hack |
Magikoopa Myster
Posts: 531/553 |
Originally posted by Pumpkinguy
Hey, MM. At least the guy's trying! Give him some slack!
The red on the mushroom edit is bad, though. Try to outline it with red if you want shading.
Sorry, but I was referring to this thread should be trashed before it gets out of hand. I mean, someone should work more on a hack like this and release when all the errors are gone and you're sure it's as good as you can do. Not slapping a whole lot of random graphics together and lousy sprites together and saying your done. That doesn't work.
Sorry if I am sounding like a mod.  |
Skie The Fox
Posts: 108/114 |
Okay, well, I justtried the demo, and it wasn't very promising. You need to implant more gfx into this game, especially the bgs. they're all bare and blank. Okay, let's see, what else can I say:
Levels were almost exactly the same as the original ones, ie Yoshi's Island 1, 2, 3 and the yellow switch palace.
ReEEEEeEEly bad grammar.
And that's just about it. Overall, you're going in the right direction, but... get there faster.  |
TapTap
Posts: 324/405 |
Seriously, MM, just like Pumpkinguy said, at least he tried. This hack really does need some work, though. |
Shyguy
Posts: 1944/1998 |
Hey, MM. At least the guy's trying! Give him some slack!
The red on the mushroom edit is bad, though. Try to outline it with red if you want shading. |
Magikoopa Myster
Posts: 526/553 |
This is so funny. You make me laugh.
Hee hee. 
Seriously though, fix the grammar, the graphical issues and the whole hack. Then we'll talk. I recommend a trash canning.  |
SoNotNormal
Posts: 758/793 |
Your hack is decent, but it's full of minor graphical issues that need to be resolved ASAP, including the two-coloured pipes (don't put pipes on screen boundaries) the net at the beginning of the super koopa level (needs to be fixed) a lot in Up in the sky, and a few in the SMB style level.
Also, if you were trying for the flagpost at the end of the SMB level, don't. I hate to be rude, but it doesn't look very good at all. If you don't want to use ExGFX, I suggest trying to make the flag look a bit better.
Your level design is alright though, just minor glitches  |
fbp
Posts: 13/16 |
http://www.badongo.com/file.php?file=smw+i+hope+you+like+this__2005-10-29_smeq!.ips
here is the new version |
Shane -26-
Posts: 226/239 |
If you're not yet sure on how to edit the OW then don't edit it. You can still make a great hack without a custom OW. Check out the second reality project and you'll see what I mean. |
Neo
Posts: 23/23 |
What about the Title Screen
Use the other Letters where the BG Blue is then it is not Black
And Edit Nitendo to FDP like most of others Hack (if you want)
Edit the Demo too that it is more Interessting not that the most Places are Empty
Then for me it is a good Title Screen |
fbp
Posts: 11/16 |
the koopas foots are ok now
but a little to brown
shal i edit more? |
Neo
Posts: 22/23 |
Now the Blocks are ok but
You should first fix glitches and things and then send the Hack
OK? Or make an New Hack |
fbp
Posts: 10/16 |
i did remowe the yellow from the blocks
http://www.badongo.com/file.php?file=no+yeyleow__2005-10-29_smeqnoyellow.ips |
Neo
Posts: 21/23 |
Like the Others said
Not so Great
Much Glitches
No BG
Bad Grammer
and all other things |
fbp
Posts: 8/16 |
the red thing on the skull is blood |
Shyguy
Posts: 1938/1998 |
Not that great really.
No that's not a hamster, that's a skull with a red...... spot on it for some crazy reason. |
HyperLamer
Posts: 8090/8210 |
1: Blackness behind each letter looks bad. Is that a hamster at the top? 
2: No BG, bad palettes, spelling and grammar problems, and how the hex do you get out of there? Unless it's the new game intro, which is still bad, because in the few seconds before the text appears, you could run off the block.
3: Absolutely nothing exciting here. Not even a background. |
Golden Yoshi
Posts: 689/693 |
Well...what can I say about these screens...they really aren't good. Plain BG's, lack of action, bad palettes around the cement blocks, and bad grammar definitely don't contribute to the quality of a hack. Just from looking at these screens it appears you need plenty of work and tune-up on your hack...try again. |
fbp
Posts: 6/16 |
the mushrooms is skulls and the yellow things is something there didit work
any way here is some shots
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Shane -26-
Posts: 213/239 |
I'll play it anyway. Screens or no screens I don't care.
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Just played it. You have a LOT of glitches. Yellow outline around the cement blocks? And whats with the deal with the mushroom? I could make a huge list of mistakes but I'm sure you know of them. It's not a very good demo but don't give up. I'm sure the next version will be better. |
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