Acmlm's Board - I2 Archive - Modern Art - Actra's Oddysee and other ideas & Fanwoikz
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Dipstikk
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Yerp, most of these guys aren't all too pretty. |
Thayer
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Originally posted by Cruel Justice
The characters look ugly but the composition is exceptional. I'd like to see more!
Well, I think it is intentional that they look ugly, in fact, I'm almost positive  ~ |
Cruel Justice
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The characters look ugly but the composition is exceptional. I'd like to see more! |
Thayer
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Pretty kickass, but I've always noticed, there seems to be something off with Actra in the first picture, I can't quite place my finger on it. It looks disarticulated around the neck and wings somewhat. And in the second image, it seems off somehow, noting where the wings are placed in regards to the spine, I think it needs balanced out a little more, they seem off, it might be an issue where they were meant to show foreshortening but it seems off. I'm not sure if you did this in pen, or if you've cleaned this up digitally. Anyway, looks pretty good overall, but just those things kind of detract from the overall work.  |
Dipstikk
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First of all, I'm Matt. I'm the dipstikk who thought Thayer was my cousin Nick. I'm placing some of my comic ideas here for you all to see.
Actra's Oddysee follows the story of a Noctero named Actra, one of thousands who were taken from their home in the lost city of Nocturnius and forced to work for the Magog Cartel. This was due to a few businesses in the Cartel freeing the previously enslaved Mudokons because of continuous threats from the Mudokon terrorist and messiah, Abe.
*will finish intro later*
Actra: the protagonist. Not the prettiest face in comics, but then, Mudokons, Glukkons and Sligs aren't all that hot either.
Wing detail
Alf the Mudokon
Alf appeared in the second and third games, and is Actra's navigator. He has a quick wit and a sarcastic attitude.
*I have not drawn Munch yet, will add him and bio when I do*
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