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Link2004
Posts: 174/254 |
I just played your hack.It was nice.Since this is a demo, I can't rate this. But my suggestions are:
1. Make your levels a little longer. It had that SMB 3 quick levels feeling thats kind of neat,but could be better.
2. Make your levels a little more inovative with more style, like the level with the dolphins. That whole level felt like this one area in SMW:
Not bad, but as said, improvement is better.
I'm just saying this because I really like your hack and since it's a demo, I get to expect more from this, great job,and keep it up.
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fabio
Posts: 1057/1479 |
You had bad timing when you took a picture of Star Mario. I'll be able to play your hack on the weekend. |
Ringodoggie
Posts: 270/281 |
There's a keyhole in the level somewhere (hint: go up). I'll need the offsets for the castle entrances so I can fix them. |
lags_80
Posts: 87/102 |
Hi, i played your hack, and i found some glitches in bushes and the Fortress' Door, and i have a question, what do i have to do with the key in the Plains 3? Good Job and Keep On Working. |
Ringodoggie
Posts: 269/281 |
Thanks for the feedback everyone . HyperHacker, the plot of my previous hack is that Mario is trapped back in time and needs to find a time machine. He knows where to find the parts now in this hack, and when he gets all of them, he'll return to the mushroom kingdom and then there's a few more levels. |
HyperLamer
Posts: 6645/8210 |
Ah, yes, that is a cape now that I *quack* look closer. |
DisruptiveIdiot
Posts: 129/147 |
Originally posted by HyperHacker
- Title looks a little funny. Copyright text would be better moved up a bit so it's not on the blue blocks.
- I know those messages don't give you much room, but the story needs more detail. Why does Mario need a time machine to get back to the Mushroom Kingdom? Nice graphics though.
- Cool. Better if it didn't show all the paths at the beginning, though. Level name is a bit plain, no pun intended.
- Er... Why is Mario coloured weird, and why is there a glowing green acorn on his head? Also, the water colours look way off.
- Nice. BG is a bit plain though.
- Awesome. Pure awesome.
Silly goose =P He's colored wierd because he is star mario and that acorn is his cape! |
HyperLamer
Posts: 6643/8210 |
- Title looks a little funny. Copyright text would be better moved up a bit so it's not on the blue blocks.
- I know those messages don't give you much room, but the story needs more detail. Why does Mario need a time machine to get back to the Mushroom Kingdom? Nice graphics though.
- Cool. Better if it didn't show all the paths at the beginning, though. Level name is a bit plain, no pun intended.
- Er... Why is Mario coloured weird, and why is there a glowing green acorn on his head? Also, the water colours look way off.
- Nice. BG is a bit plain though.
- Awesome. Pure awesome.
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Link2004
Posts: 162/254 |
This hack looks nice. I'll download it tomarrow and tell you what I think of it. |
Ringodoggie
Posts: 268/281 |
Here's the demo of World 1:
http://www.freewebs.com/ringodoggie/mchron2.rar
Here's some more screens:
A new title screen demo.
The story.
The map.
Level 2
Level 3. You'll need that silver ! switch.
The fortress. |