| User | Post |
Kario
Posts: 2033/2082 |
Thanks Ice Man. Anyone else have any comments? |
ExKay
Posts: 905/1114 |
Very nice, I definetely will remember that one. Good job.  |
Kario
Posts: 2025/2082 |
Thanks for the idea for a title. Thanks for the comment as well. Ya know though, I would rather have 50 people say "This sucks" than not have any reply at all. |
Dark Vampriel
Posts: 1406/1658 |
That's pretty good and as for a title how about "Change of Time." *shrugs* |
Kario
Posts: 2018/2082 |
It doesnt have a title, just tell me what ya think I guess.
Knowing how you were
Seeing what you've come to be
You arent the same person
Yet you dont seem to see
It tears me up inside
Knowing nothing can be done
Your life, your decision
That time has come and gone
I dont want you to see me hurt
So I go home and cry
I cant just sit and watch
As you let the old you die
I ask myself why I care so much
I havent known you long
You would only be a few words
If my life were written as song
I know I cannot leave
But if you want, I will
You could never see me again
If I travel on down that hill
Yet deep down inside I know
If I never saw you again
You would still be in my life
If only written with this pen |
