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Teddylot
Posts: 748/851 |
Work on folds, for they are there ... they are everywhere.
Other than that and your little sword "mixup," it's pretty good. I like the coloring job you did and the mini-comic.
Yes, very nice. |
Kirbynite
Posts: 1220/1366 |
More thanks all around 
I'm starting to wish I didn't point out the sword fault
toTrapster: I actually forgot modems are still being used Seriously, though, I don't have a program on my tablet pc to reduce file size, and PNGs tend to keep my pictures looking better in that format, anyway. Though, I could've shrunk the picture by 50% and linked the real size to my deviant art account, but... eh, too lazy and too little time to do it  |
JDavis
Posts: 738/815 |
Yeah, I see what you mean about the sword... But I didn't before you pointed out what exactly was off about it. It's still great art, man. *thumbs up* |
Cruel Justice
Posts: 1035/1384 |
Sword looks more like a shishkabob holder... everything else is good. |
Ran-chan
Posts: 10757/12781 |
Wow, that looks pretty cool to me. The part of him I can see. It |
stag019
Posts: 186/299 |
Wow this looks great! I think the sword is fine.  Way to go. Great work. |
Prier
Posts: 6916/8392 |
Originally posted by Kirbynite
...I don't know if I'm looking at it at a bad angle, but it feels like the blade is off compared to the hilt.....
[tilts head]
...
The hilt is bent. |
Yoshi Dude
Posts: 2589/3271 |
Like others, I don't see a problem with the sword. It's very nice. I always enjoy your drawings, even just your sketches, and this is no exception. Great work. |
Kirbynite
Posts: 1217/1366 |
Thanks everyone  ;
And about the sword.. I don't know if I'm looking at it at a bad angle, but it feels like the blade is off compared to the hilt..... |
Chris
Posts: 661/922 |
Looks really nice, Kirbynite. The sword also looks pretty good. |
Prier
Posts: 6909/8392 |
I already commented via IM but it looks really nice. Like I said, I couldn't even come close to making that. :\ |
Danielle
Posts: 1230/3359 |
Very nice  ! All your art is great, keep it up. The sword looks good to me, Kirbynite. |
Sukasa
Posts: 1494/1981 |
Looks good. the little comic at the bottom is awsome, too. Wonderful picture. |
Kirbynite
Posts: 1216/1366 |
I debated whether or not I should show this here. *shrugs* Kinda embarassed and rather unsure it'd get attention ;
Here we have Kirby Neo Nite dressed up as Shaoran. Erm, Shaoran or Syaoran, whichever you prefer.
I had just finished watching the entire Card Captor Sakura series and of course.. there's a little CSS business buzzing around my head. I know Melvin would've preferred if I drew Kirbynite in some frilly thing since, well, Kirbynite is a summoner. However, I just wanted to try this out, and try out some other coloring technique.
I still got a lot of work in figuring out how to color right.
And I know I messed up on things... Like the sword. First of all, that's actually the character Nakase's sword. Second of all, I still messed up with the sword.  |
