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Bio
Posts: 31/458 |
Anyway, I got A GFX problem for the Bio world I will need a 'alive' BG/FG
,because I Don't Really Good at that I only Manage to rip Mushroom house and Nipper Plant
A custom GFX would work too
Edit:forget that I have done it myself see
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HyperLamer
Posts: 6154/8210 |
Originally posted by Mr.Nintendo
True.
FYI, short posts like that should be avoided. |
DisruptiveIdiot
Posts: 120/147 |
Originally posted by Kario
The hack looks ok except for the palettes and level layout and graphics.
How can you judge level layout by screenshots? They're only one screen of level each O_o |
Kario
Posts: 1948/2082 |
The hack looks ok except for the palettes and level layout and graphics. |
Bio
Posts: 29/458 |
look like I got a Enormous pallete problem |
Keikonium
Posts: 2055/-2459 |
Maby it's just me, but this doesn't look that great at all ...
1. Snow is good, but the status bar sucks. The palettes aren't that great either .
2. Palettes for the logs suck. Also, the BG and status bar BG are different colors !
3. Will not do. You can barly see anything and it's wayyyy to bright.
4. Make the palettes less bright and this wont look half bad .
5. ummm...luigi?
6. This screen looks interesting. Probably the reason I would play the hack to see what this is.
7. I like the sparky color. Everything else kinda sucks .
8. Really actually like this shot. Make the blocks have a black outline and your good to go.
9. I have iggy as a black color in my hack too... The platform has an ugly palette tho.
10. Horrible. To much monotonus blue.
11. Same here.
12. And again. The greenish BG doesn't help any.
13. Bad. Enough with the blue .
14. Backwards ? block...Mario's back...hmmm
15. Fix the BG palette and this will look good.
16. Bad. That BG is from YI isn't it? You need to fix up the palettes here.
Fix all of your palettes and it may actually look good.
One palette I really like is Mario's. If he had black outline instead of that brown color it would look sooo much better. |
Nintendude
Posts: 16/107 |
True. |
HyperLamer
Posts: 6115/8210 |
Well they can still be dark without being too dark.  |
Bio
Posts: 28/458 |
world 3 is the world of darkness so its normal that they are 'too dark'
and all my pics are strangely more bright than the original
Pic 14 bg is from YI and the black cloud are layer 3 mist
Pic 10 is inspired by kirby game nightmare so anything look the same (FG/BG/Sprite)
note:I don't know how to change boss lava pallete so I have change what I can, the platform |
HyperLamer
Posts: 6093/8210 |
That image doesn't want to show up (maybe because my connection keeps cutting out), but looking at your site...
- Scorebar is miscoloured and wastes space with the 'Dark World' text (unless that actually changes to tell what world you're in) and 'CASH' (just use a dollar sign or coin icon). FG is too bright and purple stuff... shouldn't be purple. People often press L/R by accident, you should ensure it won't cause a problem (you can just disable that stupid scrolling thing entirely). Snow is good, assuming it's animated.
- Cool, but BG is plain and clouds are a bit bright.
- WAAAAAAY too bright. Just plain bad palette, really. Very bad use of translucency.
- Too bright, and vines coming out of plants' mouths.
 Nice ice blocks though, and that green one and the ? blocks look good too. (Lemme guess, Mario/Luigi blocks? Just keep in mind that if Mario enters the level and Luigi finishes or dies, or vice-versa, there'll be problems.) Awesome Mario, too.
- Looks good except for the arrow sign.
- Nice mushroom. BG is quite confusing. FG is too faded, making it look like the BG.
- Same here.
- Nice, I like the 'up to your head in snow' effect. (How can you see small Mario though? And I certainly hope you weren't evil enough to hide enemies in there. )
- An ice block in lava, WTF? Try changing the colour (and graphics if possible) to make the lava look like really cold water. (They did it in Mario 64. )
- Too dark, can't tell WTF is in that cloud.
- Looks nice. This actually isn't too dark, even though the last one was, because the stars complement it well and there's no trees.
- Too dark again.
- Not bad. The darkness looks good here, too; it gives an impression that it's completely pitch black, but still lets you see around the place.
- ...WTF? Those black clouds look like crap, and I can't tell what the hell the BG is supposed to be.
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Nintendude
Posts: 11/107 |
Thats a little bit less than I expected to see. |
Bio
Posts: 27/458 |
Thank, but I getting problem with ExGFX and screen 3-4 are mario house screen
Screen 1 is the world of darkness(that explain the color)screen 2 is intro world
and screen 5 is the ice world,and any color expept dark blue make cliff ugly
New Screenshot Apeared on My Site
http://www.freewebs.com/bio_amiuss/index.htm
one of my level
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Golden Yoshi
Posts: 498/693 |
Screen 1: The green and brown FG really clash. I think you were going for a grass on dirt type of look, I would just tone down the two colors a bit to make them look less gaudy.
Screen 2: Alright, although the hill on top of the island is too square. Nice mushroom rips though.
Screen 3: Really boring BG and FG, I'm not too fond of BG's the consist of one repeating tile. If you're going for a inside-ship-type look I'd recommend using the BG from the Sunken Ghost Ship in the original, drawing your own BG, or grabbing the ghost ship gfx from the ExGFX Workshop (if that still even exists).
Screen 4: Same as above.
Screen 5: I think you were going for an icy look here. The main FG palette on the island looks good, but the dark blue doesn't give off the impression of ice. I'd recommend toning down that palette also. |
Bio
Posts: 26/458 |
Its the first time I'm doing that anyway |
Cruel Justice
Posts: 1005/1384 |
The screens are too bright and contrasty... If you could tone down the brightness just a tad, that would be just fine. |
Bio
Posts: 25/458 |
I have hide a paper mario move related thing in mario house
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Juggling Joker
Posts: 959/1033 |
You're not. I fixed it probably the exact same second he did, but there ya go. The link is up. |
Alastor the Stylish
Posts: 6984/7620 |
Originally posted by Bio
I am doing A bit of my hack Its Called
Dark world:Legend of the Elemental here a link to my site
I can't possibly be the only one to see what's wrong with this post... I mean, the link's not even there, and before he edited it to read that, he said "here are some pics" and they were all broken... |
Bio
Posts: 24/458 |
I am doing A bit of my hack Its Called
Dark world:Legend of the Elemental here a link to my site
http://www.freewebs.com/bio_amiuss/index.htm |
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